Gotta Go the Healing Route

Toyama Kisaragi is an open-minded person, otherwise, he would not be passionate about creation comics and fantasy novels of modern entertainment while loving traditional classical literature.

Urban magic, which is the first of its kind in modern novels, she must witness to the end.

With such anticipation in mind, Toyama Kisaragi watched Chapter 1 overlooking the scenery, and continued reading.

In overlooking the scenery, the world view and setting have been laid at the most basic level, but they have not yet been fully developed.

It wasn't until reading Chapter 2, 'Investigation on Murder (Before)' that Toyama Kisaragi discovered that this urban fantasy novel still uses irregular narrative and non-linear creation methods.The background time of the story goes back to three years ago, when the two protagonists of the sky, Kuroto Mikiya and the two rituals, just met.

Irregular narrative, this narrative technique of reversing the timeline is not new now.Very common in mystery novels.

Because one of the motivations that mystery novels give readers to read is to "twist people's appetite", and all kinds of foreshadowing make readers dazzled.

Keep leaving clues in the indeterminate timeline, and then make the story progress little by little, and at the end will show the final behind-the-scenes manipulator, and readers also need to keep guessing and false appearances in the process of reading.

It is a very interesting process for readers to constantly learn new information and speculate on the follow-up plot through the progress of the story.

"A genius-like idea..." After knowing the narrative method chosen by Kazama Xi, Toyama Kisaragi couldn't help sighing again.

The theme of the empty realm is far from the reasoning detective, but it is very suitable for such a non-linear narrative.

In urban fantasy novels like this, the setting of the magical part must not be displayed all at once, otherwise it will inevitably weaken the reader's sense of expectation and curiosity.

Replace the "clues" in mystery novels with magical settings, and finally present the world view step by step with the development of the story.In this way, while allowing readers to fully understand the setting, it can also keep the interest of reading uninterrupted.

PS: I originally wanted to use "Unlucky Pop Can't Laugh" as a base before the air realm.However, due to space limitations, I will not copy this book, and only briefly mention it in this chapter.

It can also be regarded as a kind of Amway, and those who like the story of the sky should also like Buji Pop who can't laugh. There is a section at station B that you can take a look at.

Chapter 240 You Can't Find a Girlfriend Like This

The out-of-order writing technique takes into account the author's overall view and logical thinking ability. If the ability in this area is insufficient, the whole story may appear chaotic and difficult for readers to understand.

As a classic light novel 20 years ago, the past life of Kong Jing in the Wind and the Night can be called a legend and a masterpiece even 20 years later.This is inseparable from the creative ability of its author Nao Kinoko.

To be honest, Mushroom is really a very good script writer and playwright.

Take the evil lunar krypton gold mobile game as an example.Although everyone who plays fgo knows that this is a kitchen card drawing game, the cultivation of kitchen skills still comes from the shaping of the characters in the story.The main story is not unimportant to fgo, a card-drawing game that is partial to visual novels.

FGO's script creation team members include Higashiide, Sakurai, Minase, Laoxu and Mushroom.There is no doubt that mushrooms are definitely the mainstay among them.

Let's just talk about the first part of fgo, the plot evaluations of each chapter are basically public opinion on the Internet: the best are undoubtedly Camelot and Warcraft Front, and the worst are Perpetual Madness Empire and Magic Mist City.The others are average.

The plot of the perpetual mad empire is very poorly written, and Bu Ma inexplicably risked her life to help Nero. What kind of logic is this.The dead fog city is even worse, the story is like a running account of a primary school student's autumn outing.

It is worth mentioning that these two chapters were written by Aunt Sakurai.

Needless to say, Sakurai's style, like to write serious plots as Mary Sue, love brains pull CP, which directly causes many characters to OOC, and also makes players experience extremely bad when watching the plot.The tangled literary drama can make players feel like an embarrassing cancer.In comparison, the performance of Dongchu, which has been criticized because of FA, is not bad.

The scripts that Mushroom is responsible for are the acclaimed Chapter 6 and Chapter 7.

Compared with the previous chapters, after Mushroom took over, the quality of the script took off vertically.Bedivere's trip to return the sword in Camelot, a shooting star of a great hero.The characterization is perfect.Let the players directly get back the feeling of promoting fsn back then, the fetters that span time and space, the domineering plot, the clear and unrestricted character creation, and there are too many words to brag about.

And Chapter 7 Warcraft Battlefront brings even more epic shocks, the journey of farewell to God, the perseverance of the virtuous king, Hassan's sacrifice of the crown and a blow to kill the gods, the plot is directly full.

It's not just mindless blowing mushrooms, many fields are really set off by peers.Mushroom's level of story creation is really stable, obviously surpassing others.

I deviated from the topic as I wrote it, and I accidentally talked so much.

Go back to the text.

As Mushroom's debut novel, Sky Realm uses out-of-order writing techniques, but it perfectly connects the whole story together.

While allowing the story to continue to develop, it also portrays many distinctive characters.The works even contain a lot of thinking fragments that mix philosophy and religion.

But under such a grand world view and intention, the description of personal emotions does not seem so petty, but has a special taste.

Perhaps those authors who focus on the creation of love novels cannot describe the fairy-like love affair between Kuroto Kanya and the two rituals.

In short, Sky Realm has perfectly grasped the integration between the big picture and the details - enriching the huge world view, but many descriptions are quite detailed, making the story appear flesh and blood.

Instead, the non-linear narrative technique, which peels off the layers of the setting, makes readers unable to stop reading at one go.

Yuanshan Ruyue was like this, she started reading in the afternoon, and when she finished reading the whole novel in one go, the sky outside the window had already dimmed.

Letting out a long and melancholy breath, Yuanshan Ruyue rubbed his slightly sore neck from sitting in front of the computer and looking at the screen for a long time.

An excellent work that can arouse people's empathy will always make readers feel a sense of loss and melancholy after reading it.The reason for this feeling is that readers are involuntarily immersed in the world in the story.

The sense of substitution brought by urban fantasy novels is even greater, because they all take modern society as the background of the story and tell the story of a group of people with special abilities who mix among ordinary people.It is precisely because the readers themselves are in the modern society that the abnormalities of the characters in the story will arouse countless reveries.

"Excellent novel."

Even Kisaragi Toyama, who is a professional critic, couldn't give a detailed evaluation for a while after reading this empty space because he was immersed in the story, so he could only use the most primitive praise of 'great' vocabulary to compliment.

Different from Kazama Yuki's previous novel "From the New World", although Zixin depicts a future utopian world, the beautiful daily life is immersive, but after revealing the essence of the future society, the sense of horror will make people Woke up instantly from the story, feeling terrified after thinking about it.

As for the empty realm, it tells the story of the intersection between the daily and the abnormal, and has written several wonderful plots with ups and downs.But the daily life mixed in these abnormal plots is extremely profound. In the eyes of Toyama Kisaragi, this is a story about a romantic relationship between a girl and a boy, not a fantasy battle novel.This kind of romantic feeling can be said to have a fatal attraction for teenagers and girls, and people can't help but immerse themselves in it.

It wasn't until after posting for a while that Yuanshan Ruyue gradually broke away from the atmosphere immersed in the story.

Commenting on a literary work basically starts from two parts—creative technique and the story itself.

Needless to say, the disorderly creation technique, in terms of the overall situation, Kazama Yuki has already proved her ability.The framework of the story can be said to fit perfectly.

Although the empty realm is composed of several events, through the male and female protagonists, the two characters are firmly connected in series, and the degree of completion is very high.

This is inseparable from the author's meticulous thinking and open mind.And the combination of the two is closely connected with the author's talent and talent.

Yuan Shan Ruyue couldn't help expressing emotion in his heart: If there is a god of creation in this world, then how much this god loves that young man.

Speaking of which, Kazama Xi's creative field involves text and comics, and the themes are even more diverse: fairy tales, science fiction, wits and reasoning, evil ways in the end of the world, and adventures in the kingly way.Coupled with the current empty space, the combination of magic and the city opens up a new story theme.

If you want to describe a teenager, you can only use the word "genius" to sum it up.

And the writing of the storytelling...

It can make the story of Yuanshan Ruyue and Kongjing produce such empathy and immerse in it, and the writing of the story also plays a great role in it.

The writing style of this empty realm can be described as a combination of popular and obscure.

Popularity refers to the depiction of daily narratives in a steady and gentle pace.As long as readers are in a calm state of mind, it is easy to immerse themselves in the atmosphere of the story.

The obscurity is reflected in the setting connotation and emotional line.

In terms of setting, because of the out-of-order technique, it is difficult for readers to understand the metaphors and foreshadowing of the plot at first, and it is estimated that the author Wenqing has committed a crime.

In terms of connotation, because it is mixed with a lot of philosophical and religious knowledge, for ordinary readers who are not experienced enough, it will naturally feel abstruse and difficult to understand.But after reading the whole article and understanding the development of the overall story, the two will give people a sense of enlightenment.

As for the obscurity of the emotional line, in Toyama Kisaragi's view, this is the essence of Kong Jing's novel.

The overall atmosphere of the story in the empty space creates a sense of sorrow.This is not to be delusional.Obscurity and implicitness are themselves representative elements of East Asian literature.

For example, the two ceremonies' confession to Heitong Kanya is not a blunt "I like you", but a display of bits and pieces of memories together.

Especially in the murder investigation (after) chapter, when Bai Chunli was killed, the inner memory of the two ceremonies burst out with the sentence "that was really a day like a dream".

And Hei Tongqian was not far behind, and his expression of love was established with the sentence "I can't forgive you for killing Senior Bai Chun".

This is a romantic two-way love, but it becomes more dreamlike in this hazy and obscure, and it is even more inextricable.

These are the comments on the creative technique and writing style, and then the connotation of the story.

For Yuanshan Ruyue, there is nothing to say about this.The philosophical and religious thoughts in it need to be carefully analyzed in the follow-up. What the story itself shows is completely Kazama Xi style, that is, it unabashedly shows those dark, depressed and realistic plots.

For example, a girl who lost her sense of pain was ravaged by delinquent boys like a puppet.Because the girl doesn't know what pain is, the delinquent boy uses various means to torture the girl.The side of human nature that represents the beast is vividly displayed.

For another example, the Liyuan Women's College mentioned in the forget recording is originally a seminary representing purity, but it is full of dirt.The scumbag teacher organizes the students and girls to sell money, and the plot of taking drugs and falling from power is enough to make people sick.

For this kind of plot, Yuanshan Ruyue's feelings are just helpless.

The boy is good at everything, but he has an inexplicable bad taste in dealing with female characters.

Not to mention the little match girl, Mariya who was imprisoned and forced to give birth by a rat since the novel, let alone the magic circle.

"You can't find a girlfriend like this, Mr. Xi..."

Yuanshan Ruyue's slender fingers slid across the mouse, and couldn't help but complain to himself.

Obviously, I have never been hurt by a girl before...

It is different from Wu Shanyun guessing whether Feng Jianxi had a painful relationship history before.Toyama Kisaragi, who has a good relationship with Akane Kazama, naturally knows that the gentle boy has never been in a relationship yet.

ps: I can really play airspace for a lifetime.

Chapter 240 Online Novel

On the second day of the new year, Yuanshan Ruyue asked Kazama Xi to meet again.

The meeting address is a coffee shop.

Although it is the statutory holiday time, a large number of shops are closed to enjoy the rare rest time of the year, but there are also hard-working shops that open after the New Year.

Kazama Xi has a very good habit, that is, when making an appointment to meet someone, she will mention arriving at the agreed place, and she will never let anyone wait for her, no matter whether the person who made the appointment is a man or a woman.

Arrived at the coffee shop that Toyama Kisaragi mentioned earlier, sat down by the window, and ordered a cup of Blue Mountain. Before Toyama Kisaragi came, Kazama Xi used the Internet to pass the time.

Mobile Internet, this different time and space is not uncommon.

Mobile communication technology, different time and space is also developing rapidly, roughly based on the 3G level of Kazama Xi's previous life.In addition to the difficulty of watching videos, normal web browsing, chatting, and viewing pictures can already be done.

After browsing the forum for a while in Kazama Xi, the Lord also came over at the appointed time.

Toyama Kisaragi took off the kimono she wore when she visited the shrine yesterday, and wore a thick white coat with a scarf wrapped around her neck. The simple attire also showed a sense of freshness and purity.

"Sorry I'm late..."

Even though she took the initiative to invite someone out, yet the other party arrived before her, Yuanshan Ruyue suddenly felt a little embarrassed.

"It's okay, I just came here too..." Kazama Xi smiled slightly.

After Yuanshan Ruyue took a seat opposite him, took off the scarf and put it on the seat next to him, Kazama Xi asked:

"Have you finished reading "The Realm of the Sky"?"

Yuanshan Ruyue calling him out is naturally not just a date between a man and a woman.

"of course."

Yuan Shan Ruyue nodded slightly, and called the waiter to order a cup of latte before looking at Kazama Xi.

"After I got home yesterday, I couldn't wait to read it. After reading it, I realized that the sky had already dimmed."

"how do you feel?"