Rebirth: It’s Like Flowing Water

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Talk about Cangshan's feelings and confusion about writing "The Passing Years", and by the way, I'm answering some book friends' questions.

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First of all, I have ordered 10,000. Thank you for the great support of the original readers, especially the book friends from the starting point.

After being on the shelves for three months to 10,000, after thinking about it, it seemed that Cangshan had the fastest rise in the book.

"Big Song" is not as fast as it is, "Big Song" that has been on the shelves for three months in my impression has not even entered the boutique!

However, maybe I am getting older, and I feel that these three months are even more difficult than three years.

In my impression, it was only during the period before the end of the Great Song that I experienced such pressure.

A well-known dragger dog from the starting point, he was forced to become the author of Wangeng, I don’t know why I turned around so gorgeously!

Maybe it's the state of mind that has changed!

It's not a state of mind to sharpen your head to make money, but a state of writing.

When writing the Great Song, it was pure novelty and writing instinct.

Moreover, Cangshan is more fortunate, and the story line chosen by Song Dynasty is the most correct. As long as you push forward according to the chronicle and add a little bit of your own logical conception and blood, you will basically live together.

The rhythm of the story and the choice of a few climax points are also just right for the blind cat to run into the dead mouse.

In fact, in the Song Dynasty, I was a little anxious. Whether it was the rhythm or the mentality, I only thought about a climax point and immediately followed by the next climax point, so that many places could not be fully developed.

To put it bluntly, I finished writing and didn't write it down, but I didn't enjoy it, it was not perfect, and it was the most regrettable one.

When it came time to boil the soup, it was unlucky. Not only I still didn't find this problem, but my own cognitive error caused a series of problems with the soup.

At that time, Cangshan always felt that the story was the most important thing, as long as there is an unexpected story, it can catch the reader.

The idea is correct, the story has always been the advantage of Cangshan, my story is often difficult for you to guess what to do next, what is the direction and ending of a paragraph.

In fact, I realized later that the story is important, but the most important thing is the rhythm.

This is a key that is invisible and intangible, and even the author can easily overlook it.

The rhythm of the soup is wrong. Although the story is very compact, the story is also very beautiful, and there are conflicts, suspense, and all aspects. but…

The reason why I said to rewrite the soup some time ago is because if I write it now, it must be completely different from what I originally showed.

At least we must let Taiping appear later, and strengthen the interaction between Xiao Laodao, Ugly Uncle and Wu Laojiu in the early stage, so that this character is more like a wise man, a conspirator, and a teacher.

The growth and farming role of the Wu family in Xiashanao should be added to at least one million words to make Wu Laojiu rich first.

It may be mediocre, but the contrast to the follow-up plot is not of the same magnitude as what is presented now.

Then was Taiping's appearance, bloodbathed the plot of the Col.

In this way, the follow-up plot showing the revenge of the Wu family is more impactful.

Including the eight years I took with one sentence, it was also one of the failures that completely ruined the soup.

The soup is too compact, not like an outline, more like an outline.

Then this year.

In fact, Cangshan didn't intend to write "The Passing Years" at the beginning. Since the beginning of the year, or even earlier, I have been thinking about new books.

Prepared for several months, it is a kind of science fiction.

The old book friends who have been with Cangshan have even read the beginnings and outlines of several versions, and hope that Cangshan will write that.

However, Cangshan always felt that it was not the time, after all, after boiling the soup, he stopped spinning and rested for so long, and he had no confidence.

Until one day, when I got up in the morning, I looked at the bougainvillea in the yard, and the light and dark intertwined from the sunlight, suddenly I wrote the opening chapter of "The Flowing Years" for no reason.

It was done in one go, and it was sent to the editor without modification.

Then, the book was published.

To be honest, there is no outline and no complete idea.

Only in these years, some intermittent memories of that age, and the faint pain of regret.

To be honest, even Xu Xiaoqian's setting is completely different from what it is now.

I want to write her as an erratic and unreachable "dream" that Qi Lei has been chasing after.

The short intersection of the summer vacation is unforgettable, and then high school is not in the same school, and then use Lei Qi’s transfer to achieve a refreshing explosion.

Even the name is a bit erratic "Sophie".

But it was really too erratic, I couldn't even write, so I changed to a down-to-earth Xu Qian, but at that time there was no idea of ​​changing the heroine's settings.

Therefore, when you see the summer vacation plot, every confrontation between Qi Lei and Xu Xiaoqian is full of personality, and every scene is enthusiastic like fire.

That's because I didn't even plan to let them be in the same school or even at the same table.

If it is not warm at the beginning, there will be no sense of existence and expectation at the beginning of school.

But as it was written, I found that I didn't like such a character, what's the special thing? It looks beautiful, but it's actually quite second.

As a result, Xu Xiaoqian's setting was changed to "accompany".

A life partner who has no shortcomings except that short hair.

She is not even a vase, but a stubborn little girl who meets all fantasies about her lover.

Therefore, in the plot after the summer vacation, you will find that the interaction between Xu Xiaoqian and Qi Lei is more of a trivial matter of life. Her acting style is often to be in front of the protagonist, and no matter what the situation, it will not embarrass everyone.

Can't say more, it may be spoiled.

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Answer the questions of some book friends.

The first is the roles of Tang Xiaoyi and Wu Xiaojian, as well as outstanding personalities, including Zhao Wei.

My consideration is that there is no way to add drama to them now. An illiterate, two little **** who are not reborn, the situation is now demon enough.

Tang Yi's madness and Wu Xiaojian's viciousness can't be shown until they grow up. At least after they have entered the university, there will be a plot that highlights the personalities of these two individuals.

Zhao Wei is the same, he, Qi Guodong, and Zhou Tao have not yet reached the outbreak period.

In the previous plot, Cangshan has actually laid the groundwork for it. Qi Lei hopes that everyone will grow up, so he can be a big shot behind the scenes.

Second, the problem of water.

I admit half of this matter.

I don't admit that half of it is water. Half of it is water that can't be helped. I apologize to some book friends.

Let me talk about water that is not water.

As readers, what you want to see is the climax and the conflict of the story.

But these things don't come all at once, they need to be foreshadowed, emotionally progressive, or even downgraded.

Take the recent plot as an example. What readers really enjoy is actually that shivering, that is, the period where five little kids pretend to be in the small banquet hall.

But, if you look back and think about it, if you eat with your parents and lead to this plot, in the next chapter, Qi Lei figured it out and turned around and pretended to be forced. Would it be cool?

No, it was too hasty.

Without Zhang Nan's breath, there is no old man, Guo Ting, Zheng Ting, Qi Guodong, a few parents, and Xiao Ma, Wang Zhendong, etc., including Wei Guangming’s layers of paving, little by little emotion. , Pile of imagination, you can't feel how wonderful the last shiver is.

Then the problem came again, as a buddy said, too cool, too full. What should I do next? Unless you find a better point, a better plot than the confession.

This kind of situation is basically impossible, so, what will witness the growth in the back, send the car, check the account...

In fact, it is a regulation of emotions, a process of slowly falling back, using small, interesting and resonant trivia to calm everyone down and start the next plot.

That is to say, the next cycle is to push emotions little by little and pile up imagination.

This part, I won't admit that it was water even though I was killed. The more the foreshadowing is in place, the more enjoyable the last shiver.

You know, there is a difference between three minutes and thirty minutes.

The other half, I admit it is water, there is really no way.

There are indeed meaningless explanations in some places, and there are even repetitions.

Many book friends who have read carefully and have a clearer view of the plot logic have taken a glance.

However, this is only part of it. There are a lot of book friends who are jumping around and looking at the places they don't like. Without these explanations, he really couldn't connect, let alone coherence.

And it is inevitable, just like some people urge Cangshan to write business every day, and some people want to see the campus every day.

Those who watch business hop on campus, and he doesn't know the hidden information, so he can only explain more.

Some book friends still complain, Cangshan likes to include a paragraph of one or two hundred words at the beginning of the chapter.

In fact, it is for book friends who skip chapters. Some people really just read the chapter names to fill up the story. If you can't get it, you can't get it, and you're gone if you look at it.

Understand it, sorry again.

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Then there are a few plot questions. Generally, in this case, Cangshan will use plot to answer, but there are a few that can't be rubbed in, so it won't be hard.

The first is the scale of domestic Internet cafes in 2000, not as big as you know.

In 1999, Internet cafes began to emerge in China, and in 2001 and 2002, it was the real outbreak period.

At the beginning of 2000, Internet cafes had only developed for less than a year, so it was still not up to the extent that Internet cafe users dominate the game market.

In this period, although there were few home computers, the scale was still much larger than that of Internet cafes.

Therefore, the Internet cafes of Three Stones are huge in the industry, but it is not worth mentioning when converted to the overall market.

Your impression may come from a few years later, this period will not be reached.

Previously, Qi Lei had already given the data. Three Stones had 1,000 Internet cafes and had a market share of 17%.

You know, many small counties do not have Internet cafes yet! Even if there are third- and fourth-tier cities at this time, they are still new.

In Cangshan, it was almost 01 years before starting to surf the Internet, and Internet cafes listed in the county seat can be seen.

However, I first knew about online games, but it was in "Popular Software", which I knew in 1999.

At that time, it really relied on hard-broadcasting and magazine publicity.

Then there is the question of financing.

I actually don't want to talk about this matter, because there will be a plot later on this issue.

However, it is not one person who raised the question.

To answer, this is not just as simple as blocking foreign investment.

Two reasons:

First, the following plot needs.

Some people say that they are invincible now. Buying under the banyan tree and uniting Brother Xiao Ma, what will you play in the later stage?

Don't worry, compared to the layout of the entire book, these can only be regarded as just getting started. Many book friends should have guessed through the clues in the book, Qi Lei will definitely go to the industry, and it is a high-end manufacturing industry.

The early Internet plot is nothing more than an accumulation of wealth.

Second, give an example!

With the favor of capital, no one sees how much profit you have and how well the company develops. What they look at is whether there is any potential for capital plunder.

Suppose, Qi Lei said, my company is not listed, who do you think will invest in him?

So, if you go public, like the equity operation you said, you have the absolute right to speak...

Is it really useful? It's useless!

As long as it goes public, there is no turning back. Stock prices, stockholders, company profits, and even your employees, your partners, will force you into the rules of the game of capital plunder.

People are in the rivers and lakes, involuntary, may be the most appropriate description.

To be honest, there are not so many bad people in this world, and there are not so many people who are born indifferent and angry at everything. They are all forced out.

Life does not allow you to expect anything else. Even the pressure from wives and children, parents, house, work, and yearning makes us what we hate the most.

The protagonist in the article just doesn't want people to walk by the nose.

What's more, he didn't want to be an ordinary person.

For example, if Mr. Cao had been counseled under the anti-monopoly of the United States, if Mr. Ren had now agreed to allow foreign capital to enter Huawei, then we would not even have a role model now.

Qi Lei wants to be such a person.

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Finally, say a few words in my heart, Cangshan's pressure does not come from reminders, UU read www.uukanshu. com does not come from the satisfaction of how to write the plot, but from, but from, the story I describe cannot satisfy your imagination.

This is the most important truth that I have realized after writing "The Flowing Years".

The rebirth essay is not written by humans, because of its natural and reverie attributes, so many people imagine Qi Lei's story as their own.

But, I am not yours!

I can't do it, every detail will catch everyone's youth regret.

Therefore, it is painful.

After this book is finished, I will never write an urban rebirth essay again.

Really, at least not to write about this kind of selling point with youth.

Stop crying, the codewords are gone, we will add more today!

Let's post a big chapter together tonight. Great literature