"this one?"

"this one."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at it for a long time with a subtle expression, and said slowly: "Then... please do it."

Ogihara Ming wrapped around her soft body without entanglement, gently touched the soft flesh on her waist, and sighed comfortably.

Sure enough, the softness and fleshiness of Shiyu Kasumigaoka's body, coupled with the relaxation and fragrance that she had just taken out of the bath, was the most perfect pillow.

Akira Ogihara's chin rested on the back of the chair, and the stool moved forward, pushing Shiyu Kasumigaoka to a distance that was convenient for using the computer, and flipped her wrist again, making a gesture of please.

"Be busy with your work, don't worry about me touching it, I'm just here to order benefits in advance, and let you get a little bit of adaptation for the more intimate contact in the future."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu took a deep breath and closed his eyes for a moment, until his heartbeat was not so fast and he could barely maintain his composure, then he rubbed his red face hard and dialed the voice.

The other side picks up quickly.

"Have you chosen which one, or is there something wrong with the script, An Yi classmate?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu asked.

"Ah, I haven't picked it yet. Both of Shiyu-senpai's scripts are great. It's not the quality or content. It's just something I don't understand."

After a brief hesitation, An Yilun also asked.

"Why did the male protagonist in the script change so much compared to the first draft?"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu replied without hesitation: "Because I think such a male protagonist is more attractive and more in line with the setting of the two worlds, even if the setting of the male protagonist is not too important in galgame, I should do my best. ."

"But……"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu waited quietly, but after that, there was no text for a long time.

So she said again: "If you can tell me an inappropriate reason, I will change it, or there is no reason, I just make a request as a producer, I can change it, but because a lot of dialogue logic needs to be changed, it may be It will take at least a week."

An Yilun was also there, and finally had an echo.

"I feel like this is not the story between me and Xun Li-chan..."

Obviously, An Yilun is also tangled in only one place - from the perspective of the new male protagonist, his sense of substitution has collapsed.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu yawned and said with a sigh: "Oh, I'm sorry, An Yi, I just remember to write the best script I can, forget that your original intention was to talk to the tour guide. Li Jiang has been very kind to me, but in my opinion, such a script and a male protagonist may be more attractive, and the sales of the game will be better, what do you think?"

An Yilun also did not speak for a long time.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's patience gradually ran out, and her voice became impatient: "So, change it, or not change it."

"This..." An Yilun also held back for a long time, and then suddenly said, "Then it is up to everyone in the club to decide together, Ying Lili, Kato! Give your opinions!"

Ying Lili's voice came from the other side: "This is obviously your producer's job, why should we decide together?"

"Because this is no longer a matter of the quality and content of the work, but... Most of the people who play galgame are high school students and college students. Maybe it's difficult to substitute such a male protagonist? At least give me an opinion, okay?"

After a sigh, Eiri's voice reappeared.

"I think such a male protagonist is better, at least it gave me a very good inspiration, it seems that I can draw a more handsome person."

"Kato!" An Yilun's question turned to the next person.

"I think……"

After a little hesitation, Kato Ena's stray voice, which seemed to be out of the situation, also came from the loudspeaker.

"I also think such a male protagonist is more handsome, will it be difficult for someone to substitute a more handsome person?"

There was silence for a while.

After a long time, An Yilun also said with difficulty: "I think... it still won't work, this is not the game I want at all."

Immediately after that, it was Eiri's extremely loud voice.

"Then why are you still doing a collective vote! Just say no, let Shi Yu revise the draft!? What's the matter of listening to everyone's opinions and then making the opposite decision? I warn you Lun Ye, the rest of the time is already over. Not much, my task is also very heavy, if you, the producer, continue to delay the process for inexplicable reasons, it is very likely that you will not be able to catch up with the release of the Winter Comic Con!"

From this long list of words, it can be heard that Ying Lili is really popular.

"Sorry, but..."

"Okay, don't talk nonsense." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu knocked on the table, "So, which one to change?"

An Yilun also immediately replied: "Both are very good, so they have to be changed. I decided to join the game as a branch line."

"These are two stories with completely opposite connotations. Existing at the same time will make the theme of the game ambiguous, are you sure?"

"Sure! Sister Shiyu, you have become a novelist thinking again. What's wrong with being ambiguous? A hodgepodge of multiple themes, I don't know what the outcome will be. This is the charm of galgame! Galgame has two rules. , the first is that female characters must be cute, and the second is that they cannot be bound by any rules!"

In this regard, Kasumigaoka Shiyu had no intention of arguing, but just threw away the time he needed.

"Okay, two weeks."

The English pear over there was fried again.

"Two weeks later! Still need two scripts!? It's hard for me to finish the CG drawings in time! Lun Ye! You have a limit if you want to mess around, okay!?"

Before An Yilun could respond, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said, "By the way, I have never tried to change the quality of the work from good to bad, and when a better male protagonist is written, it is difficult to change it. For a poor male protagonist, there may be some inconsistencies or quality problems at that time, I will try my best, but this problem is probably unavoidable."

Yingri slapped the table heavily: "I heard Noren! I can also tell you that your request is simply embarrassing any creator who is strict with himself! Are you trying to ruin this game?"

The opposite fell into a long silence again.

Ogihara Ming smiled silently, even he felt a little miserable in such a messy situation.

"Kato..."

An Yi Lun's voice seemed to be praying for something.

However, Kato Megumi's voice was still calm.

"I think what you want, Lun Ye, shouldn't be a game of poor quality, embarrassing the artist and screenwriter at the same time, and oppressing the production time, just to entertain you, right?"

Time passed minute by minute in silence, but this time, no one was urging anything.

Finally, An Yi Lun's low and weak voice came from the loudspeaker.

"I know, just use... the current script.

Where is my ticket...?

It's a bit late today, but with the morning chapter, it's [-].

Chapter 89 You are not his mother, there is no need to spoil him

In the next weekend, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's script, after all, received a request for revision.

However, it is not to change the male protagonist, but because of the habit of light novelists, or the way of writing light novels, there are a lot of demeanor and psychological descriptions in Shiyu Kasumigaoka's manuscript. However, after filling the script into the game for a week and trying it out, there was still a sense of stagnation.

It's not too much trouble, after understanding the feeling, Kasumigaoka Shiyu received the modification request on Friday night, and got it done during the day on Saturday.

Then I received a new request - to write a happy ending in which both heroines survived, right?

So that night, Nanami saw for the first time that Shiyu of Kasumigaoka couldn't even eat rice.

"Is dinner not to your taste, Miss Kasumigaoka." She asked with concern.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu held her rice bowl with a melancholy face, shook her head and said, "No, of course not, your cooking level is no problem even if you go to a high-end restaurant."

"What's the problem with that?"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu nodded slightly, but looking at Qi Hai's waiting to listen, she didn't know where to start.

In the end, I can only say: "Sorry, I don't know how to say it. If you want to know, I will tell you more about it later."

"Well, it doesn't matter." Nanami expressed that he didn't care, but also had another concern, "But Mr. Ogihara should know, if you really don't understand, I think it's good to ask, there will definitely be a good way. of."

Ogihara Ming just asked himself what he felt in Shiyu of Kasumigaoka last week, and when he turned around, he felt that he might be an encyclopedia and a big brother in Qihai’s heart, or he might be an open gold company.

But this feeling of being seen as omnipotent is not bad, especially in the eyes of her own little maid.

It's vanity, but it's really good.

Swallowing the original but never boring lobster meat in his mouth, Ogihara Ming said, "Let's talk about it."

Since he was going to say something bad, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's face also became worse, and he said with obvious irritability: "An Yi Lun also wants a script with a happy ending, but it is not in my style at all. .Foreshadowing, character design, logic can't make sense, I want to know, can I pay off now?"

Oh, it was the third line that caused the most controversy.

Ogihara Ming put down his chopsticks temporarily, took out a tissue to wipe his mouth, and drank two open cans of Coke.

"If you want to answer this question, you have to sort out the 'value' that you each put out, and tell me, what exactly do you owe."

It's not difficult to answer this question, after all, since he decided to repay the debt, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu has already figured this out.

"My "Love Metronome" was at great risk of being cut in half. If it wasn't for his tireless promotion as a popular blogger, he increased sales by [-]%, which caused me to be noticed by the bookstore and tilted resources. He will be a famous light novelist, and he will not have the sales and royalties of hundreds of thousands of copies. In addition, his fanatical praise and established fan website have also given me great spiritual support."

"Okay." Ogihara asked with a bit of seriousness, "What else do you have?"

This made Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu hesitate for a moment, and said uncertainly: "Only... two game scripts?"

"Ms. Xia Zhiqiu, please, you, no, please, lower your price. If you really don't know how to measure the value of your actions, then let me tell you."

Ogihara took a breath, spread out one hand and said, "Although I was really pushed in the beginning, the sales of the [-] copies... Oh, it seems to be reprinted now, as long as I get a chance, I will To be able to produce such an achievement can only mean that you have the quality and strength of your works, no matter the name of the new and popular light novelist, or the awards you have won, are well deserved."

"So in my opinion, what you're doing is—with such a proud identity, talent, and no salary at all, and the possible returns that are like royalties compared to royalties, you're wasting your precious time! Participate Go to a meaningless project that you are not interested in or mature at all! To pave the way for a high school student's dream! And it is not a handout from the top, but all the creations are dedicated to this!"

In the last paragraph, Ogihara Akira's voice turned cold.

He paused for a while, and then slowly exhaled, only to make his voice warm again.

"If it weren't for the hard-won opportunity, the help at the critical moment is of great significance, and the spiritual support is difficult to measure simply, your repayment has already overflowed many times, and you are desperate, Xiao Qihai and I are both In my eyes, at least according to my perception and measurement, you have already paid for it."

Hearing these words, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's heart was relieved, but it was still difficult to let go. After all, her original plan was to make this game for Anyi Lun. Since it is still within the scope of this game, she can't take it lightly. give up.

Seeing her expression, Ogihara Ming can roughly think of her entanglement, and he can understand this, and continued: "Of course, if you think you should help to the end, you should pay more interest and come to a full liquidation with confidence. , there's nothing wrong with it, but you're not a motherfucker, there's no need to get used to him, and you don't need to bear it on yourself in the face of such a request that you really can't do."

Although the words were a bit vulgar, Shiyu of Kasumigaoka was very enjoyable to listen to.

It was as if he was relieved to hear Ogihara Akira's words to An Yilun in the first cafe.

"Then what should I do?"

She was a little lazy, and instead of thinking about possible countermeasures, she continued to ask.

Akira Ogihara picked up the chopsticks again, and waved it as if driving something.

"Let him write it himself, you just need to modify and polish it, and make a newcomer's messy things come out well. This is already the best of benevolence and righteousness."

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