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"Yangjun, this is the outline of the novel I am preparing and some ideas. Can you help me take a look?..."

Shinname Kaori's pretty white cheeks flushed, and she lowered her head slightly, not wanting to look Xu Yang in the eye.

She knew that today was their date, but she had been tormented by how to write a manuscript recently.

Although she came from a literary family, her writing skills and literacy were quite good.

But after all, this was her first time writing a mystery novel, and she inherited her father's detective Samonji series....

This made her feel a little stressed, and she even stayed at home for several days.

She originally planned to have a date with Xu Yang today, but when she thought of Xu Yang's wonderful performance in front of her father and his extraordinary literary skills, she was a little tempted.

After hesitating for a while, she decided to ask Xu Yang to help her with some advice....

Hearing what Xinming Xiang Baoli said,

Xu Yang was slightly stunned, then he smiled gently and said politely,"I am honored to be Xiang Baoli's first reader...."

Some people may think that it is not good for a girl to talk about work when she is dating you.

But Xu Yang doesn't think so.

Only if she cares about you will she talk to you about her life.

What's more, you can help her in her career!

Why is it that college students who have just graduated from the ivory tower can easily fall in love with seniors or even superiors in the company?

That's because they have just graduated from the campus, are in a relatively confused state about the future, and are also new to work.

At this time, if there is a person who can care for her and even help her in work, she will fall in love quickly....

Xu Yang chose the enhanced version of this situation!

Because of the successful treatment of Niina Rentaro, Niina's wife had a very good impression of him. Not only did she often say good things about him in front of Xiang Baoli, she also revealed some of her daughter's habits and preferences to him.

With such a mother-in-law who was crazy about assisting him, how could he fail?

"Um..."

Seeing Xu Yang agreed, Xin Ming Xiang Bao Li breathed a sigh of relief and handed the small notebook in her hand to Xu Yang:

"Yangjun, Zuo Wenzi has published many chapters so far, and the audience has reached the maximum. I really don’t know where to optimize..."

Although she was only going to inherit her father's pen name, Shinname Kaori still had some ambitions!

Originally, Shinname Rentaro had left her a broad and smooth road.

But she was not willing to be confined to the shadow of her father's light, and wanted to innovate in the Detective Samonji series and write something of her own....

Xu Yang took the small notebook and looked at it. After a moment of silence, he replied:

"Xiang Baoli, the case is well conceived, and from some of your settings, the story is also very brilliant! Whether it is the arrangement of foreshadowing or the transition of emotions, it is very smooth. This is the gentle touch that belongs to you as a female writer, but..."

Hearing this, Xin Ming Xiang Bao Li took a deep breath and looked at Xu Yang seriously,"Yang Jun, just say it!"

"In fact, you have already surpassed your father!"

Xu Yang's eyes flashed with approval. Seeing Xiang Bao's puzzlement, he continued to explain,"But it can only be a novel with good sales, and it will not become the Bible of mystery novels...."

"Yang Jun, the Bible or something, only Sherlock Holmes has such a great title..."

Shinname Kaori was stunned and shook her head quickly.

"I believe in Kaori!"

Xu Yang looked at the other party's bright blue eyes seriously, and said word by word,"I believe you have such potential! So, I want to ask, what do you think is missing from the"Detective Samonji Series" now?"

Although he has master-level writing skills, Xu Yang does not want Shinname Kaori to become his replica.

What's more, the other party has such potential, so Xu Yang took such a long detour to guide her.

"......"

Her eyes darkened slightly, and Xin Ming Xiang Bao Li fell into deep thought.

She had thought about this question many times, but she still couldn't come up with an answer.

But combined with the Sherlock Holmes that Xu Yang just mentioned, she seemed to understand a little bit.

"Is it the character creation aspect?"

"That's right!"

Xu Yang nodded in agreement."In fact, the reason why Sherlock Holmes became a great detective is not because of how smart and wise he is! It's because Conan Doyle gave this character soul and life!"

"I believe you have also seen that in the Devil's Heel case, Holmes let the murderer who killed for revenge go, and said that if he encountered such a situation, he would take revenge as well!"

"From the perspective of writing techniques, this makes the story more interesting and the characters richer! There is no doubt that Holmes's"unruliness" is also a factor in his popularity; like some of his other extreme characteristics, it makes him more like a flesh-and-blood person...."

At this point,

Xu Yang paused for a moment, giving Shinname Kaori a brief moment to think,"In your eyes, what are the shining points of Sawamonji as a swordsman and detective?"

"I understand!"

Shinname Kaori's eyes became brighter and brighter, like a bright light that suddenly bloomed in the desolate and cold universe, dazzling and dazzling.

"That's good!"

Xu Yang nodded with satisfaction, and then a sly smile appeared on his face."Then the next step is my private goods!"

Then, Xu Yang said,"It was obviously me who came first."、"For the first time, I had someone I loved; for the first time, I made a lifelong friend. These two joyful things intertwined together. And these two joys will bring me many more joys. I should have had this dreamlike happy time. But���Why, it becomes like this now?..."The essence of the study of whiteness was passed on to Shinname Kaori

"Yangjun, isn't this a bit..."

Shinname Kaori was stunned, and a stomachache appeared on her face.

"Xiang Baoli, boring reasoning has no future!"

Xu Yang replied righteously,"Think about it, what's the point of working people returning home to rest and watching some boring reasoning works!"

"Only when you mix it with the source of happiness can you relax your spirit!"