Start with a rent-collecting magical girl

A note asking for leave, let’s chat by the way

I'm on a business trip today and will most likely not have time to update in the evening. I'm really sorry to my family.

Then, I have actually always wanted to talk about this book, but there are quite a few troubling aspects.

The original plan for this book was actually to look forward to the theme of magical girls. I wanted to make it lighter and add a twist, and follow the path of everyday style and weaken the main plot.

But the subsequent major changes made Bai Crit learn some lessons, and he also understood why the subject of magical girls was so unpopular at the beginning. He basically wrote one book after another.

The first time is to change the age. During this free period, I even released a single chapter, and I should be able to read it back now, so this makes many daily plots that were originally prepared become more obvious after being moved to the adult age. It was strange, so I had to temporarily overhaul the story direction.

The second time was when Huang Baoji appeared during the Spring Festival. Those stories were actually what I originally planned to write as the main content of this book. But then everyone knew about it, and I was ganked crazily after the festival. During that time, I kept It was really nerve-wracking to go back and revise the article.

This indirectly led to a large plot about the sister being cut off, forcing another line to be added.

As a result, I don’t know if you have noticed that the male protagonist’s props rarely appear since then, and he has been warned that there are great hidden dangers.

Then the third time is about the background. I really regret not using Tokyo. It turns out that these are the experiences of my predecessors. After using domestic names, even in fictional cities, a lot of content cannot be written.

So, in the end, what I could write was to go back to the old path of magical girls, and turn it into the conspiracy of Hei Shenzhen. In fact, such a main line is also acceptable, but the problem is that the foreshadowing needs to be done from the beginning. .

But from the beginning of this book until a long time after it was put on the shelf, I followed my original daily writing method, so the subsequent transformation was very blunt.

All in all, from this book, I deeply realized the importance of subject matter and background. Some things are in conflict with Sesu, which is completely sailing against the current. It feels like a miracle that I can write 2000 pages.

Then I can’t be too lazy at the beginning of the next book. I have to pave the way for the main plot later to prevent the situation of this book from happening again.

The above is pretty much just the bitterness of the white crit. I feel very sorry for everyone. I failed to present the best story. My strength is indeed insufficient. After this book, I will most likely study hard.

Finally, although this book will definitely not be long because too many plots and structures have been cut, I will try my best to finish it and give all the characters an explanation and the ending of the story.

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