Comprehensive comic: I am a military advisor in a love story

"Ah?" Hikigaya Hachiman opened his dead eyes and was about to say, "If Koga is willing to take care of this matter, let him take care of it, and let us not take care of it. We can't take care of a great god like Shibabokuza."

As a result, before he could say anything, he met the cold gaze of Yukinoshita Yukino.

He trembled and chose to follow his heart.

Yukinoshita Yukino walked in with steps, and the two people behind him followed.

When a few people came in, they found that Gu Hechuan had already sat down.

There was originally a row of tables and chairs placed in the center of the service department, but now they were moved by Furukawa and set up for an interview.They became the judges, and Shibakiza Yoshiteru was the interviewer.

Yukinoshita Yukino found her seat and sat down with a cold face.

The original seats have fixed numbers, so you can find your original chair.

Yukinoshita Yukino is sitting on the far left, next to Hikigaya Hachiman, and further to the right are Furukawa himself and Yuigahama Yui.

Yukinoshita Yukino's face was expressionless and she didn't say a word.

Furukawa didn't care about this, and even looked at Hikigaya Hachiman: "Your girlfriend seems a little angry, aren't you going to comfort her?"

'Who is she angry about? ! ' Hikigaya Hachiman stared at him.

Furukawa smiled, and then looked at Shibakiza Yoshiki who was standing at the interview position.

"Now, the young man in front of you, please tell me your dream."

"Teacher, my dream is to write a light novel that is famous in Japan. Now, this is my work. I hope you can appreciate it."

Shibakiza Yoshiki stepped forward and handed over the manuscript in his hand.

Yukinoshita Yukino frowned and checked, Yuigahama Yui also looked curious, she also received a copy.

Furukawa glanced at the handed manuscript, put it aside, crossed his arms on his chest, and asked: "Have you ever thought about specific matters before becoming a light novel writer?"

"Specific matters?" Shibakiza Yoshiki's face showed confusion.

"For example, the market." Furukawa said, "For example, the current market does not accept campus fighting novels. Will you be able to get ahead by writing novels of this type?"

"I, I don't know." Furukawa said very realistically, which made Shibakiza Yoshiki speechless.

"Then let me ask you again, as a light novel writer, are you confident in delivering the manuscript on time?"

"This must be possible."

"Let me ask one more question, how many words can you write in a day?" Furukawa asked.

"A thousand words!" Shibakiza Yoshiki said proudly.

"That's bad! You can't even write [-] words in a day, and you still want to be a writer?" Furukawa said righteously, "Let me guess, when you write [-] words, you are probably half-hearted, right? I'll hit you later. Play games, read comics for a while, and comfort yourself, all for the sake of material. But do you know that when you are relaxing, your loyal fans and readers are waiting for your updates, are you doing this to them? ?”

"For the fans, you must write at least [-] words of manuscript every day!"

Chapter 153 The love between the devil and the goddess

"However, if you write too much, the quality will decline." Shibakiza Yoshiki defended, "I want to give readers a better reading experience."

"Reading experience?" Furukawa sneered, "Do you know how many typos there are in the manuscript of the novel you just submitted? Even the sentences are not fluent. You think this is the quality you are pursuing."

Facing Furukawa's sharp questioning, Shibakiza Yoshiki couldn't help but sweat break out on his forehead.

"me......"

"Interviewer Yukinoshita, what do you think of the novel manuscript that was submitted?" Furukawa suddenly asked.

Yukinoshita Yukino was startled for a moment, but quickly calmed down, cleared up her grievances with Furukawa, and said objectively and sharply: "I don't know what is written in the manuscript of the novel you are reading, but here, I "

She looked at Shibakiza Yoshiki, "Why do you set the heroine to take off her clothes during the battle? Is this necessary?"

Shibakiza Yoshiki took out a handkerchief from his pocket and wiped the cold sweat from his forehead tremblingly: "This is the selling point!"

"Oh, using women's bodies as a selling point? Are you sure you are writing a light novel? How about you write a pornographic novel?"

Yukinoshita Yukino finished speaking, and used the spear turned into words to roughly stab into the heart of Shibakiza Yoshiki.

"Hachiman, your girlfriend has finished speaking, do you have anything to add?"

Hikigaya Hachiman was still immersed in what he had just read, and did not hear Furukawa's words clearly. He just responded instinctively, "Well, no."

But soon, he realized something was wrong.

Two pairs of eyes were cast on him, one pair was extremely ambiguous, and the other was as cold as ice.

"You dug a hole for me again." He glared at Furukawa with dissatisfaction.

Furukawa shrugged: "You see you subconsciously think of Yukinoshita as your girlfriend. By the way, what do you think of the manuscript just now?"

Hikigaya Hachiman wanted to change the topic, so he asked the original manuscript of the novel in his hand: "Which work did you plagiarize from?"

One sentence made Shibakiza Yoshiki, who was looking at him expectantly, shake his body, as if he had suffered a major blow.

The color faded little by little on his body.

He believed that Hikigaya Hachiman was the same type of person as himself, but he was mercilessly attacked.

Shibakiza Yoshiki looked at Yuigahama Yui for help, this was the last interviewer.

"Ah? Should I say it too?" Yuigahama Yui pointed at herself.

Kogawa nodded.

"Well, then, what did I say?" Yuigahama Yui picked up the manuscript and flipped through it briefly, the expression on her face began to become complicated.

First she frowned, looking confused, then tilted her head as if in great pain, and then she took away the manuscript, with compassion in her eyes.

"Do you really want to tell the truth?" She looked at Furukawa for help.

"I believe that any teenager who wants to become a famous light novelist will have a heart that can withstand all kinds of pain." He looked at Shibakiza Yoshiteru, "You should have it, right?"

"Yes." Shibakiza Yoshiki lowered the corners of his mouth, knowing that he would not get any good comments.

"It's boring and painful to read. I read it for a long time and I don't know what I'm writing about? By the way, who is your protagonist?" Yuigahama Yui asked sheepishly.

thump!

Shibakiza Yoshiki knelt directly on the ground, and a gust of wind happened to blow from the window, bringing cold tears from the corners of his eyes.

"The protagonist's name is Yuki."

"Huh? He is the protagonist? I thought he was the villain? After all...ah, when he sees a beautiful girl, obscene thoughts will appear in his mind..." Yuigahama Yui Said in embarrassment.

Another shot was inserted into his heart.

"Good guy, the character creation of the protagonist is too failed." Furukawa shook his head, "First it's plagiarism, and it involves pornography... You, ugh."

"Ah!" Shibakiza Yoshiki threw himself on the ground, crying: "But my dream is really to become a light novelist, and that's not considered plagiarism, that's a tribute! A tribute!"

"The tribute in my impression is probably saying a word of tribute or giving the same reaction in the work. For example, 'I refuse!' in Jojo," Hikigaya Hachiman said.

"Haha, it's okay. This blow can't knock down my swordsman general, I can definitely do it." Shibakiza Yoshiki stood up staggeringly, "Just wait, I will bring you a better blow next time." novel."

"Wait!" Furukawa stopped the other party from leaving.

"If you want to show me these works that pollute your eyes next time, you can skip it." Furukawa said, "Since you have come to the service department, you should gain growth."

"Growth?" Shibakiza Yoshiki was stunned for a moment.

"That's how you should become an excellent light novelist." Furukawa smiled.

"Let me ask you a question first, how many light novels do you read every day?"

"One book a week." Shibakiza Yoshiki scratched his head.

"Well, that's it. Since you want to be a light novelist, you should read more light novels, understand their writing style, learn the plot structure of other authors, study their outlines, learn their writing structure, and then integrate it. , so that you can become your own.”

"I understand, I understand." Shibakiza Yoshiki's eyes widened, and he quickly took out the water-based pen he carried with him and recorded it on the paper.

Yukinoshita Yukino stared at him silently. From here, she felt the gap between herself and Furukawa.

Seeing that the language preparation was almost complete, the smile on Furukawa's face became even stronger: "Now, I will give you a subject and ask you to write a novel. Can you do it?"

"can!"

"Okay, then listen carefully. The theme I gave you is about a different world. A brave man sets out from his hometown and encounters the Demon King and the Ice and Snow Goddess on the way. The protagonist initially obeys the goddess and conquers the Demon King, but the brave man discovers, The so-called Demon King is just a human being. He became the Demon King because of the exclusion of humans. So the brave man began to dig out the truth. As the discussion continued, he finally revealed an astonishing truth. The Demon King and the Goddess actually knew each other very well. However, due to various reasons, the two They didn't get together, so the brave man decided to help them, and a plot began."

'This script is really bad, but why is it a bit familiar? ' thought Hikigaya Hachiman.

"This is the script. Also, because you are a novice and to prevent the characters you create from collapsing too much, I suggest that the characters in it be written according to real people."

"For example, Hikigaya Hachiman is the great demon king, and Yukinoshita Yukino is the goddess of ice and snow. As for the brave man, just do whatever you want. Anyway, those who like to read this script will see the love between the demon king and the goddess." Furukawa folded his hands. , holding his chin up, with a proud smile on his lips.

'This story must be wonderful. '

Chapter 154 Hikigaya: Yukinoshita’s legs are so beautiful

"Furukawa-san, we are not toys in your hands."

Hearing that Furukawa wanted to make her the prototype character in the novel and fall in love with someone else, Yukinoshita Yukino's face turned cold again.

"This is called learning." Furukawa spread his hands and said innocently, "Don't all modern novels have so-called creative prototypes? Inspiration comes from life! If you want to become a well-known writer, you must be good at observing the humans around you. Life, everything, and all memories will become the food for his growth."

"This makes me, the client, very unhappy, and I don't think the story you told is a good story." Yukinoshita Yukino said, "The theme of warriors from another world has long been bad, not to mention the addition of clichés. The love element... What do you think of reincarnation in another world? Its labels are passion, fighting, growth..."

"Fixed thinking." Furukawa interrupted Yukinoshita Yukino's statement, "Who stipulates that reincarnation in another world can only be about those themes you know? Although most reincarnations in other worlds are about battles, harems, blood, and... This is the selling point. However, if we change our thinking, for example, add elements of comedy and love, it will bring a novel experience to people and it will definitely become a hit... Human thinking is divergent and cannot always be repeated Follow a fixed template.”

"Yukishita Mununo, you are too rigid."

Furukawa spoke very fast, giving Yukinoshita Yukino no chance to think or refute.

He was stunned by everything Yukinoshita Yukino said, and even forgot what the other party called her - Yukinoshita Munno.

"And don't forget, this is the service department." Furukawa said earnestly, "The essence of service is to help others. When others come to you when they encounter difficulties, you are capable and qualified, but If you don’t help him, then what is your purpose in creating a ministry?”

"Right now, a high school student who aspires to become a famous light novelist is standing in front of you. He only needs to use you as a template to build a small character. Why would you have the heart to refuse such a pitiful demand?"

Yukinoshita Yukino grabbed the hem of her skirt, frowned and looked to the side, but caught Hikigaya Hachiman's gaze again.

She quickly tilted her head and said, "Let me think about it."

"Time waits for no one. The inspiration in Chaimuzi's mind is bursting out right now. Every second you delay will affect the other person's inspiration."

Furukawa knew that there must be loopholes in his words. Once Yukinoshita Yukino was given time to think, his purpose would be completely shattered.

"However, since you are very concerned about being used as a prototype in other people's novels, then," Furukawa changed the subject, "it is better for you to write the plot of the Ice and Snow Goddess yourself."