My Daily Life with Gosara Ayase/my Sister Can't Be Ayase's Little Angel

Therefore, Chai Muzao immediately cast his sights on Ryunosuke, instantly confident:

"Well, I can't wait to accept your compliments."

Ryunosuke smiled, nodded, turned around and walked to the service department.

I hope you don't cry later.

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Enter the service department, after everyone sits down.

The arms that Chai Muzuo had been holding all the time were obediently placed on his lap, and his expression changed from confident to apprehensive.

Because Ryunosuke and Yukinoshita are sitting opposite the firewood seat, it looks like the police are interrogating the prisoner.

If this guy is going to play a prisoner, this nervousness and anxiety are enough to be chosen.

It was Ryunosuke who coughed lightly first, and broke the embarrassment and said, "Well, Yukino, take it out."

"Hmm." Yukinoshita with a calm expression handed the manuscript to Ryunosuke.

Ryunosuke took it in his hand and flipped through it at random, although he didn't read it all, nor did he mark the correct answer.

But the mistakes were marked, and Yukinoshita also added some of the correct answers.

Fair enough.

Ryunosuke pushed the manuscript to the front of the table, and Chai Muzuo also reached out to get it.

But he didn't give it for the time being, looked into Chaimuzuo's eyes and said:

"Although I didn't finish reading yesterday, I already know where your biggest problem is."

Chai Muzao was slightly disappointed when Ryunosuke said that he hadn't finished watching, but he still asked him, "What's the problem?"

Just like last time, without acquaintances, and in front of Xueshita, he didn't dare to take the second grade, and he was much more straightforward.March Chinese om

At this moment, Ryunosuke let go of the hand holding the manuscript, and said: "Misprinting and wrong sentences greatly affect the reading experience.

Although the light audience is young people, they may not care too much about typos, but the editor will definitely not like it.

Such works are difficult to pass the review. "

Chai Muzuo lowered his head, looked at his own, and looked at the comments on it.

Ryunosuke went on to say: "From the beginning, it gave people a bad mood, even if the plot is not too bad, people will pick it out."

He paused and said, "As for the plot, it can be seen that you refer to the popular ones at the moment."

Chai Muzuo smiled when he heard the praise, and then became embarrassed, because Ryunosuke said later:

"However, maybe there are too many references, and it feels like copying rote, and there is nothing of my own."

Ryunosuke has tried his best to express what the teacher said tactfully.

Yukinoshita glanced at him and guessed what he was trying to say, probably copied a lot, right?

Ryunosuke tapped the table twice with his fingers: "Books are like people, they must have their own soul and thoughts, and they have likes and dislikes.

Learn from others on this basis, so that you will not learn to walk in Handan.

That's about it. "

After he finished speaking, he nodded, and quietly looked at Chai Muzuo who was still bowing his head silently.

Although compared with the plot, it is a bit "quiet", but after all, there is no acquaintance Hachiman, so it is understandable.

Yukinoshita thought for a while, and interjected: "Student Shibakiza, you may not know that Ryunosuke is already a lightly published writer.

It can be said that he is your senior, and his words are still very meaningful. "

Hearing this, Chai Muzuo suddenly raised his head and looked at Ryunosuke carefully.

Ryunosuke was a little embarrassed when he heard Yukinoshita's words, and he was a little humble: "I just wrote it a few years earlier, it's nothing."

When Chai Muzuo heard this, he felt a little uncomfortable.

Ryunosuke is a light writer for high school students, and there is a story of a beautiful minister. He is also handsome

Really, I'm so envious, I'm so envious.

If I had become famous that day, I wouldn't have lived a "corrupt" life like Ryunosuke.

Every day after school, I must go back and update immediately without delay.

but

Chai Muzuo thought for a while, then sighed.

He sorted out the manuscript, stood up and said seriously: "Thank you for your great help, I will remember it in my heart."

Ryunosuke nodded: "After all, it is our commission, and we will seriously help you."

Yukinoshita also nodded: I finally used an idiom correctly, to help you can only mean that others are helping you, not yourself.

Afterwards, Chai Muzuo left the service department with somewhat heavy steps.

Although he was already prepared to be scolded miserably, but