How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

"Then only a guy like you has a relatively small circle of otaku girls, so I only know a few people, but I know other people!"

And there are also some who show off without complacency,

"You probably haven't seen this person, but Kato should have an impression, right?"

"Is that Ayase's good best friend, the object of a falling out, the girl named Kirino?"

"Actually, it's close, in her circle, you'll understand when the time comes!

Don't worry, that guy is learning novel writing from me now, so don't worry! "

Kato nodded lightly. Obviously, when she mentioned this, she also remembered the existence of the black cat. After all, the black cat's gothic loli outfit left a very deep impression on people.

"Anyway, I hope to have a reliable person?"

Ren also said with some exhaustion,

"I may not really be the material to write the script!"

"It's okay!

She's also been writing fan fiction for a long time! "

Kazuya said with a sly smile.

Of course, Lun didn't know some other things in his mind. This is another role that the black cat can play. To create without fear, and the things created may not be comparable to Lunya, then, as a self-confessed Lunya who often comments on his blog, why can't he do better than that person? Woolen cloth?

Sometimes, only after comparison can we gain fighting spirit and self-confidence!

And also secretly thought.

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For the improvement of her novel writing level, Black Cat has been trying very hard to make progress, especially after Tong Nai showed herself the process of creating her mobile novel. However, she also knew that her own improvement Although the space is very large, it seems that the speed of improvement is not very fast, which also makes her feel very distressed.

And also this so-called

"Master", although he seems to be trying very hard to help himself, the results are indeed too weak. Although he told her about some problems in his novel, he did not find any obvious other than simple revisions. ways to improve yourself.

Therefore, when revising and writing novels, the black cat can only pay special attention not to let himself use too many words of unknown meaning in battle, and at the same time, constantly delete his own setting draft, so that a huge world view slows down. Show up slowly.

However, for the black cat, these practices are very painful, because whenever she thinks of the battle scene, the most handsome thing she thinks is the nouns of skills that make people feel a little unclear, although and also right He scoffed at this, thinking that this was an obvious performance of the second grade, but the black cat had never seen it like this, so for this kind of modification proposed by Heya, she often felt that deleting these things would not help her, and He also didn't tell her how to deal with this situation, which made her a little depressed. Another example is the long setting draft. Although she also realized that the setting is too complicated, it will discourage others from reading, but in During the specific deletion process, the black cat always feels that every setting is necessary. If it is not explained clearly, there is no way for people to read her articles, which will make her feel like killing her own children. sense.

In the same way, Kazuya's method is still a bit simple and crude in this state, and there is no plan to satisfy the black cat.

However, the black cat did not blame Kazuya for all these problems. She knew that although Kazuya's approach was a bit too simplistic, the problems he pointed out were correct, not only Kazuya, Kirino She is often mocked for these issues.

Therefore, in the black cat's view, only hard work and self-improvement that spends a lot of time is the best way to solve the problem.

So, this is also the reason why Black Cat was so excited when he learned that Kazuya had chosen a non-weekend time for her special training, which meant extra guided practice time!

Although, when she followed Kazuya to Lunya's house for the first time, she was obviously a little apprehensive when she saw Lunya's house full of things, not so tidy rooms, and the game script placed in front of her.

It's not that the black cat doesn't trust Kazuya, but any girl will definitely feel a little uneasy when she wants to go to a strange place alone, especially when this strange place is the home of someone she doesn't know. .

Although the first time she saw Lun Ye's room, she basically believed that this guy should be just a harmless consumption dolphin, but even so, she did not take it too lightly.

Of course, when she saw Megumi Kato who nodded to her with a smile in Renya's room, her nervousness was relieved a lot. Although her relationship with Kato was limited to the summer comi that time, but In the limited conversation, the black cat can still feel the trusting atmosphere of Kato, so seeing Kato Megumi is equivalent to solving most of the problem for her.

However, although Lun was also relieved, the black cat was still not so relieved about the script in front of him.

"Are you going to let me write the script for galgame?"

Although I just glanced at the script, of course the sensitive black cat can find the so-called Kazuya

"Special Training"

What is the task of

"But this is basically a love story, right? Although there are some battle scenes, the emotional line is still the main line. It's not suitable for me to write it?"

"Cough cough,"

Kazuya coughed and said,

"I thought about it, and I think that although you are better off using your own areas of expertise when writing the novels you want to submit for publication, but in other respects, you can still try the so-called emotional plot. After all, in the end, if you want to keep writing and become famous, you can't create a pure battle plot, but you still have to add a certain degree of emotional drama, so it's not a big deal for you to exercise from now on, especially this script For something like this, of course it would be better for you to practice your hands.”

He also certainly wouldn't say that the main purpose of pulling Hei Mao over was to let her solve the problem of lack of manpower, but the reason he barely thought of should be passable, although Hei Mao obviously showed a sense of not trusting him so much. expression, but in the end he nodded and looked at the script.

"I roughly understand your request, but these scripts should be complete scripts, right?

The plots before and after are relatively complete, do you mean to let me expand them more fully? "

"That's right, you have to know that these side scripts are simple, but the amount of text is not small. It is from the handwriting of the current light novel writer Xia Shizi, so I will let you enrich the nature according to the things above. It must be much easier to create!”

"Xia Shizi's work?

I've never heard of Xia Shizi helping people write game scripts,"

The black cat frowned,

"Well, forget it, it's not too strange to think that you know someone like Kashiwagi-sensei, the real person of Kasumi Shizi.

It's just that Teacher Xia Shizi's relatively good script will be too wasteful for me to use it as a work of practice. "

"it's okay no problem!"

Kazuya shook his head and said,

"In the end, Teacher Xia Shizi and I will definitely review it together. Besides, we have archived the original manuscript here, so you can write something to see now. Maybe you have the talent for galgame script writing by accident? !

After all, what galgame wants to write is a complete story, and you have to consider the creation of subsequent plots for novels. "

"OK!

I understand,"

Of course, the character of the black cat is quite bold in this respect. Although I was a little nervous before because of Xia Shizi's name and various pressures such as being engaged in script writing for the first time, but after getting the And also for sure

"It's okay, you can destroy the original as much as you like, it doesn't matter"

After the promise, she went to work with high spirits.

And her nature is in stark contrast to Ren Ye, who is sweating like a rain of pain.

"Almost, although I don't expect the black cat to write such a wonderful script, but no matter what the result is, it will be enough to stimulate Lun Ye. If her script is poor, let Lun know that even the person who wrote the bad script She is so confident, why are you so unconfident; if her script is unexpectedly good, then she can use aggressive tactics, how can a guy who can't even be compared to a fifteen-year-old girl can call himself a senior Home!"

Kazuya wiped the sweat on his forehead, looked at the results of his flickering on the black cat, and said inwardly.

"Aragaki-san, your own script is fine, right?"

Just when Kazuya was a little proud of his foresight, Kato's voice came.

"Ruined!

This is where my workload is the biggest one! "

And thinking of this, Kazuya realized that this is the most annoying thing!

---------------------------Dividing line--------------------- ------------In fact, the writing speed of the black cat is not slow at all, probably because he has no previous experience in game script creation, which makes the black cat let go of his hands and feet, although he is typing. The speed is obviously not as fast as the other two, but the progress of her script writing can be said to have a feeling that a newborn calf is not afraid of tigers. .

"Well, Master,"

Sure enough, after a while, the black cat pointed at his computer screen and said to He Ye as if taking credit,

"Let's take a look at my current results, shall we?

For the first time writing these things, it is better for you to read them first. "

"Then, next, let me make a move!"

Kazuya thought secretly, although he felt a little sorry for the black cat as someone who irritated Lunya, but so far, Lun may still be a more reliable fighting force than the black cat, so Kazuya also continued to say,

"Lun Ye, I don't have enough time now, why don't you come and take a look at the black cat?"

"Eh, me?"

Lun also raised his head in a bit of turmoil, glanced at Kazuya's unquestionable gaze, and finally sighed, stood up, and came to Hei Mao's computer.

Although he does work in his home, looking at this person who has been completely immersed in his script writing since he entered the house, except for the initial self-introduction and the relief of gestures, the black cat obviously showed a trace of uneasiness. , At the same time that Lun was also leaning over, her body was obviously leaning behind her.

Lun Ye's room is very small, with only a bed and a small table, and the rest are occupied by his own CD boxes of various comics, novels, and games. In such a small room, there are four Personally, some physical contact will inevitably occur, and when the black cat retreats like this, he almost put his back on Kazuya's body.

Although this kind of physical contact is not abnormal, the moment she touched Kazuya's back, she still blushed a little. After all, for black cats, it is rare to have contact with other men of the same age, and even with them Getting so close was definitely an experience that overwhelmed her.

However, he was already in his own state and obviously did not take this kind of thing seriously, and Lun also just carefully looked at the script of the person who was helping and recommending his game, He didn't care that he was getting too close to the black cat.

So the black cat just shrank back a little embarrassedly, and while trying to lean towards Kazuya, the person she felt more familiar with, she stretched her neck a little and looked at the other side, who seemed to be Lun Ye from a senior house. How did you comment on her.

The expression on Lun Ye's face also became obviously a little weird. At first, he was in the state of reading carefully, then his face became red, and finally he looked away helplessly.

Just when the black cat was disturbed by the expression on Lun Ye's face, Lun Ye finally spit out a few words:

"How can it be so bad!"

Not thinking about the black cat's face that immediately became a little mourning, Lun also jumped up, grabbed Kazuya's neckline, and called Kazuya who was writing excitedly, and shouted angrily. came out:

"Please, Kazuya, after you said you found someone who wrote fan fiction for a long time, what kind of god did you find?

Is this the kind of guy you're looking for now?

Do you still take our game seriously? "

Without waiting for Heya to refute, Lun Ye's crazy rants continued:

"The speech is basically smooth, but the emotional content is obviously too blunt. Although it is necessary to learn from the necessary bridges, all the things of this guy have nothing of their own in it, just follow other galgames. Copy the content!

Of course, it is not bad that she can do this, but for such a person, just find someone with a good memory and you can do it!

What kind of writer do you want! "

"Is that so, I don't think you are as good as her!"

Kazuya said casually, looking at Renya who was a little crazy.

"What did you say?"

"That's right, then, An Yilun, do you think you can write better than her?

At least people dare to write, dare to write her not-so-mature things, then revise and improve, you can only be timid, do you think you are better than her?

At least the black cat has written the finished product, but you can only live by commenting on others! "

That's why He Ye came here to find the black cat, so, facing Lun Ye's somewhat excited reaction, he had already had a strategy to deal with it.

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