Gotta Go the Healing Route
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As we all know, the rhythm of writing a novel is very important, especially if it is an entertaining web article.The excellent rhythm and dense cool points are the motivation for readers to keep reading the web articles with millions of words.
As a novelist in his previous life, Kazama Xi had naturally studied rhythm.
In fact, the so-called rhythm should follow the principle of a wavy line.
The rhythm of the story goes from trough to climax, and then from climax to trough. Maintaining this rhythm can ensure that something cool happens intensively.
In this life, Kazama Xi changed her job and became a manga artist. Obviously, he no longer needs the rhythm used in the online novels in the previous life.Because web novels and comics cannot be put together, the fast-paced massive updates pursued by web novels and the ultra-long specifications obviously do not match the comics that were updated last week and mainly focus on foreshadowing.
But this is not to say that the two have nothing in common, at least they both maintain the same principle in the promotion of the story-emotional venting.
That is to say, if there is effort, there will be rewards. Every chapter must let readers secrete dopamine and vent their emotions.
And the works that follow this principle are long-running with kingly passion.
What is the nature of blood?It's an emotional outburst.
The beginning and end of the chapter, the shaping of the atmosphere of the story before and after the two parts are often two opposite extremes.In the first half, the tone of the story should be as low as possible, while in the second half it should be as high as possible.
The depth of this space is the space that can arouse the reader's emotions.
Think about those famous Wang Dao comics, what is the most passionate bridge in the story.
In a desperate situation, the protagonist, or the protagonist group, turn the tide.
When something is abandoned by everyone, only the protagonist insists on it.
Although he is weak, he has to strengthen a powerful enemy for something.
And so on.
Speaking of it, the evil path is actually not suitable for such a law of emotional catharsis.This is determined by the tone of the story.
The tone of the evil way is dark, and the suffering is often more than the joy, and the struggle is more than the persistence.
Also, the evil protagonist is more rational than emotional.
This is why the benevolent protagonist template has to bring a stunned green label.Because only Lengtouqing can persevere, the protagonist of Lengtouqing can be so emotional, and can persist in all kinds of situations.
However, compared with the emphasis on rhythm, Xiedaoman actually puts more energy on the creation of the plot itself.
As I said before, there is actually no difference in plot level between Giant and other kingly comics.
At least, before the full picture of the setting has been unfolded and the basement of Allen's house has not been opened, the ingenious conception of the plot cannot be seen for the time being.
The main reason why readers think the story is great and the reputation of the giant soars is the rhythm, not the plot itself.
The first plot rhythm point is that Allen turned into a giant and turned out.
The second rhythm point that followed was naturally the plot of Allen's suspicion after his return.
Allen, who turned into a giant, went around killing the giants who invaded the wall. When he canceled the giant and returned to human form, he found that there were only Mikasa and Almin beside him.
And the three of them are now surrounded by human soldiers.
It turned out that Wellman, the leader of the garrison team, was worried that Allen would ask him.But under the superimposed tension, Wellman fell into a frenzy, and before Allen could explain, he ordered to fire.
At the time of the crisis, Allen remembered his father's experience of injecting himself with medicine, bit his finger and turned into a half-giant, blocking the blow.
When the soldiers present saw Alan transform into a giant with their own eyes, they naturally panicked even more.Man has always had the greatest hostility to forces beyond his control.Seeing this, Allen didn't plan to wait to die obediently, but wanted to leave here and find out the truth behind the whole thing alone.
He was obviously a hero who resolved the city's crisis, yet he suffered such treatment.
Such a plot naturally makes countless readers feel uncomfortable.
But at this moment, Armin stood up.
"I am a soldier who has sworn to give my heart for the revival of mankind. If I can sacrifice my faith, that will be my heart's wish."
"If he can combine the power of the giant he possesses with the remaining troops, it is not impossible to take back this city."
"For the glory of mankind, in the short time before my death, I will also explain his strategic value!"
Faced with the doubts suffered by his friend, Armin, who has always been submissive, stood up and said these words out loud.
At such a critical time, Alan and Mikasa still chose to believe in Almin and let him say these words.
Similarly, for the sake of his friends, Armin bravely spoke out what he thought in the face of the muzzle aimed at him.
In the desperate situation, Almin's words undoubtedly aroused the readers' emotions again.
"Oh oh oh!!! It's so hot!!!"
"Give your heart!!!"
"Is this the work Mr. Yu Biechao can draw? The man who has suffered so much and witnessed the darkness of society."
"What do you know, a man is at least a teenager. A teenager is hot-blooded, this is romance, this is love."
............
"This part of the plot is very well drawn..."
After reading the letters from readers and receiving feedback, Aster Uemura came to Kazama Xi's studio with a smile on her face.
"I can't tell, our master of the evil way is quite good at drawing kingly manga."
"These few words recently made my blood boil even after I read them."
"yes..."
Sitting behind the seat, Kazama Xi said calmly.
As a giant in the early and mid-term, he has no doubts about the reader's reaction after the text is copied to this world.
The first hegemonic work that can break the circle, it goes without saying that the tight rhythm and passionate atmosphere of the giants in the early stage.
"Moreover, with these waves of rhythm, the image of the main characters has also stood up."
Although it looks a little stunned, the brave and resolute protagonist Allen has the ability to transform into a giant.
Mikasa is super powerful and deeply in love with Allen.
And, although frail, but very smart, Almin who is soft on the outside and strong on the inside.
Wang Dao comics are generally group dramas, with a lot of main characters, and it must be more difficult to create characters.Coupled with the fact that traditional kingly characters have the necessary qualities of greatness and righteousness, it is more difficult to highlight characteristics than ordinary character creation.If you don't have some ability, it's easy to fall into the predicament of facial makeup, and naturally it can't be called an excellent comic.
Furthermore, since this is a "serious" kingly cartoon, it is impossible to create character characteristics in an "abnormal" way like the previous "Chain Saw Man".
As an editor, Aster Uemura was really worried about this aspect before.
"Anyway, you did a great job. If you continue to paint like this, maybe one day you will be able to successfully wash it off."
"Washing white?"
Hearing Aster Uemura's words, Yu Kazama's expression suddenly became strange.
"I'm already satisfied if readers don't spray me..."
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"If you don't get sprayed, is it a victory?"
Uemura Ziwan was taken aback by Kazama Xi's words.
The author is usually sprayed because the plot overturned, and the reader was fed a mouthful of shit by accident.However, there is an editor in charge of the comics. If the drawing is really poisonous, the editor will return the manuscript.Therefore, this situation is rare.
The other kind of spraying is to send out blades, and draw the plot of the Tauren series, which can be attributed to the needs of the plot. This situation cannot be pulled back by the editor.
Kazama Xi's situation undoubtedly belongs to the latter. At present, it seems that the car will not overturn, mainly because of the knife.
However, his situation is still a bit special now, and it is not entirely caused by the depression plot.
"Aren't you being sprayed every day?" Aster Uemura asked back.
The special situation of Kazama Xi is that... even if he draws daily plots, some people will come to spray a word or two.It's not that he is really slandering him, but that his mouth is familiar, and there is a sign of stalking.
"I'm heartbroken, Miss Ziwan..."
"Just kidding, just kidding..." Aster Uemura explained with a smile.
Naturally, she also knew the situation, and she didn't care about the joke-like spraying rain on this kind of readers for a long time.
Kazama Xi said this, which means that the following must be a plot that can make readers sincerely break their defenses.
After all, "Attack on Titan" was originally a non-traditional manga of passionate blood.
If you insist on following the orthodox kingly route, which one of the three major migrant workers in the previous life will die, and even Kazama Xi can produce the ultimate nuclear bomb like Dragon Ball.
Naturally, Kazama Xi had her own reasons for choosing the giant who attacked Wenchao.In addition to wanting to transform this flawed and regretful work that fell on the road to becoming a god, there is also the consideration of changing the style.
What is the difference between a famous old author and a cute new author?
Certainly the style of the work.
The style of the story tone of the work is equivalent to a recognizable face left by the author to the readers.
As the saying goes, a person needs face, and a tree needs bark. Any creator wants to add a distinctive personal style to his work and distinguish it from other works of the same kind.
Kazama Xi has already determined her own style from the very beginning of her contribution.
Depression, enough authenticity, and the love behind the shaping of suffering.
Although it seems that Feng Jianxi is changing to a kingly way now, there is no reason to explain the change in style when copying orthodox kingly works.But he still doesn't want to give up the style he finally left behind...
Even... this style has always caused him to be misunderstood by the majority of readers, and he has been wronged for nothing.
The story must be realistic enough, the plot must be tragic enough, and at the same time, it must reflect the exquisite plot concept, and the rhythm must make people excited.
Even though there are countless excellent works in Feng Jianxi's memory, there are very few that meet this point.In the end, the giants are the most suitable.
The enthusiasm that Giant gives people basically comes from the principle of emotional catharsis, the more you give, the more you will gain.In other words: the harder it is to win and the more sacrifices you make, the stronger the feeling of winning will be.
Among the giants, the battle of Maria, the disastrous victory on Pa Island, and Bai Ye, which can be called hell-level plots, are basically more tragic than the other.Of course, when you win in the end, you can also release the depression in your heart.
This coincides with the concept of 'Love Warrior' in some respects.
In addition to the setting, the giant system is not fancy in Wangdao comics, and it also provides convenience for the above realistic and tragic plots.
In this way, it goes without saying to choose a giant.
As for whether such a tragic plot will make readers uncomfortable....
What's wrong with that?
After walking a kilometer under the scorching sun, I will give you a bottle of iced Coke to drink.Or, at normal temperatures, you just sit there doing nothing and sipping a Coke.
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