Huanxi Boy: I work as a charterer in Shuxiang Yayuan

in the room.

Fang Duoduo pulled a stool for Zhang Tianxiao to sit down.

He said happily: "I didn't expect so many people to read this novel. I have only published ten chapters, and there are hundreds of comments. There are also many flowers, evaluation tickets, and rewards!"

"Have you published it?"

"That's right! It's the website you told me about. The readers on it are really enthusiastic, and they all look like Yan Zu."

"Let me see how you write."

Zhang Tianxiao sat in front of the computer, opened the novel website, and indeed published ten chapters with more than 2 words.

After opening Chapter 1, Zhang Tianxiao was amazed.

The language is capable and the story is wonderfully written.

It was written exactly according to the outline content he gave.

After reading just one chapter, Zhang Tianxiao knew that this fighting spirit was bound to burn in the sky.

Open the comment section directly.

The speeches of the great gods from all walks of life are even more exciting.

Gu Yue Xiaoyao: I'm so stupid... This novel is so coquettish and cowhide!I love love love.

Cosmic Dinosaur Jayden: Cao thief, where to run, write quickly, write more.

Xiaolou had another breeze last night: a masterpiece!I heard that the author is still a girl?

Cao Gong's little fan: The vote for adding more has been voted, it's a slippery one.

Magic Card Maker: Come on more, flowers, there will be no shortage of monthly tickets, voted.

Leng Di Yan Bing: Hurry up!Waiting for dinner!

Xia Benmo's three steps: If you want it, you want it all, let me accept it.

LSP who is obsessed with novels: After reading it, how many times a day?

Of course, there are praises and criticisms.

But that doesn't matter.

There is no perfect novel, and no perfect author.

They all raised their shortcomings because of their deep love.

However, there were a few comments that attracted Zhang Tianxiao's special attention.

"The author's writing is good, but the details of the relationship between men and women are not well described. Could it be that the author hasn't been in love yet?"

The following is a follow-up reply...  …

"In my opinion, when describing the relevant plot, I can't write the flavor at all."

"It is suggested that the author should be brave enough to dedicate himself to writing a book, just like how can you write about the sweetness of love if you have never been in love? It is not enough to rely on imagination alone."

"The author is going to the big health care..."

"Fast food is only a few dozen yuan cheaper."

Zhang Tianxiao pointed to the comments and showed them to Fang Duoduo.

"Now you know?"

"You have to experience it before you can write that flavor."

Fang Duoduo blushed.

What are you thinking?

How can anyone fall in love for the sake of writing a novel?

Simply absurd.

"You treat me as a three-year-old child?"

"Get up and don't look at it."

Fang Duoduo pulled it up.

"I just want you to show me where there are deficiencies in the writing, not for you to browse the comment area."

Zhang Tianxiao put his hands behind his back, looking like an old pedant, and said.

"Readers' opinions are the root of your growth. It is useless for me to say that your writing is not good. If readers say that your writing is not good, you have to change it!"

Fang Duoduo looked at the comments with a sad face.

You can't fall in love for the sake of a novel, can you?

She dared not think about it.

"I'll think about it again!"

Fang Duoduo was very confused.

Zhang Tianxiao gave an idea.

"If you don't understand anything, just ask me, my brother!"

"You don't understand the matter of falling in love, just watch more idol dramas, wouldn't it be enough for you to watch youth dramas?"

Zhang Tianxiao laughed.

Go closer and close the computer.

"Okay, don't be in such a hurry to write, you haven't gone out for a stroll since you came back, have you?"

"Your mother doesn't go to work today, so you can go out and get acquainted. The 4.0 school will start soon, and you can only write novels when you have time."

Fang Duoduo stretched.

"I'm also going to go to the supermarket, do you want to come together?"

"I won't go. Later, Wang Yidi will come to see me and rent a house. When you are free, you can also chat with everyone in the group and get familiar with it. You don't need to just know how to write novels."

"Okay! I remember."

The two walked out of the bedroom.

Dong Wenjie and Fang Yifan were very surprised.

"Duoduo, are you finally out?"

"Well, mom, I want to go to the supermarket, which one of you will go?"

"I'm going, I'm going."

Fang Yifan was the most excited.

Dong Wenjie beamed with joy, "Let's go, mom will accompany you, let's all go."

"Xiao Zhang, do you want to come together?"

"No need, Wang Yidi and her mother will be here in a while, and they also want to rent a room. I'll wait for them at the door."

Zhang Tianxiao looked at the message from Wang Yidi's private chat on the phone and said.

PS: (Send it on the [-]th update today, okay).

178 Let's Share Your House

"Okay then, let's go out together."

Dong Wenjie went back to the house and took her bag.

A group of people walked out of the house in a mighty manner.

When they arrived at the gate of the community, before seeing Wang Yidi, Dong Wenjie and the others went to the supermarket first.

Zhang Tianxiao waited at the door alone for a while, Wang Yidi and her mother Wang Qing arrived late.

As soon as they met, Zhang Tianxiao hurriedly shouted: "Hello, Auntie!"

Wang Qing was stunned for a moment.

He looked at his daughter in surprise.

"Ah! Mom, this is the house of my classmate Zhang Tianxiao, as I told you."

Wang Qing suddenly smiled.

"Short oil! What a handsome young man, just call me sister, Auntie looks old."

Huh... Zhang Tianxiao groaned in his heart.

Wang Qing is different from other girls.

As expected of a better personality.

"Then respect is worse than obedience, sister."

"I didn't expect my sister to be so young and beautiful. No wonder she gave birth to a beautiful woman like Wang Yidi."

Zhang Tianxiao took pictures in a flash of hype.

Both mother and daughter are very useful.

"The young man's mouth is quite sweet, my sister likes it very much!"

"He is so handsome, he must be very popular with girls."

"I will definitely not worry about finding a wife in the future." 27

Zhang Tianxiao smiled slightly.

He sneaked a glance at Wang Yidi.

is not that right!

Your niece calls me a male god.

I saw Wang Yidi pulled my mother.