How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

By the way, my personal opinion is that the current state of you and Eiri is about to be discovered. If people find out about your current triangular relationship, even if you are the hero of Toyonozaki Academy, you will not. Oh forgive! "

"Then you give me a better solution!

Easier said than done. "

"Well!"

Lun also curled his lips, but in the end he didn't say anything. For him, it was the ultimate to be able to make suggestions to Heya like this. If it was him, he wouldn't pay attention to this three-dimensional emotional entanglement at all. Being able to help Kazuya over and over again can only be understood as the fact that he couldn't bear to let his first few otaku friends become too tragic.

Therefore, after Kazuya expressed his stubborn reluctance to talk, Lun shook his head, took out a part of the manuscript, nodded, and said:

"However, in this way, the main heroine's line has been written, and the basic setting draft of the sea painting can be made.

The Wugeng classmate you know also has a task, like she did last time, to modify the details on the basis of the big line-by the way, that guy is really good at writing, I just told her that you can try Write her own views on the plot, and she has written a complete story - although this story can almost set up an independent worldview. "

"Black cat?

Isn't that what the character of the child is like?

The setting maniac of writing! "

Kazuya smiled helplessly and said.

"So I'm a little embarrassed to deny her script - although it must be denied, considering that you still have the status of a 'master' in front of her, you should talk to her about this issue."

Lun also shook the manuscript paper in his hand and said solemnly.

"I will."

Kazuya nodded simply, and then looked at Lunya curiously, showing a puzzled expression,

"You said just now that the main heroine's line has been written, but I haven't actually written the main heroine, right?

Did you delete her plot? "

"I still remember who I made this game for!

If there is no character with Kato as the protagonist, what's the point of making this game? "

Lun also rolled his eyes and said naturally,

"Since you don't agree, I'll have to do it myself, right?

Although I am definitely not as mature as you and Shiyu-senpai, I am someone who has written something to some extent, and it took a little time, but I think my final writing should not be bad. "

"Of course, I think you actually have a foundation in writing."

He also looked at Lun Ye in surprise, and there was a hint of unhappy feeling in his heart.

That feeling was as if something that should have belonged to him was taken away by someone, but he quickly got rid of this unpleasantness and said naturally.

"Yeah, I think so too."

With Kazuya's affirmation, Lunya said happily,

"However, although I have been a commentator for so long, it is still a little difficult for me to complete a side story by myself for the first time, and it is still the side story of the main heroine!"

"Yup,"

Seeing Lun Ye's expression of being very satisfied with his work and a little overjoyed, Kazuya's brows furrowed,

"So, let me see what you wrote?"

Before he could finish speaking, He also reached out his hand and snatched the manuscript paper on which the script was written from Lun Ye's hand.

"That's right, maybe you can give me some advice?"

Lun also didn't notice Kazuya's abnormality and nodded lightly.

Kazuya didn't answer, he just took the paper in Lunye's hand and looked at it seriously.

Then, Kazuya's face turned ugly.

It's not that Lun also wrote the script badly, but because Lun also wrote too well.

While the plot somewhat references and also has some anecdotes with Kato, Ren also does a good job of combining these things with his own occasional interactions with Kato.

Moreover, it can be seen that Lun also pays special attention to the main heroine in this game. Every expression and every action of her must be described in detail. I will definitely be grateful for this script.

However, Kazuya didn't like Lunya's script, and if he had to say it, he hated what the script represented.

Ren also has various interactions with Kato in places he doesn't know about, and Kazuya doesn't like that either.

The protagonist, modeled on Lun Ye himself, and

"Master Mistress"

Doing a lot of things that seem to be done by myself, but not exactly the same as what I do, makes Kazuo feel like I am sharing with others

"Master Mistress"

same.

From the entire script, Kazuya can see that An Yilun also paid attention to Kato Megumi without him noticing.

He didn't like it either, technically speaking, he was deeply disgusted by it.

Of course, Kazuya knows that Lunya's writing largely refers to his interaction with Kato, but, looking at a character with Kato as a template, in the game, he is interpreted by others, interpreted by others, and based on other people's interpretations. When the main storyline was created, Kazuya felt an inexplicable commotion in his heart.

"How about it?

Of course I know some things borrowed from your experience to some extent, but I believe Kazuya you will understand my determination to write this story well? "

Lun also looked at Kazuya and said expectantly. Obviously, he had a high evaluation of his script.

"Yes, I can feel your determination,"

Kazuya put down the manuscript paper in his hand coldly, or in other words, he put down the manuscript paper very hard, because he was worried that if he didn't restrain his emotions, he would probably write this script down. Tear in half.

Of course, if we were to do this next, the two might not have to talk, so Kazuya still put down the manuscript very hard, tried his best to force himself to calm down, and made a calm voice:

"However, can you modify the script a little bit?"

"Of course you can, it's just for your opinion!"

"kindness,"

Kazuya nodded and replied with a blank face,

"My opinion is, can you rewrite this script?"

"Ha, what is this opinion called?"

Ren also widened his eyes.

"I mean, I don't like the plot in this script, how much interaction do you usually have with Kato, why do you want to be the person who interacts with Kato in this game?

Don't you think it's funny? "

"Heya, if I remember correctly, I asked you to write this script. After you rejected it, I would take over it myself, and let me take over. Of course, it should also be written with my experience as the main experience, isn't it? Is that so?"

"So, can your interaction be written into a script?"

"So I'll refer to some of your experiences, won't I?"

"Oh, you mean, my past with Kato, can you borrow it?

You think that's your own, don't you? "

"Of course not, but the purpose of the game is to make the heroine stand out, right?

I'm working very hard on this now.

When the game was first made, didn't you have the same idea as me, Kazuya?

Aren't we the same? "

Lun is not a person who likes to quarrel, but he has always been a person who has an unusual persistence and persistence in what he thinks, so when he feels the irritability and vexatiousness in Kazuya's heart, he does not Not backing down, but fighting for it.

"It was the same, but it's different now!"

"Then it's very simple, you write it yourself, if you can write a better script than mine - I don't doubt it, then you write it, what can restrict you?"

"It's not about that!

I have an appointment with that guy! "

Kazuya shook his head and said angrily,

"You are trying to be tough!"

"You're still making things unnecessarily difficult for me!

Is it wrong that I made the game so that Kato can look the same as when I first saw her?

If I can't make my heroine shine in the game, what's the point? "

"Then you find someone in Two-dimensional to make her shine!

Don't look for Kato, she is real, not the same as you think. "

"But why do you think so?"

"There's no reason. All in all, you can't write like this. Even if it's a game script, as long as the character in your script is based on Kato, you can't write such disgusting things. I don't accept it!"

"So, why don't you accept it?

What right do you have to say that about me? "

Lun Ye's eyebrows jumped, and he was a little angry rarely.

"Or, who do you think Kato is from you?

Do you have the right to interfere in anything related to her? "

Facing Lun Ye's question, He also couldn't help but be at a loss for words.

"Or, after Eiri and Shiyu-senpai, Kazuya, do you think Kato should be added to this triangle of yours?"

Seeing Kazuya feeling overwhelmed for a while, Lunya, who had some blood and energy, also asked sarcastically.

Looking at Lun Ye's mocking expression, Kazuo couldn't help but feel a little angry.

He knew that he was being unreasonable, but looking at Lun Ye's script as if he was pouring out the other party's feelings, there was still a nameless anger rising in his heart.

"If that's the case, that's my freedom too, right?

Likewise, do you have the right to interfere with me?