How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

Of course, when the black cat unexpectedly appeared at the door of his house, Kazuo would also feel that this guy was looking for Ayase again.

Although I don't know why Ayase and Ayase have the same affinity, because in his impression, in the memory of the so-called previous life, the black cat and Ayase are not said to be dead enemies, and the two generally treat each other as opponents. of.

So now Ayase always goes to Wugeng's house to learn cooking, and the black cat also comes to her house from time to time to find Ayase to go out to go shopping. In Kazuya's view, the black cat will find it very scary. This kind of two people The good relationship between them really surprised Kazuya, especially on the weekend that Ayase said that she shared a room together, the two even shared a room with Kirino's house, which also made Kazuya feel that her so-called plot-oriented.

"prophet"

The effect is basically zero.

Of course, seeing Ayase and the black cat having a good time, Kazuya is also very happy. After all, the relationship between these girls is better than the relationship between them. It is better to adjust by yourself, and it is estimated that Ayase has a more cheerful and gentle personality. It can also change the temperament of the black cat's poisonous tongue. The black cat's otaku attribute may also make his sister let go of her vigilance against the otaku during the contact process. This kind of thing is helpful to everyone, he still Delighted.

Of course, because of playing with Ayase, the black cat forgot about the unexpected receipt of his request for the professor to write a novel, and Kazuya was also happy to accept it.

However, this time, when the door of the Aragaki house was rang, it was not looking for Ayase as before, but when he came to him by name, Kazuya also realized that his good luck should also come to an end.

He Yeto immortality is very interested in instructing Hei Mao to write novels, because he also knows that there are too many problems in Hei Mao's novels. Although he has not created a novel for a long time, even if it is on paper, it is enough to ruthless many problems. Criticized harshly.

However, before that, I was a little bit nasty and also remembered the ancient Chinese apprenticeship ceremony, so I pretended to copy it.

"Well, black cat, you have to know that in ancient China, the practice of apprenticeship was very serious and rigorous. I have to sit on a high chair, and you have to bow down to me and pay homage to me. Dedicated to me some of the joy of tuition.

Of course, now you don't have to do these things. After all, we want to be modern, and this time teaching you to write novels is also the equivalent exchange I promised you, so I don't need these things. Of course, there is another problem. , you should at least call me Master! "

"Senior Aragaki, I still remember the way you looked when you tried to ask me to help you solve your sister's problem with a bitter face. Is that how you crossed the river and demolished the bridge?"

"Cough, black cat classmate, you are wrong, what is your problem now, you think too much of yourself, because you think too much of yourself, so when you write novels, you always think your novels are great , and then you are likely to be returned with a 'rubbish' evaluation by the publisher, and at this time, your self-esteem will be hit.

So, I am asking you to call me 'Master' now, so that you can lower your attitude. If you have this kind of respect for others and me, then you will grasp your attitude, even if Even if the dead novel is rejected by the publishing house, I have the confidence to persevere, understand? "

I have to say that He also has a certain talent for serious nonsense. He is also a little proud of the black cat.

"Besides, there is one more point. You, who used to have few friends, are now friends with Ayase. It's also an unexpected reward for my commission. Thinking about it, you won't feel that you are too much of a loss, right? ?"

"Well, if it's to clarify self-positioning,"

The black cat looked at Kazuya angrily and said,

"Then I will tentatively agree with what you said."

"so?"

"Master!"

The black cat said something very lightly.

"Be specific, be louder, and add your last name!"

"Master Aragaki!"

"did not hear clearly?"

"Aragaki-Master, don't push yourself too far!"

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Flirting is flirting, looking at the black cat

"eager to learn"

He also felt that he still needed some help for the black cat. After all, it would be really bad if he kept pushing back on what he promised others.

"So are you going to write an original novel to be submitted to a magazine now, or are you going to make a certain name in a fan show first and then transform?"

He also looked at the delicate handwriting on the black cat's manuscript paper, and some didn't quite understand what the black cat was going to write.

Black Cat's novel, from the character setting point of view, seems to be based on her favorite maschera, but just browsed it briefly, and found that the plot contained some strange aspects of campus life. content, the protagonist seems to have become a

"ordinary"

A female high school student, which makes He also a little unable to grasp Black Cat's writing ideas.

"Well, I originally wanted to write fan fiction first, but my drawing skills are quite average, so, that—"

The black cat said hesitantly.

And He also immediately understood the idea of ​​the black cat. After all, novels in fan exhibitions that require people to spend time to read are not the kind of attractive things. To become famous in fan exhibitions with original novels, unless you own Have a strong creative foundation, otherwise this is almost impossible.

Of course, under the current circumstances, even a scumbag light novel can sell well as long as it has attractive illustrations, so from the point of view of convenience in gathering popularity, illustrations have surpassed to some extent. The content of the novel itself, which makes it even more difficult to become famous with pure words, it is estimated that this is also a point considered by the black cat.

So although the logic of maschera was referenced at the beginning, it was written that the final goal of the black cat has turned to submitting articles to the magazine.

"If that's the case, I think it's better to rewrite your article. At least you can't make it so obvious that you borrowed and referenced the content of maschera. Although many light novels now copy each other at the beginning, the most typical one is to read Things like naked girls, but there are very few cases of plagiarism in the setting of such magical battles.”

He also looked at the thick stack of manuscripts of the black cat, although he couldn't bear it, he insisted on saying.

"I know!

I didn't think about submitting this article, but I started writing it a long time ago. Now that I have written so much, I can't bear to give up. "

The black cat said sullenly,

"Anyway, give me a good opinion on what I'm writing now, otherwise, I'll tell Ayase that you bullied me!"

"How do you feel that you said those words in Tongno's style?

To know that your cuteness is not here, pay a little attention! "

Kazuya reluctantly helped his forehead and said.

"Um?

Study that arrogant girl?

how could it be possible?

As a noble lacquer who fell from the sky, how could I be like that woman, oh, oh, oh—”

"Uh, although the second is indeed a relatively clear attribute of you, but I don't think the second is a cute point-"

"This is not the second disease that you humans think superficially, but the real punishment from God, don't make a mistake!"

The black cat hurriedly interrupted Kazuya, covered one of his eyes and continued.

"I think it would be cuter if you could show a white cat?"

Kazuya suddenly remembered that the black cat has another stance in theory, and said with some humor.

But this sentence caused the black cat to react violently. She stood up abruptly, took a few steps back, looked at Kazuya with a wary expression, very serious, and even asked anxiously:

"How do you know the status of the white cat?

You know, I have never shown the state of a white cat in front of outsiders?

When did you guys know this?

Could it be that there are hidden abilities in you that I haven't discovered yet?

Sure enough, you still have two brushes! "

He also got into trouble, and it was only at this time that he realized the so-called

"white cat"

The attitude is just because he knew some of the convenience of the plot in advance, and the black cat has never shown that kind of cute face in front of other people so far, this kind of secret hidden in her own heart He unreservedly shakes it out, which will definitely make the black cat a little scared, and those words just now, although the second is full of breath, clearly shows the kind of tension towards Kazuya.

After thinking about it for a while, Kazuya had to deal with it with a haha:

"Well, I just said it casually, look, don't you always wear a black gothic loli outfit?

Wearing black clothes is a black cat, I prefer white cats, so I wonder if you will become a white cat when you wear white clothes, so I just mentioned it casually, but you are true Is there a so-called white cat form?

Will you be wearing white at that time? "

And when the black cat heard Kazuya's words, although she still seemed a little skeptical, she still forced herself to believe Kazuya's words. After all, she also didn't believe Kazuya and knew that she had never talked to anyone else. The mentioned secret, and Kazuya's seemingly ignorant look, although a bit abrupt, is still reasonable.

So, taking a breath, the black cat sat down slowly and said:

"Well, since you said so, I still believe you are fine, but I must tell you that the white cat form is a taboo mode, unless it is a necessary crisis, I will not show it, only in person When dealing with special people, I will use the white cat mode to carry out my efforts, but the kind of person who needs me to devote so much strength must have a deep bond with me in my previous life. It is a pity that your strength is currently It’s still not that level, even Kashiwagi-senpai doesn’t have that level, you know?”

What, the so-called need to pay a lot of power, the so-called fetters of the past life, isn't it a lover?

Kazuo also looked at Black Cat's self-justification and found it very interesting, especially when she knew the hidden meaning of Black Cat's words.

Of course, these words in his heart would not be said to the black cat. If he said these words, it would only make the black cat more nervous, and it would be even more difficult for him to explain why he knew so much.

"Okay okay, then back to the question of your novel,"

Seeing that the situation was good, He also quickly changed the topic. Of course, it seemed that this transferred question was the real topic. He turned over the text of the first few chapters of the black cat, and said with some doubts,

"Your previous novels should be all about magical battles. Why do the first few chapters reveal a strong teenage romance?"

"This is to attract more groups. After all, fights like maschera are still difficult to attract girls. You can see the state of the arrogant girl and Ayase. They don't like this kind of thing.

But the love story of girl manga is basically a take-all for all girls, and I made changes after taking this into consideration. "

The black cat seemed to be prepared for this question from Kazuya, and as soon as Kazuya's voice fell, her answer appeared immediately.

However, Kazuya always felt that there was something wrong with Black Cat's answer, because it would have been fine if she had written this way from the beginning, but this kind of girly-style plot unfolded at a certain stage in the later stage. It was added bluntly, especially in the first few chapters. The so-called romantic bridges are all written in the gaps of each line. At first glance, it is not what was planned at the beginning, and these bridges, It is often some more traditional and outdated bridges, and the echoes with the context are not very good.

However, since the black cat said so, Kazuo also felt that it would be better for him not to point out these problems directly, but to try to talk slowly.

"is that so?

But I think you don't seem to be that good at writing such content. Look at the battle part. Although the problem is still the same, all kinds of German words with unknown meaning, or when you can't make it up, you can release a big move to end the battle. , but from the perspective of the overall fluency of the battle, throwing out the incomprehensible parts of these settings, the battle plot is still relatively clear, and you can also write some unique things of your own.

But these so-called love plots are completely discordant, giving the impression that they are just a patchwork of simple plots and bridges.

I don't know how many comics you read in this area, but from your writing, I think you may have only read a few similar comics and started to make some random pieces, which makes your article There is a feeling of superfluousness, understand? "

"I know that!"

Listening to Kazuya's obviously unpleasant criticism, the black cat nodded awkwardly. Of course, she can't stand the setback. After all, her other novels have been criticized by Kazuya before, but from her kind of stubbornness. It can be seen in her eyes that she does not seem to give up these plots so easily.

"I think, you have a deep understanding of the type of maschera, these things with a strong atmosphere in the middle-"

"That's not the second-"

"Well, these settings are relatively advanced, and the content designed into a lot of magical worlds is more suitable for you to write, so forcibly adding the content of campus romance will only be more inconsistent. I don't think you need to put your own essence in order to cater to some readers. Part of it has been weakened. In this way, not only have you failed to attract readers who like shoujo manga, but you will also drive away readers who like this kind of combat. I don’t think this is what you are willing to do, right?”

Kazuya frowned and said.

"I understand that, but there must be something that combines the two, right?

Many girls' manga now have magic, fighting, and other settings that are also very popular! "

"But you have to pay attention that the positioning of those comics is essentially a girl's comic, not a magic battle comic, and the definition of your novel should be essentially a magic battle novel, not a girl's novel, unless you can write it. The latter is better than the former, but you yourself know that it cannot be done!"