Red Heart Survey

  Volume Two Summary and Testimonials

  Writing is a painstaking task, especially for long stories.

  The writing of this volume should be regarded as completing the established plan.

  After this volume, I was finally able to discuss the creation of the protagonist.

  Throughout and Rebirth are two very powerful ideas. Its greatest beauty for online novels is that it allows the author to skip the process of the protagonist’s growth and directly present a protagonist’s character to the reader. Moreover, with the "memory" that can be added at any time, various branches can be added at any time, and the logic itself can be completely ignored. What a huge amount of energy is saved!

  This is wonderful.

  I never said that it is embarrassing. In fact, I did not choose these two ideas, simply because it does not conform to the logic of the self-consistent world of Sky Survey, nothing more.

  This is not a world without extraordinary power. After rebirth, you don’t need to worry about it, just treat it as a miracle.

  In a world like Red-Heart Survey, it can be done, can be detected, and can be explained. Just so, it can't be used.

  I want to create a real world of Xianxia, ​​it must first be established logically. If I can't even explain the origin of the protagonist, what can I do to convince readers that this is a real world?

  Choose to create a native protagonist, a living person in a living world with a red heart.

  To create a protagonist from nothing, write about his changes and growth, and it’s actually hard to please.

  For example, many people say why the protagonist was deceived by Dong A, why was Bailian led by the nose in the three-things agreement... Is the protagonist stupid?

  For Dong A, Jiang Wang's psychology has a process from vigilance and guard to acceptance and trust. For the details of psychological changes, so far only one reader has made such a comment. Give me a little comfort.

  The protagonist was born in a small town in a small country, with limited vision and knowledge.

  Many times it's not that he is not smart, but that he can't see so high and so far!

  The son of a medicinal material merchant, how can he gain a foothold in the world and judge national affairs? Can I watch the sky by sitting in a well?

Unlike the first volume, which serves more as story clues and incident observers, by the second volume, the protagonist has grown to a certain extent, his vision has been broadened, and his humanity and sophistication have been tempered, including the use of people, including practice... It grew logically, and in this volume, it became more of a participant in the event.

  The protagonist’s influence is expanding.

At the beginning of the second volume, I probably showed the outline of this great world. With Yunguo and Youguo as representatives, I clicked Jiang Wang’s thousands of miles away, and introduced the Luo Kingdom on the Water and the City of Unredemption for the Sin King. local.

  The second half of the entire second volume is basically deconstructing the demise of a kingdom.

  Why did Yang Kingdom perish?

  The text and calendar are all lost.

  The bureaucrats at all levels are selfish and selfish, ranging from the pavilion chief, to the city lord, to the county guard, and even the entire Yangting ruler. They all have their own ideas and their own interests.

  There are more people from Yangguo, who have long been spiritual Qi people.

  The penetration of Qi State into Yang State is all-round. Politics, economy, culture, military... even when Yang State is fighting against the plague, Qi State's Four Seas Business Alliance is also required to undertake material operations.

  The root of all this lies in the fact that Yang State is on the side of a powerful country like Qi.

  Its fate has long been doomed.

  Yang Jiande was fighting against fate, but he failed.

  This country is not without heroes, from Sun Ping, who was in prison, to Mr. Qin, who was ten miles away, to the veteran Ji Cheng...

The history of the destruction of the Tianxiong Ji clan can be regarded as a microcosm of the history of the Yang Kingdom's resistance.

  The son died, the grandson died, the man died, and the woman died. The young man died, and the old man died.

  In the end, the door was full of loyalty, and the pile of corpses could not withstand the torrent of water.

  The sorrow of the country breaking through the mountains and rivers, the tragic and magnificent country, the sorrow of powerlessness.

  I think I wrote it out.

  ……

  In addition.

  Many foreshadowings under the first volume have also been unraveled in the second volume.

  For example, the mouse face is not so strong, why can it be the first of the twelve-bones face?

  For example, why Mingzhu can warn Jiang Wang.

  For example, the ghost gate taken by Zhang Linchuan in the battle of Fenglin City, and the tears shed by Wang Changji...In the second volume, the will of the Bone Venerable God was ruined...

  So many kinds.

  There are some details, readers may just sweep through, but it is my effort to make this world full.

  For example, some slang and colloquialisms are actually originals that fit the naked world.

For example, the idioms such as "relaxed", "oiled", and "private room" in Yuecheng Prison were actually fabricated by the author himself, in order to make the world more alike, even if this is just a very small branch line. The scene of floating light...

  These subtle efforts are costly and difficult to benefit, and they may not be loved by readers, but they have been a lot of effort, but I did it anyway.

  I am easy-going in life and perfection in words.

  The entire second volume, just the creation part, I am quite satisfied.

  Taking the lapis lazuli vein as the entry point, Hu's family, and then to Xi's family, one mine, one town, one city, one region, one country, interlocking, from small to large, there is no useless pen.

  The competition between Chong Xuan Sheng and Chong Xuan Zun is one line, and the various demands within the White Bone Dao are another line.

  There are two places where I am deeply impressed.

  One is the Secret Realm of Tianfu, even though it is reversed and then reversed, it is consciously tossed and moved very wonderfully. However, many readers responded that the secret realm was not written too long. From another aspect, it also shows that this secret realm is very popular.

  But I think...the end is over, the expression has been expressed, and the thread that should be buried has been buried, then expose it, no matter how wonderful it is. Irrigation is meaningless.

  One is when I deconstructed the collapse of the Yang Kingdom from multiple angles. Before the peak of the end of the volume, some readers expressed that they did not want to see the shattering of the bricks. Feel boring, confused, and don't understand what the author wants to express.

  In order not to affect the reader's reading pleasure, I cannot explain it.

  But after writing, all questions must be answered.

  Let’s ask, if there is no shaking of the foundation and the building falls, is it too abrupt?

  The shattering of that tile is a prelude to the collapse of the entire house.

  They symphonic and progress together, and complete the final finale.

  So when the whole country of Yang was finally destroyed, it was able to move so many readers.

  I have tried my best to make the foreshadowing and foreshadowing to be more exciting, but it still seems to be lacking in balance and not enough to catch people.

  Hopefully the third volume can be done better-if there is enough energy.

  ……

  In the process of writing the second volume.

  Anxiety always tormented me.

  The anxiety that started when I was ridiculed by the crowd as soon as I wrote the five chapters of Red Heart Xuntian has tortured me until now.

  I often break down and encourage myself.

  The spirit is going back and forth in a state of collapse and beating.

  In the end, there is still no interruption, and I don’t know how to persist.

  Now the two volumes have been written according to my plan without compromise. The total is more than 800,000 words. It is finally an explanation for the readers.

  I can say that I am worthy of anyone.

  I hope I can sleep soundly tonight.

  ……

  The results are still very poor, I hope everyone can give me some strength.

  It's really tough.

At last.

  The name of the next volume is, "The End of the Galaxy Has Been Breached".

  From a poem "Difficulties in Traveling" written by myself.

   "It's difficult to walk, it's difficult to walk, this body only goes to higher places."

   "It's not enough to boast about reaching the sky and the moon, it's already beyond the galaxy."

  (End of this chapter)