Elves: starting from the different color Lalulas

Mary squinted at him, but said nothing.

Kacha————

The bonfire in the center of the clearing ignited faint sparks and sprinkled them into the air.

(Volume [-], end.)

Chapter 75 Comments at the end of the volume

Rather than listening to Ah Qiu, an author who hits the street, my friends probably want me to write a few more chapters, but the first volume is over, and I still feel that I should say a few words.

Thanks to all the readers who can see here, thank you for every speech, follow-up, votes, and rewards.

Thanks for getting me a second round of referrals. (It would be great if you can get the third round of recommendations~)

Thank you so much.

Next, talk about this book.

The plot of the first volume... There is actually nothing to say.

To put it too bluntly, it has no taste.

Let's talk about the main points of controversy.

(1) Human design.

Many readers feel that Xu Qiansu and Ma Li are like Watanabe and Qingye in Lianyou.

I am actually delighted to be thought of this way, because I am really trying to learn the daily writing style of Lianyou.

It is better to be recognized than to write a four-faced image.

Of course, Xu Qiansu is Xu Qiansu, Watanabe is Watanabe, Mali is Mali, and Qingye is Qingye. I wrote this just to add some attraction to the first volume.

This book won't go very far if you simply apply the character design.

In the future, there will be plots that will deepen the image of the hero and heroine. I hope that everyone can say that Marie is Marie, not just like Qing Yeshen.

In addition, there are some supporting roles, everyone thinks that they are too facial, such as the butler killed by Cattleya as a typical example.

This is because my writing skills are weak, and I deliberately create something cool and not flattering.

Wait for me to study in the future and improve my writing skills.

(2) In terms of painting style.

Many friends think that I am writing the dark stream, brainless and deeply disabled...

To be honest, after reading the first volume, no one should think so, right?

Whether it's the knife or the darkness, it's not what I want to write about.

What I want to write is a Japanese-style light novel, a novel that combines the warmth of the Pokémon world with logical reality, a bit of quackery and pyrotechnics.

It’s just that some pictures may be too forceful, and some friends can’t accept it, thinking that writing elvish texts shouldn’t have such things...

The ups and downs of the plot, after careful study, are indeed a little unreasonable, but Ah Qiu thinks, after all, it makes sense. (The helplessness of the weak pen)

Looking at it now, what Ah Qiu wrote is actually a romantic reality.

Romanticism dominates!

With so many famous scenes in the first volume, do you think it’s romantic or not? (kimbo)

If you think Wenqing is hypocritical, I will say it again, and I agree, because Aqiu is really just a newcomer.

Not to mention elf literature, there are so many types of good books from the starting point, with a style and writing style like mine, I think... not too many, right?

(3) Plot aspect.

Everyone should have discovered that this book... has no main line! ! !

Without a main line, there will be no sense of expectation, lack of motivation, and the results are destined to not be very good. I understand.

Not only that, but I also deliberately weakened the essential elements of online texts such as fighting monsters and upgrading, and numerical strength.

Even in the final battle of the first volume, I didn't write any battles and big scenes.

I also thought about appearing in the first volume, a villain who can survive three or four volumes as an enemy, with revenge as the main line in the early and mid-term, learning secrets.

I also thought about letting Sister Cang appear on the stage as the climax of the first volume.

But then think about it.

For one thing, I wrote Cui Xue's plot that didn't conform to the trend of Internet literature, so I just kept doing it without thinking about the grades, and wrote what I wanted to write in the first volume.

Secondly... I think the core of Pokémon lies in the journey (not the poisonous animation), in meeting all kinds of unknown Pokémon, who you meet, what happens with whom, and so on.

If you want to write about the taste of Pokémon, you should write travel notes! (definitely)

Of course, this is not how web articles should be written.

The facts are not contrary to my wishes. After all the factors of death, the results are ridiculously poor.

19 words, 7000 receipts, 480 follow-up readings...

Ugh.

I won't say much about the results, lest my friends feel that I am begging from you.

I don’t know if you all know Ji Da (Ji Cha)?

The harem style is the handle.

I have read online articles for many years, but I have not read a few books (because of the increasingly serious homogenization.).

Chicken University's books are one of the few that I can finish chasing. If you are interested, you can read it.

He has a fairy tale "Ask the Red Dust", which left a deep impression on me.

Because it is also not in line with the trend of online literature, the first volume is full of fairy tales and depth.

But in the end, even a master like him had to change his writing style after finishing the first volume to cater to the market because of the poor grades of the first volume.

As an author who also wants to eat, I understand him.

But as a reader, I feel sorry.

After reading "Ask the Red Dust", I no longer have the slightest interest in the fairy tales on the market.

Because the vast majority are just fighting and killing with changed skins.

There is no fairy spirit.

This is also related to personal taste. Please don't scold me, think that I don't know what is good and what is bad, and I have no vision (thank you).

I just share good books with you as a reader.

Far away.

In short, what I want to say is that as a newcomer writer, I don't have great writing skills. In terms of quality, this book is not comparable to "Ask the Red Dust".

But I want to continue the writing of the first volume of this book.

It's just to show a different story to friends who are as fatigued as me in the trend of more and more homogeneous routines and Xiaobaiwen in today's online writing market.

Although this is destined to be something that a small number of readers like to read.

Although with my weak writing skills, from the perspective of perception, it may not be comparable to those small white essays and routine essays.

The book is 19 words long. Although I have not received any news, it must be on the shelves. I implore all readers to support one or two.

(In the end, I was still begging for food).

Thanks again.

Oh, and one more point.

Kirulian is definitely going to evolve into Xanadu.

Some friends who can't accept it can abandon the book.

I also don't want to scam you out of your money.

that's all.

Thanks again.

Chapter 76 Joey's Adventure (1)

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The sound of the motorcycle engine starting was heard in the wooden pole town when the lights were just on, and the dim yellow lights lined up along the street pulled out a slender black shadow.

It was midnight when Xu Qiansu stopped his motorcycle at the Pokémon Center.

He took off his helmet, turned his head to look, and said in surprise, "Tonight...it's Miss Joy's turn to be on the night shift?"

But Joey was wearing a coat, with his hands folded on his lower abdomen, standing quietly at the door of the Pokémon Center.

The snow-white pretty face and green onion fingers were a little reddened by the cold.

Hearing this, she glanced at Xu Qiansu, and there was no emotion on her pretty face.

She exhaled lightly, stretched a little, "I'm sleepy, I'm going back to sleep."

After finishing speaking, he turned around and walked into the Pokémon Center.

Xu Qiansu looked at Mary who was sitting in the back seat.

Mary took off her helmet and brushed the hair on her shoulders, "I'm sleepy too."

Saying that, he picked up Pickpocket Cat and Morubek and walked into the Pokémon Center.

Xu Qiansu blinked, parked the motorcycle, and walked in with Kirulian in his arms. The doctor on night duty nodded slightly to him and said hello.

Xu Qiansu couldn't help laughing, and pinched Kirulian's little face, "I've been busy all night, I'm so sleepy, go back to sleep."

"Lian~"

Xu Qiansu stepped into the corridor, returned to the room, took a hot bath with the two cubs, then lay on the bed, and fell into a deep sleep after a while.

The forces behind Hascob are dealt with by the alliance, and he has already taken care of Mo Fei's affairs.