My Daily Life with Gosara Ayase/my Sister Can't Be Ayase's Little Angel

But it's not like that, is it?

One is that a girl who was obviously based on a black cat was raped to death.

The other is that a girl who is obviously based on Kirino is treated as a slave.

Oh, what is it?

Is this a plot that normal girls would think of?

The two of them haven't been exposed to too many dark animations, have they?

This is the so-called love and kill each other.

It is true to love each other, but it is really not soft to kill each other.

This stumped Ryunosuke.

To say that Kirino's plot is not well written, of course the black cat will nod, but doesn't it just make Kirino unhappy?

The reverse is also true.

If you are with the mud, you will be closer to the black cat, which in itself is another behavior that may make the black cat unhappy.

Just when Ryunosuke had a headache, Kirino, who was holding his arms, couldn't wait to ask:

"How is it? Are you too shocked and speechless, it really is a masterpiece, right?!"

Ryunosuke kept a calm face, without showing any emotion, and responded with a sentence:

"From what I've just seen, it's very personal."

Just think about how the two of them reconcile in the anime.

Well, it seems that I didn't say anything about reconciliation specifically, this matter is over and it's over.

Later, Tong Nao wrote a new one, that is, the girl city, and it is also animated.

Ryunosuke thought to himself, and couldn't help but feel that it was outrageous.

I haven't even animated yet, Kirino is the first time

Although it seems that there is also an element of luck, and he came off the bench, but he still has strength.

"And then, and then?" Kirino urged Ryunosuke to say more, just a personal style is obviously not enough.

Ryunosuke could only continue to say:

"Although it is not a common style, the market may react badly.

But it may also attract a large number of loyal fans, which has certain commercial value.

I started to vote for any website. "

*^^* Kirino then showed a satisfied smile, and turned to look at the black cat.

The elated look made the black cat feel the provocation in it.

This seems to be saying, look, what this lady wrote for the first time can sell well.

It also seems to be saying that you have been writing for a long time and have studied so much, but you still hit the wall repeatedly.

Hehe, Black Cat smiled from the bottom of his heart, anyway, Kirino is really good at making her angry.

"It's okay, just be happy, as a human being, the most important thing is to be happy."

Tong Nai heard the words, the smile on his face slightly closed: "Ah, is it? You are really annoying, can't you just admit it?"

Seeing that the two were about to pinch each other again, Longzhisuke quickly said, attracting attention:

"Tirino, what I just said is indeed the truth, there is a certain commercial potential that can be tapped.

But it can also be clearly seen that you are writing for the first time.

In some places, you don't follow the agreed rules, which makes people feel refreshed.

But in some places, you really stepped on the minefield and weakened the value of the work.

If you revise it well, or simply rewrite it, you may really be able to get a very popular first book. "

Having said that, Tong Nao was also very interested: "Really? Are you complimenting me?"

"No, I'm quite honest."

Tong Nai was noncommittal after hearing this, but continued to ask: "Then where is the minefield stepped on, tell me quickly."

"Well, you should know that if it is to be published, it will be made into a book of that size, basically the same, right?"

"I've seen them in bookstores, and they're all about the same size."

"So, a few words or an expression of yours is one line, and it is very frequent.

Then there will be a situation where it is obviously the size of a book, but [-] to [-]% of a page is blank.

This will give people a kind of, how to say?

Anyway, for readers who are used to the usual mode, it is very uncomfortable.

However, if you switch to reading on your mobile phone, it would be more appropriate. "