My Daily Life with Gosara Ayase/my Sister Can't Be Ayase's Little Angel

Chapter 74 No, I Refuse

I, Qianshou Village Zheng, the home of the king rank.

Because I couldn't see anything interesting, I embarked on the road of writing for myself.

After reading the book in one breath, my eyes were a little dry, so I squeezed my eyes and closed them for a while to rest.

Then he took a deep breath and drank a cup of barley tea, looked at the man in front of him, and then came back to his senses.

I was so busy reading a book that I forgot that I was at someone else's house.

Looking at the Yanlong King who was on the sofa next to him, he leaned softly on the sofa, as if he had fallen asleep.

From her point of view, the new book written by Yanlong King is really regrettable.

From the perspective of basic skills such as writing techniques and rhetorical applications, it is basically qualified.

It can make people read smoothly and understand what he wants to say.

The plot design can also be justified.

What makes Qianshou happy is that the plot is really interesting, and it has been a long time since I watched it so happily.

But the regret is here, Qianshou shook his head lightly.

Some parts of Yanlong King can be expressed in a better way, but

It's a pity that he turned an S-level plot into an A-level plot.

If she is allowed to write, I am afraid that the sales volume will double again next month.

However, Sensei always has a smile on his face, and the most rare thing is his unrestrained imagination.

Others can be practiced slowly.

If the author loses a passionate heart, everything he does is useless.This is also where she has a disagreement with Miss Fate.

She smiled contentedly, her face flushed with excitement, and she really came to the right place this time.

Holding the manuscript, Qianshou took a deep breath and looked at the Yanlong King opposite.

It feels like "Sleeping Beauty".

With sharp-edged facial features, a heroic spirit is hidden in the eyebrows.

There seemed to be a hint of a smile in his sleep.

Qianshou walked over quietly, and then quietly retreated.

Although I really want to play a prank, but after all, it is still very strange and cannot be annoying.

I really want to lock him in a small dark room and let him write by himself every day.

Of course it's impossible, but if you become friends, then you can read what he wrote in advance.

Masayoshi Senju showed a smile, stood three meters away from Ryunosuke, and began to yell softly:

"Flame Dragon King, Lord Flame Dragon King, Teacher Aragaki, Ryunosuke?"

Dazedly hearing someone calling himself, he opened his eyes.

Looking at Qianju standing there looking at him, he was really startled, but then he relaxed again.

I didn't expect to fall asleep, hey, this is not good.

I know Qianshou Village Zheng too well, so I feel at ease in my heart, and I don't have any suspicions or doubts.

So just relax and fall asleep.

He sat up and yawned softly, and said, "Have you finished watching?"

Senju Murakami nodded slightly.

Ryunosuke thought that she was also very good, so he hesitated and said, "Is there anything that can be improved?"

Unexpectedly, I was still modifying other people's a few days ago, and my own will be modified by others today. It is really an impermanent world.

Qianshou Murao said something according to her previous thoughts.

She looked at such a talented guy but was so lazy, and didn't know how to work hard to improve her writing skills.

Talking about the original soft words became a bit heartbroken.

Ryunosuke was also very strange. Although Senshou Cunzheng spoke harshly, he felt happy?

He murmured a little in his heart, mmp, am I a jerk?

However, when he asked how to modify it, Senshou Murata hesitated and said:

"If you want to talk about specific improvements, I can't tell you.

Because these are the basic skills, if you want me to change it according to what you want to express, it may be completely different.

And it will deeply carry my style.

I can only recommend a few books and let you take a look at my notes.

Then I will mention a few typical examples for you.