Something is Wrong with My Love Game

"I'll tell you! What are you doing with so many private goods!"

"Writing a story, the plot is exciting and the most important!"

"The evaluation of readers is really the most real!"

Green, who was well-received before, began to squirm.

"Hahaha, don't be sad, Aesop, anyway, there is time, you can continue to optimize."

"Yes, if you don't have a clue, we can take the time to guide you."

The other two old men you said to me, and stood by the fire.

"Creating...a scholar's business..."

"What do ordinary people know!!!"

"I won't change!"

Aesop trembled in anger.

"Don't worry about him, tell me about my evaluation!"

"And me and me!"

The two old men who had not yet been evaluated approached Li Pai, eagerly hoping to get their own evaluation.

"Are you two Muhammad and Andersen?"

"Hey......"

Li Pai sighed, looking embarrassed.

"Hey! You said it!"

"How's our evaluation?"

"Yes, you say it, don't say anything and stop halfway!"

The two old men were a little anxious.

This is too appetizing!

Chapter 436 Break the gang! You

"What's your opinion on..."

"You have to be mentally prepared."

Li Pai said weakly.

"It's already ready!"

"Just say it!"

"Yes, my mental quality is much better than that of Aesop!"

"Just say anything, I can handle it."

The two made a quick statement.

"Okay...then I'll say it!"

"You two's work...is treated like trash in our world."

Li Pai paused for a while after speaking.

Sure enough, the expressions of the two froze instantly, as if they had eaten shit...

Aesop and Green on the side showed a smile.

"People in our world say that what you two wrote, one is too childish, the other is too bloody and violent."

"It's almost like writing, I also like hydrology..."

"It's very typical junk literature."

"In our world, it would be mocked to see the work of the two of you."

"Hey... I'm sorry... I just relayed the general opinion of people in our world."

"Actually, I think the two of you wrote pretty well."

Li Pai looks like a white lotus flower, which makes people not angry with him.

"I......."

"you......."

The two old men didn't know what to say for a while.

The huge psychological gap made the two of them a little confused.

"Hahaha!"

"Don't be sad, don't be sad, anyway, you have time, you can change it slowly!"

"If you need guidance, I can guide you too!"

Aesop threw back the words of the two old men just now.

"You... it's too much!"

"What you write is not very good! What qualifications do you have to guide us!"

"that is!"

Muhammad and Andersen said bluntly.

"Oh, don't make noise, don't make noise, everyone is their own, be kind."

Green, who was well-received, couldn't hide a smile on his face. It looked like he was trying to persuade him, but it always felt like he was showing off.

"you shut up!"

"What the heck!"

"Don't you just write a few dark fairy tales!"

"What's there to be proud of!"

"That's right! I don't think your writing is much better than ours!"

"It must be those ordinary people who have no taste!"

Muhammad and Andersen took their anger on the smiling Green again.

The four old men quarreled between you and me.

Li Pai on the side laughed without saying a word.

This is what I want!

These four old men share the same godhead. If they are allowed to have a few internal strife... Maybe there is hope that they can directly split their godhead.

The four old men are getting louder and fiercer...

At this moment, Green's expression suddenly changed.

"Since my story is so popular and they are so rubbish..."

"Why should I share the godhead with them?"

"I can be completely independent on my own!"

The idea of ​​independence began to sprout in Green's heart.

Looking at the three old friends in front of him, the more he looked at it, the more he hated it...

Usually a few of them always feel that they are very arrogant, but now they have been slapped in the face!

This new god is not familiar with the four of them, so he won't talk nonsense, so the situation that he is awesome and his teammates are trash is real.

You can really consider being independent.

With its own popularity...

After the dismantling, you will definitely have an independent godhead quickly!

As for the three of them... Surely you can't let them hold you back!

"Several... I'm sorry..."

"It made you quarrel..."

"Actually...it's normal to have high and low writing skills..."

"That kind of talent isn't something everyone has, right?"

Li Pai seemed to be persuading, but in fact he added fuel to the fire.

Hearing the word "talent", except for Green's face, the expressions of the other three collapsed.

They are unwilling to admit that their talent is not good!

How can he be in this position without talent...

As for Green...

Seeing Green's smug look, the three of them got angry.

"What are you proud of!"

"People in a certain world like what you write, but not all the worlds will like it!"

"that is!"

"Look at the way you look like a villain..."

The three of them reached a temporary tacit understanding on Green.

Green was still immersed in joy, and he was instantly unhappy after hearing what they said.

"Pig teammate! Can't take it!"

"If you hadn't dragged me down these years, maybe my achievements would have been higher!"

"Since you don't like me..."