Variety Comic Daily: Their Eyes Are Not Quite Right

He admitted it bluntly: "It's true that I haven't talked about it."

"It's normal if you haven't talked about it. You wrote the interaction between the hero and heroine in it too beautifully."

"Then there are too many descriptions of the heroine's psychological activities, while the male protagonist has only a few words, isn't it a bit strange?"

"You don't seem to have much writing experience, is it your first novel writing?"

"and also......"

Next, Kasumigaoka Shiwa's expression kept changing following Shirakawa's words.

For a while he showed joy, for a while he frowned and thought, and for a while he was a little unhappy.

Emotions have been following the ups and downs, swinging.

After a while, wait for Bai Chuanshi to finish speaking in one breath.

After thinking about it, Xia Zhiqiu lightly opened her red lips: "I know what you said, but I really don't know how to describe the inner activities of the male protagonist."

"Because many times, I actually don't understand what boys are thinking. Many high school boys seem to only have those disgusting thoughts every day."

"Then, the plot seems to be exactly as Bai Chuan-kun said, it can't be too smooth, or add some setbacks to the hero and heroine? Let the readers feel ups and downs."

"Anyway, thank you very much, Bai Chuan-kun, what you said does make sense."

Even so, she was still a little unhappy.

Because of Bai Chuan's style, that "bossing around" attitude.

Pointing out her painstaking efforts in writing for the first time is equivalent to picking on her child's faults, which makes her a little upset.

The most important thing is that in the original drawing of the male protagonist template, she is based on the face of Shirakawa-style...

Who knew that this person would be so shameless.

Bai Chuanshi showed a look of 'children are really teachable'.

He smiled lightly and said, "Actually, I only know a little bit about this aspect."

"However, my feelings are indeed like this, and I have fully expressed it."

Kasumigaoka's round legs were intertwined, and she was clenching her silver teeth with her arms folded.

"Thank you very much for your cooperation, my friend will be 'very happy' when he hears it!!"

"But even so, it can't prevent you from being a pervert who sexually harassed a beautiful girl for the first time."

"You say yes, Bai Chuan-kun."

Speaking of this, she showed a smile that was not a smile.

Deliberately stretching her jade legs, the black stockings kept rippling in Bai Chuan's eyes.

"I just had the courage to speak out my thoughts, but you seem to be quite brave."

In response to this scene, Shirakawa-shi directly stretched out his palm.

Within a breath, he grasped the pair of objects that were an eyesore, and quietly felt the warmth from his palms.

For these, he jumped face in front of him.

Will not choose to refuse, and even want to encourage the other party, the other party can dance more cheerfully.

Bai Chuanshi's heart was even more turbulent, but his face was calm and composed, with an expression of 'extremely serious'.

The sudden situation caused a flash of panic in Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's beautiful eyes.

He quickly turned his body and said angrily: "Mr. Bai Chuan, you are more than that, you have the courage to speak your mind."

"Do you still dare to use actual actions to show your perverted behavior? It seems that you are not afraid of criminal law at all?"

"If you want to satisfy the desire in your heart through such behavior."

"Then, please excuse my refusal, I'm going to call the police."

Seeing this, Bai Chuanshi originally only wanted to scare her.

He quickly let go of the object in his hand, then patted his pants and stood up.

"It's not that serious yet, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, I'll go back to class first."

"Next time, don't seduce boys casually like this. After all, those other boys may not have my concentration, so they really can't help it."

Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at the back of pushing the door lock and leaving the rooftop.

Spit secretly, this shameless guy.

Bai Chuanshi, what kind of woman does he think she is?

Do you think she is the kind of woman who casually seduces other boys?

How could she be so unrestrained...

Thinking of this, she felt the changes in her body just now.

The stimulation that seemed to be passing by like an electric current made her clamp her legs tightly.

She barely felt it just now, it seemed that there was some strange excitement, which made her a little ashamed.

A few minutes later, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu calmed down.

He stretched out his hand to pick up the text of the light novel and put it on the chair, and his comments flashed in his mind.

After taking a few deep breaths, he smiled.

reader? ! !Writing light novels is really cool.

first reader?This feels surprisingly good.

Shirakawa style...?More or less curious.

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Chapter 43 has been revised, but it cannot be seen in the APP.

Only the web version is changed, and those who are interested can use the web version to have a look.

Chapter 46 Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is a little tangled (seeking data!)

It had already cleared up in the afternoon, and the scorching sun had already evaporated the puddles of water on the ground.

The white clouds are fragmented, wandering in layers.

The bald teacher with a strong hairstyle just announced his disbandment.

Bai Chuanshi was dressed at this time, and he was sitting in the shade of a tree after changing into a white sportswear.

His eyes scanned unconsciously, and the students who caught his eyes.

And those students in his class, in groups of three or four.

There are also those who sit in the shade and chat.

Most of them are playing the sports they want to play.

Some boys and girls gathered together to chat.

Or slapping tennis balls, or kicking football, but it also has a bit of swaying youth.

Not far away at this time, there are also third-year students in the activity class.

The gazes of these boys looked in the direction of Bai Chuan, full of playful and playful expressions.

One of them was a boy with yellow hair and a slightly messy hairstyle.

Unconsciously tapping the basketball in his palm, he asked plainly.

"What do you think of the vigor of the younger generation Mimi Baichuanshi?"

"It's very difficult to come across an opportunity to have the same class together."

Hearing this, one of the boys behind said with some fear.

"Sakagami, Bai Chuanshi is not easy to mess with, let's forget about it."

The voice fell.

The next moment, he was slapped by another boy with bronze skin and short hair: "Okita, what nonsense are you talking about?"

"Those rumors outside the school are all false, and this time, we didn't say we were going to fight that boy Bai Chuanshi."

"Hahaha, that's right, what are you afraid of, Okita? As a senior, you are actually afraid of a mere junior?"

"We are dubbed by people all over the country: 'the five generals without a crown'."

Sakagami and the rest of the boys burst out laughing when they saw him shaking his head.

"But...but...he is really not easy to mess with."

There was a flash of fear in Okita's eyes, he was not talking nonsense, nor was he timid.

It was the only time when Bai Chuan beat up a few people in the boy's high school.

He was standing far away at that time, and he was present and witnessed it with his own eyes.

At that time, those five high school boys outside the school surrounded Bai Chuanshi on the street.

Okita saw it at that time, and was still secretly delighted and gloating.

After all, Bai Chuanshi is very popular among the girls' group in the whole college, including their third-grade girls at the same level, which makes them, seniors, feel very humiliated.

So, he was looking forward to the scene where Bai Chuanshi was beaten black and blue by those people.

But what happened next left him dumbfounded in astonishment.

He didn't even talk nonsense, and he didn't even give the other party a chance to speak harshly.

Within a few seconds, several high school boys were all lying on the ground, only various screams and groans could be heard.

Until now, Okita seemed to be able to hear those screams in his ears.

It sounds like it is fluttering in the ear, and it is as clear as it is engraved into the recording...

Thinking of this, his body trembled like a tiger in fear.