In order to let more people recognize himself, Naruto's goal is to become Hokage.The whole story revolves around Naruto's struggle and growth, stories of Naruto's companions, and various struggles and conspiracies in this ninja world.

"NARUTO", the first words --- Uzumaki Naruto!

Once upon a time there was a demon fox that endangered the world, and it had nine tails!The fox shakes the landslide and tsunami...

Chapter 123 Impulsive

The content of the first chapter is very simple. If you draw NAME quickly, you can get it done in five minutes at most, but Ye Su didn't want to be so hasty, and didn't copy the original plot.

The first chapter of "NARUTO" still has some flaws more or less.

After all, the author who drew this manga is only a human being, not an omniscient god. After creating this work, it is inevitable that there will be some bugs that violate the settings.

This is an unavoidable disadvantage of long comics, because the time is too long, and some small details cannot be taken into account.Ye Su needs to modify it. For example, there is a small bug in the setting of the demon fox at the beginning.

The Nine Tails harmed the people, and the fourth generation of Naruto sealed it, but the setting behind it is not the case.

It is said that the general previous text is actually a wrong setting. It can only be said that this is purely a matter of details.

The story is so long, from the beginning, Masashi Kishimoto, the author of "NARUTO", was simply unable to prepare the story line of the entire work.

Even if there is a name, it is only the name of a dozen chapters.

It was precisely because of the need to modify the details in this area that it took Ye Su half an hour to draw it.

"It's done." Ye Su said, holding NAME in front of Ying Lili, "It's done, the manga you wanted."

"So fast?" Ying Lili, who was thinking about how to deal with a certain painting detail, raised her head in surprise after hearing this, and looked at Ye Su in disbelief.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, who was reading next to him, also raised his head in surprise and looked at Ye Su.

Both of them looked at Ye Su in disbelief.

With such eyes, Ye Su himself felt a little flabbergasted.

"Why are you looking at me like that, is there something on my face?" he asked.

"No, that's not what I meant. I'm just a little surprised that your kingly manga story will be released so quickly. The efficiency is simply too high." Ying Lili said.

"I'm a person who advocates efficiency." Ye Su said it as a matter of course after hearing this.

Next to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, slowly put down the book in his hand, and walked over curiously, wanting to see what Ye Su's story is.What kind of story can be conceived in this half an hour.

Ying Lili also subconsciously looked down at the NAME in her hand.

The name is: "NARUTO".

""NARUTO"?" Subconsciously pronounced the name, Ying Lili raised her head strangely and asked, "What does this mean?"

"This is the protagonist's name." Ye Su said directly.

"The name of the protagonist has directly become the name of the manga, isn't that a little too sloppy?" Ying Lili blinked and said.

"It's an irrelevant matter, let's see how this story goes." Kasumigaoka Shiyu saw that Ying Lili seemed to be struggling with this issue for a while, and couldn't help but said.

"Okay, but I think the name of the manga is still very important. A good name is usually the first step towards the success of this work. If even the first step fails, it will be a bit bad." Ying Lili looked at the manga name in her hand, couldn't help muttering, and then opened the name.

The story begins with a simple narration.

Then there's Naruto Uzumaki, the idiot protagonist who messes around in the village trying to get attention --- and the pivotal character, Hokage, and Naruto's teacher, Iruka.

Uzumaki Naruto, who failed the assessment, expressed his ambition while eating ramen.

That was the ambition to become Hokage.

Reluctantly, there was still no way to succeed in the next assessment.

The lonely Uzumaki Naruto was used by others to steal ninjutsu scrolls.

Immediately afterwards, being in a dangerous situation, various situations, followed one after another.

Even Iruka-sensei is in a dangerous situation.

In the end, there was a big explosion of burning point and tear point. The protagonist Uzumaki Naruto defeated the enemy and graduated successfully.

So this ends here, but what follows is the plot after becoming a ninja, which is even more exciting.

The whole story can be described as quite compact, so much content, complex settings, detailed characters, and naturally the undeniable kingly manga content, are compressed into the content of just one episode!Seeing Ying Lili and Kasumigaoka Shiwa next to him were stunned for a while.

this story……

awesome!

Of course, it can only be that the story is great, and Ye Su's painting style is really not flattering, if the character model of the stick figure can also be called a painting style.

However, it was obviously just a stickman, but because the plot was too good, the two of them had an extremely wonderful feeling, and they even ignored the stickman's painting style for a while.

After reading this story, whether it is Kasumigaoka Shiwa or Ying Lili, they can't help but think deeply about this story.

This story is really well written.

Is this the strength of Messiah?It simply shocked them.

It took half an hour casually to construct such a story, which is unbelievable.

Ying Lili hesitated for a moment, but couldn't help asking: "Messiah, did you just come up with this story?"

Looking at Ying Lili's shocked eyes, if Ye Su thought of it just now, he might not know what kind of monster he would be treated as.

Ye Su thought for a while, then shook his head and said, "Of course not, this is a story that was conceived a long time ago, and it just happened to be brought out now. With a subject like Wang Dao, anyone would naturally try it out. Bar?"

Listening to Ye Su's words, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu and Ying Lili breathed a sigh of relief.

Ying Lili said: "It turned out to be like this. This is really an extremely wonderful story, and the setting inside it really makes people unable to resist drawing it."

At this moment, Ying Lili did have such an impulse in her heart.

I want to draw the first chapter of "NARUTO" immediately!The urge was even a little irresistible.

Chapter 124 Put the cart before the horse

Although Ying Lili wants to draw the first chapter of "NARUTO" in this club immediately, but drawing manga is a very delicate job. In addition, it is getting late now, and it will be dark soon. Time to leave school.

Ying Lili had no choice but to give up this idea.

"Messiah, I will do my best to show this comic to the extreme." Looking at Ye Su, Ying Lili said suddenly, "Thank you for giving me this story, I will never let you down .”

Ye Su nodded with a smile, and said, "I don't think you will let me down at all."

Ying Lili nodded, and the three left the Club Department. On the way, Ying Lili asked curiously: "Messiah, tell me, which magazine is better for our comics to be submitted to?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu glanced at Ying Lili, who was close to Ye Su for a long time, and suddenly felt a little strange. She didn't know whether it was a good or bad result after introducing Ye Su to Ying Lili. Woolen cloth?But no matter what, Ying Lili is very happy now.

Wei Wei was about to shake her head, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said a little funnyly: "You are too anxious, now there is only one name, not even a manuscript, and you are already thinking about which manga magazine you want to submit to? "

Ying Lili pursed her lips and said, "I'm planning for a rainy day, what is anxiety. Moreover, this issue is also a matter of decision sooner or later."

"With such a story and your artistry, I think any ordinary manga magazine can easily serialize it." Kasumigaoka Shiwa said.

"Well... that's true, but I think the goal should be set higher." Ying Lili said.

"Higher? Could it be..."

Before Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu finished speaking, Ying Lili looked at Ye Su and asked again: "What do you think? Which comic magazine is better to submit to?"

Ye Su glanced at her and said calmly, "Of course it's Weekly Shonen Jump, and it can only be Weekly Shonen Jump."

Listening to Ye Su's words, the answer was exactly the same as what she imagined, Ying Lili couldn't help smiling, and nodded vigorously: "I think so too!"

There is also Weekly Shonen Jump in this world, but there is no "NARUTO". Since "NARUTO" is going to be serialized, it is a matter of course that it should be published in Weekly Shonen Jump.

Weekly Shonen Jump, a manga magazine with an annual circulation of hundreds of millions of copies, sells millions of copies every week, which can be described as quite terrifying.

Previous life, Dragon Ball, Grim Reaper, One Piece, Naruto, Hunter x Hunter, JOJO, Prisoner of Gourmet, and a series of well-known comics are serialized in Weekly Shonen Jump.

If the Big Three of Shueisha are the temple of the entire manga magazine industry, then Weekly Shonen Jump is the biggest, most dazzling and luxurious throne in this temple.

This is the manga magazine that stands at the apex of all manga magazines.

It is the platform that everyone who draws manga longs for. Needless to say, it is difficult to serialize on Weekly Shonen.

However, from the beginning, Ye Su's goal was this, and because of such a story, Ying Lili also had such ambitions.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa, who was a little clear-headed, felt a little ridiculous.

"This is Weekly Shonen Jump, you guys are really ambitious." She couldn't help but let out a sigh of admiration, but after thinking about it carefully, if there is such a story, she still doesn't have the courage to attack this closed palace to newcomers. Then stop drawing manga!

For a while, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu also looked forward to it.

"I hope you will succeed."

……

When Ye Su returned home, the first thing he did was to write a novel.

I am writing the second volume of "SwordArtOnline", and the progress is very smooth. After a period of rest, the feeling of fatigue disappeared, and both the thinking and the writing state have become very good.

Soon, the final chapter of the second volume of "SwordArtOnline" was written by Ye Su.

"It's finally done." Ye Su stretched his waist, looked at the second volume of "SwordArtOnline", and couldn't help smiling. This kind of satisfaction after finishing writing was quite comfortable for him.

He pulled out the contacts, opened the mailbox, and wanted to pass the second volume of "SwordArtOnline" to the editor in charge, but after a second thought, he still stopped.

He still remembered that Zhongshan Ryunosuke once asked to read and discuss this novel face to face.

"Contact him tomorrow." Ye Su said, and printed out all the contents of the second volume with a printer.

Ye Su put the printed content in a bag for manuscripts presented by Kadokawa Bunko, and then put it in his schoolbag, preparing to discuss it face-to-face with Mr. Ryunosuke Zhongshan tomorrow.

After finishing all this, Ye Su clicked out another file, which was "Master of Bugs".

"It suddenly became a little busy." Ye Su couldn't help but said, but just as he was about to write, Nakano Azusa knocked on the door and complained.

"Hurry up and practice, when do you have to write? Although your current novels have achieved a lot, you still can't put the cart before the horse." Nakano Azusa said, opening the door, revealing a head, looking Looking at Ye Su inside.

Ye Su was stunned for a moment, what Azusa Nakano said was correct, although the novel has made some achievements, but he can't waste music because of it, and he can't put the cart before the horse either.

Nodding his head, he took a look at this "Master of Insects", and made a wise decision, this novel, let's leave the manuscript and put it away!

Who told me to be so busy?There is only time to write.

Ye Su nodded and said, "OK, I'm here."

Afterwards, Ye Su closed the document he just opened, and went to practice music with Azusa Nakano.

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