Can't You Skip Dating? / Can't You Just Like the Body?

Ying Lili doesn't know why Shi Yu is still completing the script seriously under this kind of relationship, and responds to those requests that are embarrassing with a very responsible attitude, and also does not know why Shi Yu can still write so movingly. s story.

What is driving her?

Looking at Shi Yu's seriousness without any emotional fluctuations, she faintly seemed to understand something, but she couldn't catch it.

Ying Lili sat there in a trance, until Shi Yu slowly finished flipping through the document, as if she had finally surfaced, and sighed heavily.

She kept the document, returned the USB flash drive and returned it to An Yilun, and said calmly, "I received it. It will take about three or four days to revise it. If there is nothing else, I will go first."

An Yilun was also stunned: "Ah? Let me do the revisions myself. Sister Shiyu only needs to give her opinions."

"Too many, too lazy to say."

Shi Yu was really too lazy to say it, but An Yi Lun also clearly misunderstood this, and said sincerely: "Please tell me, Sister Shi Yu, don't worry about me, if I don't know the shortcomings, how can I improve."

Shi Yu glanced at him, ignoring the misunderstanding, only to confirm that he really seemed to want to hear it.

Then he retracted his gaze and commented in an objective and fair manner: "Some dialogues have unclear meanings, people can't understand your purpose at all, and you can't express your character; no matter your personality, feelings, or character relationships, there is no suitable and reasonable integration and expression. , the grammar is even more wrong, this kind of meaningless, smelly and long article, whether it is placed in a novel or a game, can only prove the incompetence of the author, and in general it is just a lot of garbage."

By the time she finished speaking, An Yilun's "Ah! Ah! Don't say it so blatantly—" was over.

Shi Yu quietly looked at An Yi Lun's devastated appearance, and continued: "So do you understand, An Yi classmate, it's not that I don't want to say it, but that if I correct the mistakes one by one, it will make you understand. , to guide you to correct it, the time and energy spent will be several times more than my manual correction, and it is difficult to reach the point where I can take out my hands.”

"I-I understand." An Yilun also reluctantly cheered up from the blow, and asked carefully, "Can you give me a few examples, Shiyu-senpai, so that I can understand what's going on?"

Shi Yu didn't hesitate, didn't show any emotion, just opened the document as business as before, moved the chair aside, and vacated most of the front of the screen.

An Yilun also hurried over, followed the mouse pointer to look at a paragraph, and heard Shi Yu's cold voice.

"For example, here, I don't know exactly what purpose you are joining this conversation, but this kind of content that is neither sugar nor poison is not only boring, but also can't express the ideological principles of the character, it is completely meaningless, bad The level is second only to being unable to explain one thing for a long time, and even repeating it more and more chaotically.”

"Remember, every paragraph of your text must have its existence value, whether it is to express characters, or to tell things, or to shape the atmosphere, even if it is really nonsense, it must be as wasteful as the story series. It's interesting, and it's thought-provoking inadvertently, rather than really not, having, meaning, meaning."

With Shi Yu's emphasis on the meaning of the passage, An Yilun also felt the paleness of it more and more when he read his script.

"So it's like this... I understand, Shi Yu-senpai..."

"What else is there?" Shi Yu asked again.

"Ah? Oh, no more."

There was no response like "it's good to understand" or "don't be discouraged". After confirming that this conversation was over, Kasumigaoka Shiyu closed the file and prepared to shut down and go home.

But before he shut down, An Yilun also saw her desktop, pointed curiously and asked, "Sister Shiyu, what is that document?"

Almost without looking in the direction that An Yilun also pointed, Shi Yu's eyes stopped on the only document without a title on the desktop.

Her burgundy pupils shrank suddenly, showing a bit of pain, and her fingernails tucked into the palm of her hand.

Although it hurts every time I see it, if I put that document somewhere else and let it disappear from the desktop, there is an emptiness, depression, and a false and cowardly sense of escape that is more unbearable than pain.

So Shi Yu kept putting it on the table, watching it again and again, getting used to it, adapting, until she no longer felt pain about it, and thought she had accepted the reality.

But she didn't expect that her pain would still be so intense when others saw and pointed it out.

Maybe from the beginning to the end, she actually couldn't accept it, but she numb herself in the habits and adaptations again and again, that's all.

"It's nothing."

She answered in a slightly trembling voice, removing her fingernails from her palms, and swiping the touchpad with trembling fingers, but the unstable and rapid movements did not allow her to click the power button accurately.

The distortion that had been buried in his heart for a long time for various reasons erupted at the moment of suspicion, An Yi Lun's eyes and even his expression suddenly changed drastically.

"Wait a minute! Sister Shiyu!"

An Yilun also shoved Shiyu of Xia Zhiqiu away, clicked on the document, and when he saw the title of "One Hundred Pa of Pure Love" in the document and the text with a strong personal style behind it, his eyes gradually became empty. horrible.

"Sister Shiyu, this is your new book, right?" An Yilun also dragged the stable scroll bar, her voice seemed to be full of endless joy, "It's so good to write so much, write so much. , that's great...but why do you..."

An Yi Lun also paused in his voice and actions. After that, he turned his face sharply, facing Shi Yu, with the joy that had reached the level of nervousness, and slowly asked in a high tone: "Sister Shiyu, why are you... still writing a new book...?"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at An Yilun motionless, and in her calm voice, a strong coldness finally appeared: "What does this have to do with you?"

"Lun Ye! What are you doing!"

Ying Lili tugged An Yi Lun fiercely, but she hardly moved, which made her stunned for a moment, wondering when An Yi Lun's strength became so great.

An Yilun also didn't seem to notice the tug just now, still facing Shi Yu, his head twisted in confusion: "Ah...of course it has something to do with it? Didn't I say it a long time ago, didn't I? Will Shi Yu-senpai go astray!?"

"Heh, hehe..."

Shi Yu laughed at herself, with a cold smile. She thought about herself now, glanced at the document that she had not dared to open for a long time, and said with a smile, "I don't have it."

"Didn't agree to that person's deal?" An Yilun was also stunned for a moment, then suddenly asked hysterically, "Then why are you still writing, Shiyu-senpai! Isn't that just thinking about agreeing!! Isn't it! Shi Yu-senpai, are you still thinking about..."

"Bang!!"

An extremely heavy blow suddenly interrupted An Yilun's almost frantic questioning, and made him fall to the ground.

Holding a heavy dictionary, Kato Megumi took two small breaths, then shook her soft hands, facing the dazed two people, and said softly in a normal chatter-like voice: "Ah, I'm just worried about it again. In such a situation, in order not to break the book, I deliberately brought a thicker book, and it was great that I didn’t put it in my schoolbag for a few months.”

She stuffed the dictionary back into her schoolbag, and said to the two who were still in a daze: "Sister, Yingri, let's go, An Yi looks very dangerous."

Ying Lili was the first to react, and she buckled Kasugaoka Shiyu's notebook and held it in her arms, then grabbed her hand: "Let's go!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu also reacted, grabbed her schoolbag before being dragged away by Yingri, and followed her all the way out of the classroom.

Kato Megumi was the last to leave.

She turned her head and glanced at An Yilun who was still lying on the ground, and slammed the door of the club classroom.

"Mei! Hurry up! This way!" Ying Riri urged loudly at the entrance of the stairs.

Kato Megumi shook his hand: "You go find a place to hide first, and I'll tell the teacher."

Eiri nodded and dragged Shi Yu downstairs, while Kato Megumi turned in the other direction and trotted to find the teacher.

Even if it is a girl, it may be dangerous to smash a boy's head with a heavy dictionary, but with An Yi Lun's dangerous state, she can't confirm the safety by herself, so she can only let the teacher come Take a look.

If there is an accident, it is better to rescue it as soon as possible, otherwise it will be a crime.

Knocked on the door and entered the staff office, Kato Megumi said politely: "Teacher, I used a dictionary to attack An Yi's head in the club classroom upstairs just now. I don't know what's going on now, can I trouble you to go Do you want to take a look?"

This intention made several teachers in the office dumbfounded, and they all asked her what was going on.

Kato Megumi didn't explain, just held the schoolbag and softly spit out three words.

"He deserves it."

When the teachers who were afraid of the accident filed out of the office, Kato Megumi took out her mobile phone and dialed Eiri.

"Yin Lili, I have asked the teacher to check the situation, where are you?"

After getting the address, she went up another floor and found the two waiting in an empty classroom.

After calming down from her anger, Kasumigaoka Shiyu also realized how dangerous An Yilun was just now. Facing Kato Megumi who walked in, she forced a smile and said, "Thank you just now, Kato-san."

"Well, it should be, from a long time ago, An Yi has been too much."

Kato Megumi put down her heavy schoolbag, pulled up a chair and sat opposite the two of them: "So, senpai, why are you still writing a script for him?"

This is what Yingri wanted to ask, and she immediately asked, "Yeah, Shiyu, since you were at my house, you should have ignored it!"

Facing the two concerned inquiries, Shi Yu hesitated.

The result of the last talk was not good, but that was mainly due to An Yi Lun's desperate push, and it was also something that an existence called a "protagonist" often did.

In ordinary stories, the protagonist's desperate decision and action shouting "don't give up" will indeed overturn adversity, create hope and victory, get a good ending, and be praised and loved by all kinds.

But not to mention whether the process is scientific or not, the actual probability of success is very disturbing.

Note that this is to exclude the situation that involves the destruction of the country and the world and must fight to the death. It just means that the protagonist group is facing the usual dilemmas and choices, and it is too dangerous to break through.

If the protagonist has a little plan, even if it is only a [-]-[-]% success rate, everyone thinks it is feasible, plus belief and trust, if you are willing to fight with the protagonist, that's fine.

However, most of the protagonists rely on momentum and encouragement to get up. According to the original "settings", the success rate is usually less than [-]%, not even [-]%.

So failed?

The consequences of giving up in the first place may be just to divide the luggage and go back to each family to find their mothers, or stay in a difficult predicament, but the consequences of recklessly going up and failing, the last time is to hit the head and break blood, and fall into a worse situation. Desperate, or even directly destroyed.

At that time, can the protagonist take responsibility for the failure?

No, usually not. After the failure, the protagonist is either unable to protect himself, or directly hangs up. Even if he lives well, he may be seriously injured and cannot recover, or his teammates are dead, and he can't do much either.

So if it wasn't for the author's arrangement, the protagonist forcibly hung up with the halo of destiny and covered everything with a victory ending, in more than 95% of similar situations, the protagonist is properly pitting teammates and civilians, just Focusing on the so-called hope, there is no safe consideration of the safety and consequences of others.

Failure will be very painful, um, very self-blame, but everyone is dead, what's the use.

And those "old stubborn" who disagree with the protagonist are often the ones who are really worried about the safety of everyone and who can take follow-up responsibilities.

As a calm house with the ability to think and explore, Shi Yu could see other possibilities behind the protagonist's brilliance, and she was somewhat disdainful, but at that time, her unwillingness was too strong, even if she knew that the consequences might be bad , will cause trouble for the Yingli Li family, but still agree with the "protagonist"'s decision.

After that, she paid a price for it. If it wasn't to compensate for the trouble she caused Yingri's family, she probably didn't know the value of those three talismans by now, and she wouldn't have given her life like that.

Now she will no longer do such stupid things, plus the "protagonist" is not present, facing two pure concerns, Shi Yu did not hesitate too much, then showed a relieved smile.

"I'm in order to repay the debt. Only by paying off the kindness and help I have received can I draw a clear line with a clear conscience, right?"

Ying Lili understood at once, because Shi Yu was also persistent in making up for the troubles caused to her family. The inspiration that she had faintly flashed before but could not be grasped was Shi Yu's self-esteem that would pay for her kindness.

Of course, the situation between her and An Yi Lun is completely different. After Shi Yu's repayment, the relationship between the two has become better.

"Pay off the debt..."

Ying Lili lowered her head, thinking about the "betrayal" she had made with An Yi Lun in order to integrate into the group.

Kato Megumi also tilted her head slightly, not knowing what she was thinking.

After a moment of silence, Kato Megumi asked a question as if she had just remembered something: "Senpai, Yingri, do you think that An Yilun has also become very strange, like being possessed by something? the same."

Neon usually doesn't call his full name, because that's an impolite behavior, especially if you use it directly in a conversation with the other party, it's almost insulting.

Speaking of Kato Megumi's name, it's really interesting. She called Lun Ye directly for a while, but then changed back to An Yi, and now she's called her by her first name.

Hearing the word leaning over, Yingri, who was frightened by a ghost, shuddered immediately: "Hey! Don't say such a terrible thing!"

"But don't you think that An Yilun is also really scary today, very strange?" Kato Megumi continued to question.

Yingli Li really thinks that if it weren't for An Yilun, she was still fine before, she almost thought that An Yilun today was also pretending to be someone else.

Continuing to think about it, Ying Li Li shook her head again and said, "It's not just today. On the day of my banquet, he was very abnormal. He threatened Shi Yu to tell her parents that day."

But Megumi Kato doesn't think so: "It's different, he was really excited that day, but he was also wronged and... out of some psychological overreaction, but he didn't show that he seemed to be a different person, completely lost. Now that you're sensible, you're almost as aggressive as the one who hit your senpai."

Indeed, there is an essential difference between being abnormal for a while and becoming a completely different person.

Eiri frowned and thought about it, but it still felt too weird, it was like being possessed by Kato Megumi, which made her shudder again, and asked Shi Yu, who also seemed to have seen a ghost: "Hey, Shi Yu, what do you think?"