Hachiman, who was flirting with Danzi, suddenly received the text message from Kasumigaoka Shiwa on his mobile phone.

"Sister Shiyu?"

Seeing the content of this text message, Hachiman was a little surprised. He didn't expect that proud Shiba-senpai would really come to him.

Although he is really greedy for senior sister's body, he is not Lunya, and he doesn't have any so-called protagonist halo bonus. Even if Machida Sonoko said so, he is not sure whether Kasumigaoka Shiwa will come to him.

I didn't expect that she really came.

But since she came here on her own initiative, Hachiman will naturally not let go of this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.

"Yes, senior sister, KK...ahem, I don't know what business Miss Xia Zhiqiu is looking for me?"

"Although I'm a little embarrassed, I have some questions I want to ask you about the novel. I don't know if it's convenient to put it." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's reply was quick.

"Of course there's no problem. If it's Kasumigaoka-senpai, I'd be more than happy to help." Of course, Hachiman would not refuse the opportunity to show his favor.

Seeing the contents of the text message, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu breathed a sigh of relief.

This is the first time she has asked for help, and the other party is still a junior in the lower grades. If she is rejected, she must feel very ashamed.

Soon, she sent the agreed time and place.

"Then trouble Mr. Biqigu, come to the rooftop during lunch break tomorrow!"

"Okay, no problem, I will be there on time during lunch break tomorrow."

"Thank you very much Mr. Hikigu, see you tomorrow!"

"See you tomorrow, Kasumigaoka-senpai."

Putting down the phone, Kasumi Hill Shiyu lay on the bed, a pair of graceful and round black silk legs were slightly bent, outlining a seductive curve, and ten cardamom-like toes were also curled up.

"I hope this 'Great Teacher' can help me." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu thought silently.

The sales volume of "Sword Art Online" is really hot, and the other party's writing talent is beyond doubt, but the themes of the novels of the two are completely different. Although he can be said to be a genius on the theme of bloody battles, but the theme of youth love How talented it is is unknown.

Thinking of this, the girl gradually fell asleep.

On the other hand, Hachiman seemed a little excited after saying goodbye to Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

Now that he has the opportunity to get in touch with the senior sister, the next thing is to see if he can grasp it.

He has also read the book "Love Metronome" by the senior sister a long time ago.

There is no doubt about the writing style, and the characterization is quite delicate. These are indeed the indelible advantages of this novel.

But the shortcomings are also quite obvious, that is, the plot is too flat, and people can't see the ups and downs at all. If it is just a sweet dog food article, it is easy to make people feel tired.

As long as you work hard on the plot, this is definitely a novel that can become popular.

Thinking of this, Hachiman's mouth curled up into a smile. He had already thought of ways to improve it, and the next thing was to watch the meeting with senior sister during lunch break tomorrow.

After calming down the excitement in his heart, Hachiman also fell asleep.

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At noon the next day, lunch break.

"Hachiman, do you want to go have lunch together?" He came to Hachiman's side as soon as he got off the textbook seat.

Originally, he could only eat lunch alone, but he finally had a friend like Yawata who could eat with him, so of course he would not give up easily.

"Let's have lunch together. I'm afraid we can't do it today. I have something to deal with."

Looking at the excited Zaimokiza, Hachiman felt a little guilty.

But thinking of the seductive pair of black silk beautiful legs of the senior, this bit of guilt is nothing.

"What's the matter, do you need my help?" Saikiza still cherishes Yawata, a hard-won friend.

"No, no, it's just a little personal matter, I can handle it myself."

Just kidding, how can a gang commit a crime like picking up girls.

"Okay, then let's have dinner together next time." Hearing what he said, Cai Muzao couldn't help but feel a little regretful.

"Well, next time for sure, then I'll go first."

Waving to Zaimoza, Hachiman quickly left the classroom.

Chapter 035: You need to add a little white learning

After casually buying some food at the canteen, Hachiman hurried to the rooftop.

Pushing open the door of the roof, he saw the senior sitting on the bench as if she had been waiting for a long time.

A head of long black hair swayed gently with the breeze, and her straight and slender black silk legs shone seductively under the reflection of the sun.

I don't know if you are greedy or not, anyway, Hachiman is greedy, and he was immediately attracted by those beautiful black silk legs as soon as he entered the door.

After closing the door smoothly, Hachiman came to Kasumigaoka Shiyu, with a somewhat apologetic look on his face, "I'm sorry to keep you waiting, senior."

"It's okay, Hikigu-kun, I just came here." Obviously Hachiman's acting skills are very good, seeing the apology on his face, Kasumigaoka Shiwa just smiled.

"If you guessed right, senior sister, you probably haven't eaten lunch yet. If you don't mind, please use this." Saying this, Hachiman took out a pineapple bun and a box of milk and handed them over.

"This..." Looking at the bread and milk he handed over, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu hesitated for a moment.

After all, the two are not too familiar with each other, and she is still quite confident about her appearance. If Hachiman adds something strange to it, wouldn't she be very dangerous.

"It's okay, as long as you pay, senior, it's 550 yen." As if knowing her concerns, Hachiman grinned.

This kind of operation made Xiazhiqiu Shiyu a little unresponsive for a while. If she really made a move to make her eat it, shouldn't it be given away for free?Why do you have to pay?

But this also made her dispel some worries a little, hesitated for a while, and took the bread and milk.

"Then thank you, Mr. Biqigu." He took out 550 yen from his wallet and handed it to him.

"Thank you for your patronage."

After receiving the coin, Hachiman smiled and said, "Can I sit down?"

"Please." Looking at the bench that was still empty, Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't intend to occupy it alone.

With a short distance from her, Hachiman sat down, tore open the package of the bread in his hand and asked, "I don't know if Senior Sister has any questions about novels."

Hearing that he was going straight to the point, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu raised his eyebrows, but he didn't mind: "It's about the plot of my novel. I wonder if I can trouble you to give me some advice."

"Of course it's no problem, senior sister, you can ask whatever you want, as long as I can help, I will definitely help." Hachiman laughed.

"Then I would like to thank Mr. Hikigu." Hearing what he said, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mood improved a lot, "I wanted to write a pure love story, but when I finished the first volume, the first volume But I can’t write the second volume, and I don’t have any clue about the plot, so I want to give me some ideas.”

"Actually, I've also read my senior's "Love Metronome." Hachiman didn't choose to answer her question immediately.

"Have you read my novel?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was a little surprised, she didn't expect that this junior who is also the author would have read her novel.

"Of course, senior sister's novels are quite good. They are excellent both in terms of text description and character creation. It is only natural that I have read them."

Hearing his praise, Kasumigaoka Shiyu smiled wryly: "Although I'm glad to hear Mr. Hikigu say that, but my novels are not selling well."

That's right, compared with the sales volume of Hachiman's novels, her "Love Metronome" can't be ranked at all. Even after it was published, it has only just exceeded [-] copies, while "Sword Art Online" is already heading towards [-] copies. The barrier was breached.

"Since you've seen it, it's the best. I don't know what Mr. Biqigu thinks about the plot."

"I don't dare to say my opinion. As I said, senior sister's novels have many advantages, but their shortcomings are also obvious."

"Shortcomings?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was a little silent.

"That's right, the shortcoming!" Hachiman nodded, "Senior's arrangement of the plot is too plain, the hero Naoto and the heroine Sayuka have determined their hearts so quickly, there is no ups and downs in the follow-up plot .”

"Although dog food is very sweet and delicious, if you eat too much, you will always get tired."

"But what I want to write is a sweet love story..." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was a little shaken after hearing his words.

"No, no, I don't mean to ask you to change the main line, senior sister. You can still have Naoto and Sayuka together, but you can add some additional uncertain factors."

"Uncertain factors?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's face showed a trace of doubt.

"That's right." Hachiman nodded, with a smirk on the corner of his mouth, "For example, at this time, a childhood sweetheart who grew up with the protagonist Naoto suddenly appeared as the second female lead."

"Then because of the sudden addition of the childhood sweetheart, the protagonist Naoto's already established relationship once again swayed again, which can make the plot more interesting."

"If it's not enough, you can add more characters, such as the girl who was rescued by the male protagonist a long time ago and suddenly transferred to repay her kindness, or the big sister next door who grew up watching the male protagonist is not reconciled to him being robbed like this The plot to go."

Hearing his suggestion, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes became brighter and brighter, her seductive legs wrapped in black silk pantyhose also began to shake rapidly, and she began to mutter words.

"Hehehe...the childhood sweetheart came on the stage, then this, this, and then the girl who repaid her favor...this...the big sister next door...this..."

Wow, this is the eccentricity of beautiful girl writers.

Seeing her like this, Hachiman was a little surprised, but he didn't bother her. Although he had no experience of Calvin's pain, he could understand that she had finally entered a period of inspiration, and it would be good to disturb her at this time. sensitive.

This state didn't last long, and Xiazhiqiu Shiyu recovered.

"call..."

Letting out a breath, Kasumigaoka Shiwa looked at Hachiman with some joy, "Thank you Hikigu-kun, you are indeed a writer of popular novels, and you can think of such a wonderful plot."

"Where is it, senpai is too much." Facing her praise, Hachiman was not proud, "Actually, it is mainly because you have never been in a relationship, senpai."

"I suggest that you can read more love movies or novels. The relationship between the hero and heroine is often not so smooth, and there will definitely be various difficulties and twists and turns in the middle."

"This is indeed a good suggestion." For Hachiman's suggestion, Kasumigaoka Shiwa also quite agrees, and it can also enrich her own experience, can't she?

But when he said that he had never been in a relationship, he always felt an inexplicable discomfort, as if he had been despised.

Chapter 036: Advice to Senior Sister

"If you can think of such a plot, it seems that Mr. Biqigu must have rich love experience!"

Leaning on the back of the bench, Kasumigaoka Shiyu suddenly asked.

"what?"

Hachiman was taken aback by the sudden question.

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