After she sat down, Zhenbai couldn't wait to ask:
"Qin Hai, have you finished reading the manga I drew!?"
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Chapter 130 Do You Have A Daughter?With whom?
Facing Shiina Mashiro's expectant eyes, Izumi Kotokai hesitated for a moment, and then said:
"I've finished reading your manga."
"What about the impression after reading it?" Shiina Mashiro then asked, her expectations for the evaluation were visible to the naked eye.
If it is polite to say good things, it may make Zhenbai more confident and happy.But Izumi Kotokai doesn’t want to do this. If he doesn’t face up to and change his shortcomings, then Mashiro’s road to manga creation may come to this point.
Good medicine is bitter.
"Very boring."
Without any euphemism, Izumi Qinhai directly expressed the first thought in his mind after reading the manga drawn by Mashiro without any embellishment.
"Is it boring?" The excitement in Shiina Mashiro's eyes dimmed slightly, like a feeling of loss.
"Well, it's very boring and boring. Although it's a bit rude to say this, when I finished reading this manga, the only thought in my mind was, why are there manga with such a boring plot? Obviously, the drawing skills are so good." Izumi Qinhai After speaking bluntly.
Put the finished hand-drawn comics on the table and return them to Shiina Mashiro.
"I always thought that I could hear a long post-reading review from Qin Hai." Mashiro Shiina said in a very frustrated tone.
Although the voice is not much different from the usual speaking voice, it sounds like a depressed and lost mood.
He must have been hit by what he said just now.
"It's a pity." Izumi Qinhai shook his head: "Even if you have to deal with it and think about the aftermath of reading, it is impossible to turn something that can be finished in one sentence into ten sentences. The advantages of your comic are only two. Two, one is that the drawing skills are very good, and the other is that the storyboard is very interesting."
"Is the plot boring?"
"It's boring. Do you still want to draw the second volume of this manga?" Izumi Kotokai asked.
"Yes, I have already started drawing the second volume, and I want to draw the ending."
Shiina Mashiro said softly like a whisper, and after finishing speaking, quietly sighed.
The two remained in this state and were quiet for a while, then Shiina Mashiro raised his head, looked at Qin Hai, and said:
"Qin Hai, are you trying to persuade me to give up comics?"
Even if Izumi Kotokai asked her to give up manga, Shiina Mashiro would not have any complaints.
Because she has heard too many words to persuade her to give up comics.
How about one more sentence?
"No. From the very beginning, I never thought of persuading you to give up creating comics. Never." Hequan Qinhai said directly.
"Eh?! But didn't you just say that the manga I drew was boring?" Shiina Mashiro looked at her in disbelief, her slightly widened orange-red eyes vividly showed the girl's emotions at this time.
"It's really boring, but since you know it's boring, why don't you correct it with your heart when you draw next time? Try to make the plot of your next comic more interesting and attractive." Hequan Qinhai chuckled Said.
Except for a very few geniuses, no one is born with ideas and creations.
It's all a little bit of effort to conceive, and a little bit to improve, so that the works I write become more and more attractive.
This is true for writing novels, and it is also true for drawing comics.
Few people reach the top right from the start.
"Then... can I draw the second volume of this manga?"
"If you want to draw, just draw. Draw the ending of this manga." Hequan Qinhai said encouragingly.
"Maybe the plot will be a little boring."
"Then make the plot of the next volume less boring."
Shiina Mashiro pursed her lips slightly, and said, "Qin Hai, what you said is different from them..."
"Ok?"
"After my family knew that I wanted to draw manga, they didn't even read it, so they let me give up and let me devote my mind to drawing. So, when you are willing to read my manga, I am very happy .Although after hearing your evaluation, I still feel quite lost in my heart."
Zhenbai's family asked her to give up manga, and Izumi Kotokai could understand.
At least Shiina Mashiro's current ability in manga creation is only drawing skills but no plot, the plot is extremely boring, even if it is submitted to a manga publishing house, the manga editor who may see her contribution will only persuade her to give up first Create comics and consider whether to be an illustrator?
Instead of letting Zhenbai devote most of her energy to manga and delay painting, it is better to let her give up early and devote all her energy to painting.
Try to go higher and farther on the road of painting, and create her own legend!
"If I had a daughter with a very high talent for drawing, maybe I would persuade her to give up comics at first. But if she really likes to create comics, I will nod and agree. Since the child likes it, and I have the ability to be The child’s backing, let her bravely take the path of comic creation. It’s okay to fail, at worst, let her rethink her own path.”
Hequan Qinhai expressed his views on Zhenbai.
After listening to Shiina Mashiro, she tilted her head and asked very cutely:
"Qin Hai, do you already have a daughter? With whom?"
"No, no! I didn't mean that, I just used an analogy." Hequan Qinhai hurriedly explained.
Zhenbai's brain circuit is a bit too strange!
However, compared with just now, the expression on Zhenbai's face has gradually eased.
She cheered up and said:
"After I finish drawing the second volume, Qin Hai, are you still willing to be my first reader? Although it may still be a bit boring, I will try my best to make the plot more interesting!"
"I've always wanted to."
Originally thought that Shiina Mashiro might be depressed for a while after hearing her evaluation, but unexpectedly, Mashiro was only lost for a while, and then regained his spirits.
Of course, Hequan Qinhai also took half of the credit for this.If it weren't for what she said just now, she might really be hit and depressed for several days.
After Izumi Kotokai turned around, he saw Yuigahama Yui's pitiful eyes.
Needless to say, I understand I understand.
"Come on, I'll give you homework, class is about to start, remember to copy it quickly."
"Woooo, thank you, Qinhai."
After Yuihama Yui took over Izumi Kotokai's homework, she started copying it.
With the pen in hand, there is even an afterimage!
Originally thought that Yui would take up a few more minutes of class time to finish homework.
Unexpectedly, when there was one minute before class, Yui finished copying homework steadily like an old dog.
——But you are familiar with it.
"The last class this afternoon seems to be a self-study class, Qin Hai, can you lend me a copy of your homework then? I think I'll finish it before school, so I don't have to worry about my homework when I get home at night!"
"Even if there is no self-study class, you won't worry about homework every night, right?" Hequan Qinhai said speechlessly.
However, when mentioning today, Hequan Qinhai suddenly thought that today is Tuesday.
Doesn’t the remedial class time set yesterday start from this afternoon?
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"Yuyi, tuition will start this afternoon." Hequan Qinhai said.
"Eh!? This afternoon?"
"Why do you look surprised, starting tutoring today, isn't it the time you decided?"
"Oh! I almost forgot, I will ask you to teach me more from this afternoon, Mr. Izumi~"
"After the monthly exam, if your grades improve, please remember to treat me to a cake."
"I can make a cake just for you~"
Hearing what Yuigahama Yui said, Izumi Kotokai felt a little hopeful in his heart.
A cake specially made for her...
Uh... Maybe it was because I read some comics with many colors before going to bed last night, and heard that Yui said that I would make a cake for her.Qin Bao's small head instantly made up a lot of pictures that he was embarrassed to describe.
lsp.
At the end of the day, Yuigahama Yui did not doze off in at least three classes.
Shizuka Hiratsuka was also taken aback when she noticed that Yuihama Yui was looking at the blackboard.
Are you still dreaming without waking up in the morning? ?Yuigahama didn't doze off in class today?
This anomalous phenomenon, if included in "Beat the Science", at least three episodes can be filmed!
In order to verify whether he was dreaming or not, Hiratsuka Shizuka decided to wake up Izumi Kotokai to answer the question.
Hequan Qinhai:? ? ?
After school, Yuigahama Yui went home first, while Izumi Kotokai left Sobu High and went to Yuigahama's house after participating in an hour of art club activities.
According to the location sent to her by Yuihama Yui, Izumi Kotokai came to Yubihama's house, which is a two-story one-family building that looks relatively small.
It is also relatively close to the dumpling cake shop.
It is said to be relatively close, but in fact it is only a little closer, and it is quite a detour to walk.
After ringing the doorbell, Yuigahama Yui hurried out to open the door after seeing that it was Izumi Kotokai.
"Qin Hai, welcome to my house to play."
"I'm not here to play, but to give you tuition. Don't you need to help in the cake shop today?" Hequan Qinhai took off his shoes at the entrance while talking, and put the brown leather shoes aside, wrapped in white pantyhose little feet on the floor.
"The business of the cake shop is not very good every day. There is nothing to be busy today, and after my mother knew that you were going to give me tutoring, she gave me a holiday and asked me to study hard."
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