How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

"Ala, that guy Lun also?

Impossible Impossible,"

Kazuya also laughed heavily,

"If you want to count on that guy Lun Ye, I think you might as well count on the other boys in the class who are paying attention to you silently. If that guy didn't have me to pull him, he would have appeared at the bonfire party. It's a miracle, at that time, he was either alone in the classroom sorting out the materials for the animation screening, or he went home early to play games, where would he think of going to a bonfire party with girls?"

"I'm just giving an example!"

Kato raised his head in dissatisfaction and frowned slightly, but Kazuya still had to admit that even when Kato was angry, he didn't look so fierce.

"From the current point of view, I think that the person in the whole class who is most likely to invite you to the bonfire party is me!

How about, if it's alright, how about a visit with me? "

"I said it before, and it will make Ying Lili suspicious again."

Kato put on a hesitant expression, and said with some refusal.

Of course, Kazuya didn't realize Kato's attitude again, he just added naturally:

"That's very simple. Let's call Ying Lili again. If anyone wants to dance, we'll dance. If you don't want to dance, we'll watch by the side. It's good too!"

"Oh, that's good too."

"Eh?

Kato,"

Looking at Kato, who was still talking on his own, although not particularly happy, but generally serious, suddenly picked up the book again, and Kazuya suddenly felt a little inexplicable.

"Why do you feel like you're angry?"

"No, I just think that if you want to do this, it would be better to call An Yi together."

"But it's a question whether that fellow Ren Ye will agree!"

Kazuya dragged her chin and thought seriously.

Of course, before he could finish thinking, Lun Ye's voice interjected:

"Kazuya, come out with me, something went wrong."

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Just when Kazuya was confused about why Kato was a little unhappy, Renya's voice had already interjected, and his voice was a particularly serious tone that Kazuya had never imagined before. , which also made Kazuya suddenly feel that his peaceful days were about to end:

"Hey, something went wrong, come out with me!"

"OK!"

Lun Ye's solemn expression made He also realize the seriousness of the matter, so he no longer sought to tease Lun Ye casually as he did in the past, but simply agreed.

And Renya, who got Kazuya's affirmative answer, glanced at Kato, who was sitting beside Kazuya, who was looking at the two with narrowed eyes, nodded and said:

"Okay, then Kato will come and have a look. This problem should be a common problem for all members of the community. It is a very important issue related to whether the game has gameplay and whether it can be sold!"

"Fine!"

Kato's answer was also very straightforward, stood up, and walked outside the classroom with the two of them.

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"This is some script I wrote before. Although the original drawing of Ying Lili is not completely completed, the overall script content has already been filled in."

In the audio-visual classroom, Lun also took out a CD without any cover, and said more seriously, under normal circumstances, if he could complete such a large amount of work ahead of time, Lun would often show off to He Ye well. Fan, but his expression now is only serious and a little frustrated, which makes He even more worried.

"So, you mean, is this game playable?"

Kazuya took the CD, put it into the computer, and said suspiciously.

"Yes, for the game, the most important thing is to solve the problem of bugs in the later stage. Although galgame will definitely have fewer bugs compared to other games, because after all, it is a simple line selection and text problem, but Considering that we are making a game independently for the first time, it is better to do this kind of bug checking as many times as possible, so I speed up the script and make it out and try it out now.”

"That's not really your style!"

While pressing the button quickly, Kazuya said that the line he is currently on is the Nitta Weiyang line in the game, which is the route of the script he wrote himself, which means that he is very familiar with the content of the route. It is said that there are several options for entering trueend, and he even remembers the specific dialogue clearly.

"I always feel that you are not so cautious, and often play off!"

"This is really not what I thought of,"

Lun also scratched his head in embarrassment and said,

"This is Kato's suggestion, because she mentioned that if we don't try it out, we can't find the real bug in the game, so I try to test it first!"

"Kato?"

Kazuya raised his eyebrows in surprise, then glanced at the girl behind the two who didn't talk much.

In fact, Kazuya always felt that compared to the more engaged appearance when talking to himself, Kato often had a casual feeling when talking to other people in the club, which was also a very strange point for him.

Because in the process of her contact with Kato, Kazuya often has an illusion, a kind of role of Kato Megumi, not to mention becoming clear, at least a feeling of being alive, but when Kato talks to others again, she The so-called distinctness of , disappears, just like a bug that only appears in front of him

"From the beginning to the end, I only exist as a 'heroine', and I can't help you too much. I originally planned to write the script and finally let An Yi take care of it alone. Now what I can do Just to see if there are any loopholes in the club's plan!"

Kato shrugged, and said in a tone that didn't know whether it was regret or indifference,

"But since we can really find the loophole, of course it is also very good."

"So, what's the bug?

I've played it so far, and I've basically passed half of the storyline of Weiyang Line, but so far the game is running smoothly, and I don't feel any incongruity in the selection process? "

Kazuya clicked the mouse a little strangely and said.

"It's not a simple bug in the game program, but a problem that the overall game is too sloppy.

All in all, you will know when you play. By the way, and also, don't always play the correct route in your memory, deliberately try to choose a few wrong options, and then evaluate the feeling. "

Ren also shook his head and said.

In Kazuya's opinion, the evaluation of being too scum should never be used in this game with top script writers and painters, but Lun also said such a word, which made Kazuya feel even more wrong.

And then, as his game progressed, he did find something wrong.

"Indeed, although I don't want to admit it because it's my script, this game is indeed an extremely bad game!"

Kazuya threw the mouse heavily on the ground, and shouted fiercely with a hint of aggrieved depression.

"That's right, you realize that too?"

"I realize,"

Kato nodded and said,

"The whole game seems to have many options, but in fact, for players, there is only one route to take, and all options, the final route pointed to, are also one, if you choose the wrong one, or it will end in haste, Or use other options to force the player to go back to the correct route, in essence, the player is not 'playing the game', the player himself is not the decision maker of the game process, the player is just reading the electronic novel."

"Yes, and the specific option settings like galgame are just a superfluous trick at best. The options are not completely integrated with the game's script, but a meaningless thing chosen for the sake of choice."

And also added heavily.

"Yes, I trusted the two of you too much before, the so-called favorability of the so-called heroine that is very important in galgame is not reflected in your script at all, except for the heroine of each branch line. In addition to the degree of favorability, the favorability of other female characters seems to be determined by an option."

Lun also continued to add,

"Although Kazuya, you and Shiyu-senpai are both very good novel writers, but in terms of script creation, especially in galgame's script creation, you are still complete novice, completely unqualified!"

"This is the problem with the script I listed. In addition to the problems you just pointed out, there are actually more lacks in gameplay. Of course, what you pointed out is the most critical problem."

Lun also shook a piece of paper in his hand and said to Heya.

Kazuya took the paper from Lun Ye's hand and looked at it with wide eyes. As a senior gamer, Lun Ye, who can really analyze the problem of the game, sees it more clearly in this regard, and his every A question, like a knife, cuts in Kazuya's heart.

The problem with the game is: 1. Different heroines cannot be included in the same game.

2. The presence of other derived line plots is too low - the script of the branch line is too short, and the ending has no aftertaste; the heroine of the branch line is too understated, making people feel that it is an unimportant heroine at first glance, and cannot be compared with the main heroine. It makes people cute; the horizontal connection of each derivative route is zero, the feeling of a line to the end is too strong, and it is written for the purpose of writing a branch line 3. The correlation between the options and the game is too weak - you will return to Common line script; only one choice, only changing one option will lead to divergent lines; after choosing an option, the character's reaction is similar no matter which option, in short, the option is not well integrated with the game 4. As The balance of the game text is too poor - all psychological descriptions are expressed in the text, there is no room for painting and performance effects; there are too few lines, and the wording that expresses the character's characteristics fails to clearly reflect the character's character; focus on the character's thinking and description There is no action description of the characters.

"Well, although I know a lot of problems, but when you really throw these problems in front of me one by one, I still feel very sad!"

Kazuya said with a wry smile.

"How should I put it, the last few questions are actually the problems of Shiyu-senpai in general. It should be said that Shiyu-senpai's practice of being good at psychological description made this situation appear in the text of the game in the end. Also that part of your script, although it has your own style, it is obvious that you have been following Shiyu-senpai's style, so not only did you lose your own style, but you also committed The same error as Shi Yu-senpai's script style.

It can be said that it is a mistake!

More places to modify! "

Lun also continued to speak mercilessly, and Jean He couldn't help frowning. He really hadn't heard such a sharp criticism of him from others for a long time.

"However, Aragaki-san's original writing style is actually more inclined towards psychological description and emotional description!

This point is actually similar to Kasumigaoka-senpai. The difference between the two is mainly in the specific perspective. Aragaki-san is more inclined to male psychology, and Kasumigaoka-senpai pays more attention to the psychology of the heroine? "

Just when Kazuo was also a little frustrated, Kato came out and made a round.

"However, the key question now is that if it is such a script, it will definitely be unacceptable, and this needs to be revised, right?"

"That's right,"

Lun also showed a distressed expression and said,

"It just needs to be revised, and it must be the kind of revision that is close to rewriting. Because of the setting of options, there is absolutely no way to change it. If the problems of other heroine's routes are not complete, we can also pass the rest of us. The writing of the original script should be improved, but as for the adaptation of the original script, it is better to leave it to the author himself?”

"is that so?

I have no problem. Although you have criticized me severely, if you want me to rewrite it, I still understand your feelings. "

Kazuya nodded and said solemnly,

"Then, maybe time is a little tight, when do I need to give it to you?"

"No, the current problem is not your problem. In the end, you are only responsible for one line of the Weiyang line. The more important two lines of the heroine's Xunli and Liuli are the core of the script, and these two lines are the core of the script. The line is in charge of Shi Yu-senpai."

Lun also shook his head with some headache and said.

"Sister Shiyu, such an arrogant person, if you were criticized like this, it would definitely be very uncomfortable. After all, even I was hit hard just now!"

Kazuya nodded with a worried expression on his face.

"However, if the explanation is clear, Kasumigaoka-senpai has no reason to object. After all, she doesn't want her debut game script to be such a failed work, right?"

Kato added in a suspicious tone.

"No, that's not the problem now. I don't know if I can convince Shi Yu-senpai. As long as we all work hard, I think she will not be so stubborn and can be persuaded to rewrite the script. The key problem is that ,"

Ren also shouted a little frantically,