Summoning: Anime March

"I'll wipe it, I won't." Looking at the resolute two, the elder brother had a confused expression on his face.

Then the curious brother made a wretched behavior, lying at the door of his sister and listening to the sounds that would be made inside. ..

174. Youth

"How is it?" In the five minutes of the trial reading, it was the sixth time that Xia Nuo was asking how he was doing. According to the frequency, it was about every 37 seconds.

Feng Nixing is not interested in novels. He is the kind of person who is closer to reality. He can't feel the kind of realm that others say. When reading, he can feel the realm of being in the real world. It's hard to feel that the sense of immersion is not only in the current manuscript, but also in the manuscript that my sister forced her to read.

But even like this, when he gave advice to his sister, he was always able to hit the nail on the head, which was unbelievable.

"Let's ask, Xia Nuo, what direction do you plan to develop this novel, don't hesitate to say the ultimate goal." Feng Nixing needs to confirm her determination before giving her advice, otherwise he can't be serious Give her advice.

"The ultimate goal is animation. Although I have thought of adapting a novel to a movie before, it is really suitable for such a fantasy background to be expressed in animation."

"Very good, the ultimate goal is to be animated, so what is the minimum level?" Feng Nixing confirmed again, because his proposal is definitely not optimistic or encouraging.

"The lowest level is to publish a physical book, and the sales will be tens of millions." If you think about it carefully, the animation of tens of millions is no longer a dream.

"In my opinion, if your novel goes on like this, let alone tens of millions, it's hard to even publish a physical book that won't be sought after by readers." After learning about Xia Nuo's general goal, Feng entered the stage against punishment. Demonic preaching mode.

"Hey? Is there anything wrong? I'll revise it right away!" Xia Nuo still knew he was ashamed to ask.

"There are so many, so many that I can't finish talking before I go back. First of all, since it's a novel of the king's way, your protagonist's setting is a failure, the second prince of the new kingdom? You need to know the face of your next novel. The right group is teenagers, not those TV dramas that like to watch Gongsuo Liancheng intrigue, first of all, the protagonist has to change, as for how to change it is your business." Feng's advice to his sister so far is unfounded, just put himself It's as simple as that.

"I see, it's enough to change the protagonist's identity?" Xia Nuo took out a notepad from somewhere.

"Secondly, there are too many supporting actresses, especially in this kind of western fantasy novels. Too many supporting actresses will make readers feel fatigued, and some even forget one or two chapters after reading a few chapters. The supporting role, so delete at least half of the supporting role for me!" Once Feng Nixing enters this mode, she will not be merciful, of course, if Xia Nuo can't accept only these two sentences, then she can only have this level at most. That's it.

"I understand, delete half of the supporting roles!" Xia Nuo's eyes hadn't given up, it was natural, how could someone with such enthusiasm be drowned out.

"Then there's the heroine, especially the part where the protagonist accompanies the heroine to rescue the fallen monsters. The setting here is a bit nonsense. The heroine is too virgin. For a person who only has one side, since the other party is willing to degenerate. If so, there is no need for the heroine to be so chatty to help each other. Besides, this guy has killed a lot of people so far. According to what you wrote, it is easy for this novel to collapse in this branch. The heroine is too much of the Virgin, and All kinds of indulgent male protagonists are the worst places for all similar novels to appear. If you write like this, you will easily attract blackmail to the heroine who wrote the novel. You must know that today's readers are very sensitive and glass-hearted, so This paragraph will also be deleted, all the female characters who may become the male protagonist’s partner in the book are controlled within five people, since the number of people in the harem should not be too large, otherwise it will be counterproductive.”

"Yes, reduce the number of harems" Xia Nuo seems to be enjoying it, this guy won't be shaking

"Then, the villain sets this point, wait, let's not talk about this, don't you find your article a little long-winded? Although the description is very good, but today's readers will not appreciate this delicate style of writing, saying Too much is that readers are too lazy to savor the words now, which means that the purpose of the current novels is fast-food reading. You have to make your articles easy for people to read and understand. Of course, it feels very good. If it's difficult, I won't force you."

"No no! It doesn't matter! If you have any ideas, just bring them up!" Don't look at me with such a happy expression.

"If that's the case, I also need to be serious."

"It's an instructor!" So after all, is it a teacher or an instructor?

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"Almost all of the results have to be changed." Looking at Xia Nuo's manuscript, the quilt circled with a ballpoint pen. Of course, it was too late when he realized that he had gone too far.

"Huh" Xia Nuo held his manuscript as a treasure, and could not see any negative emotions at all.

Seeing that she had no complaints, Feng Nixing was relieved, "Then, it's not too early, I have to go back."

"Hey? It's already this time. Teacher, why don't you stay here~" Now Xia Nuo doesn't think of Feng Nixing as a classmate at all.

"No, you still have work to do next, and it's not very good for me to stay overnight." Feng Nixing also forgot about himself.

"No, no! I'll sleep in the living room, and the teacher will sleep in my room." Xia Nuo was interrupted by Feng's punishment before he could finish speaking.

Feng Nixing slapped a knife on top of her head, "Idiot, worry about yourself first."

"Ah, I'm sorry." Seeing to distinguish the difference between classmates and teachers, Xia Nuo rubbed his head, which was not too painful.

Feng Nixing seemed to pretend to be cold at the end, "Come on, don't worry too much, just hand it over to me in the second half of the semester."

"Give me a week!"

"No, I mean half a semester is fine"

"Please give me a week!" The serious expression outside of study, this expression has been seen before, it is the same expression she had when she declared war on herself during the ranking.

That's great

Opening the door of Xia Nuo's bedroom, Feng Nixing saw his brother sleeping on the floor, then smiled bitterly and took off the blanket nearby and put it on him.

After walking out of the apartment, Feng Nixing turned around and saw that Xia Nuo was waving to himself in a window where the lights had not been turned off.

Feng Nixing didn't respond, turned around and then thought of something, "Right, share today's affairs with my sister."

however

"I am back."

"龍神の剣を喰らえ!" Feng Nixing lost consciousness as soon as he heard the sound. ..

175. Wall dong ~

"Hey~ you are rare to be able to do your best for outsiders. As my sister, although I am very angry about your late return, I am still very pleased."

"It's my elder sister. Mom is not so impulsive. You just kicked the younger brother who came back. This is too exaggerated." Feng Nixing rubbed his stomach and looked at his elder sister complaining.

Wei sighed, "Idiot, it's precisely because I took action that my sister won't do anything to you. Trust me, when your mother is angry, you'll find out that I'm just a pediatrician."

Feng Nixing's face turned blue and turned to look at his mother behind him, "Isn't what elder sister said true? Mom"

"Of course~ why would I be willing to attack Feng'er~" Mom was still smiling, and Feng did not react to the punishment. It seemed that her mother's expression had never changed. When she thought of her mother pretending to be a smiling tiger, he feet are cold.

"That's right~ Haha~" Feng Nixing felt that he was smiling reluctantly, but he couldn't help it, and his body was shaking slowly instinctively.

"Writing all your thoughts on your face and body language is an advantage or a disadvantage" Wei sighed, she felt that Feng Nixing should thank herself for teaching him a lesson before her sister for so long.