Spider-Man: Rebirth
Chapter 29 - OK Rewrite time
Ok so, in the midst of D&D, my dad having COVID, and just the lockdown in general, I had a few ideas on what the rewrite may look like.
Firstly: Starting from where Spidey was already extremely established, I was doomed from the getgo. I totally ignored the actual sequence of events in the comics pertaining to Ock's life as Peter, it was just all wrong.
Second: I had a few ideas on how I could get through the X-Men part here.
So there's 2 choices: I can rewrite from the spider bite and on, and say the self-insert or whatever was transferred via the bite, OR I can keep going with what I have and just do a little editing and retconning and move on with what I think might work with the X-Men. If I rewrite altogether, the harem will for the most part remain the same, but possibly with a few tweaks, considering he would be an entirely different person for the majority of his life following the bite.
Edit: It's Monday for me now, the deadline for what you guys want it probably gonna be about Wednesday.
Edit 2: I lied, Imma do the rewrite in like 5 minutes. I have ideas and shit burning holes in my brain, and I need to strike while the iron's hot. I'll post a chappie here to let y'all know when it's up and I'll put the title of it here.
Firstly: Starting from where Spidey was already extremely established, I was doomed from the getgo. I totally ignored the actual sequence of events in the comics pertaining to Ock's life as Peter, it was just all wrong.
Second: I had a few ideas on how I could get through the X-Men part here.
So there's 2 choices: I can rewrite from the spider bite and on, and say the self-insert or whatever was transferred via the bite, OR I can keep going with what I have and just do a little editing and retconning and move on with what I think might work with the X-Men. If I rewrite altogether, the harem will for the most part remain the same, but possibly with a few tweaks, considering he would be an entirely different person for the majority of his life following the bite.
Edit: It's Monday for me now, the deadline for what you guys want it probably gonna be about Wednesday.
Edit 2: I lied, Imma do the rewrite in like 5 minutes. I have ideas and shit burning holes in my brain, and I need to strike while the iron's hot. I'll post a chappie here to let y'all know when it's up and I'll put the title of it here.
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