Seeing Fang Tianxing by his side, Fang Tianxing said again. The old man by the river seemed to hear, "is it your work that you want to comment on?"

"Yes, that's right. I want to ask the teacher to comment on my works, please." Fang Tianxing said to the old man by the river in a respectful tone.

"Then you put out your words, use the true colors of the words, don't change, I'll help you to have a look." The old man by the river said casually.

Fang Tianxing released all the words in his body. These days, Fang Tianxing's updating speed is faster and faster. His words have more than 70000.

More than 70000 characters are constantly changing outside Fang Tianxing's body, showing endless changes. Sometimes it's like changing clouds, sometimes it's like water.

When the old man saw Fang Tianxing's words, his eyes lit up. He began to observe Fang Tianxing's words carefully. As he looked at them, he uttered tut Tut's praise.

Fang Tianxing's writing is built under the guidance of the five supreme masters, with a solid foundation, which can be said to surpass most people's works. The structure of the characters is exquisite, but there seems to be something wrong. The characters can not be perfectly combined to give full play to their power.

"Your novel really surpasses most people, but the theme is not clear, and the plot is a little tardy." The river side wild old man criticizes a way, tone is not polite, as his nickname is same.

Fang Tianxing is speechless. Even his novels under the guidance of the five supreme masters can say so many questions. This man is really amazing.

"But..." the old man said again.

"But what?" Fang Tianxing asked anxiously.

"But what your novels lack most is a soul, a real core soul." The words of the old man by the river are amazing.

What does the lack of core soul mean? Fang Tianxing thought to himself. He immediately went to the thinking space and asked the five supreme.

Mengru Shenji is playing chess with Tang family sanshao. Tang family sanshao doesn't want to play chess with him at all. He waves his hand and says, "I know you are very good at go. I don't want to play chess with you. Are you so bullying and so interesting?"

"San Shao, come and play. It's fun to play chess. Or I'll give you five more. " Dream into Shenji hold Tang family three less hand, just don't let him leave.

Seeing Fang Tianxing coming, Tang family three young immediately asked: "Tianxing, is there something wrong? I'll help you solve it."

Tang family three little turned to dream into Shenji said: "don't let go soon, Tianxing has a problem with me, I have to do business."

After that, Tang family three little shake off the dream into the magic hand, went to Fang Tianxing, "you say, what happened, I'll help you solve."

"Master, it's like this. I went to WangWen university to participate in the youth training camp before. There was a young man named Jiangbian Yesou. He said that my words lack a core soul and I don't know what's going on. " Fang Tianxing said to the Tang family.

"Well, I thought that your writing seemed to be wrong." After pondering for a moment, Tang family three little said.

"Although your words can increase normally, there seems to be something missing. I don't know. It may have an impact on you to refine this life treasure book in the future. " Tang Jia San Shao said.

"What is missing, what is missing?" Fang Tianxing said to himself.

"I don't know how to find what you lack, but you can follow your heart to find it." Tang family three little each other Tianxing said.

"Follow your heart." Fang Tianxing said in his heart.

"Yes, network literature comes from the heart. Of course, we should also pursue it from the heart. The only way is..." Tang Jiasan tells us.

When Tianxing's mind retreated from the thinking space, he saw that the old man by the river was also thinking. He was also puzzled about Fang Tianxing's situation, which was very rare.

Fang Tianxing left with Yang an on his mind. This morning has been a very full one. After lunch, the afternoon will be the day's star.

You can get a star badge if you become a star of today. In fact, this badge has no effect, but it represents honor. One star of today is elected every day, and seven days are seven stars of today.

And today's star has the opportunity to get the attention of the tutor, which is what we all dream of.

"Today's star is of course my brother Tianya's. He is the best student in our Tianqing high school." The girl who teased Yang an said aloud.

"How can you say that your boyfriend can be the star of the day, and I don't think he's great?" Dissatisfaction has been raised.

"I have a reason to choose Tianya as the star of today." Then the girl took out a picture,

"This is a picture of Tianya brother's code character cultivation and improvement. Tianya brother just opened a new book, and three months later, it entered the public nine major consummation. And his novels have always ranked first in the list of new books, and no one has ever been able to surpass them. "

"Wow, No.1 on the list of new books. It seems that he really has strength." Someone below said with admiration.

At present, many people ask him for advice on the author's practice. At this time, he puts on airs and says with great pride: "if you want my advice, you must recommend me to be the star of today. When I get the attention of my tutor, you will benefit me."

After listening to his words, many people hesitated for a moment and prepared to recommend him. Fang Tianxing was almost bluffed by him and wanted to ask for writing experience. But a sentence from Chen Dong in the thinking space made Fang Tianxing wake up suddenly

"If he is the number one in the list of new books, it's not too high in gold. It's likely that he was painted out." Chen Dong said.

"That's right, the new book list is very serious, and many Internet authors with dishonest ideas forge data in order to get more opportunities to show their faces." Tang Jia San Shao also nodded and said.

When Fang Tianxing heard their words, he stepped forward and came to fan Tianya, "I want to challenge you. Let me see your strength."

That's right. The best way to verify whether the other party has made the list is to try his real strength. If we say that his achievements are the result of the brush list, his strength will not match.

Fan Tianya was shocked to see Fang Tianxing challenging himself. "You're a brave boy. I'm the first genius in the new book list. You dare to challenge me."

"What does that matter? I'll challenge you to see if you're really that strong. Don't talk nonsense, you can do it! " Fang Tianxing said directly.

"My strength is so strong, what if I kill you?" fan Tianya said with pride.

"Don't cover up any more. Let me see your strength." Fang Tianxing is more and more sure in his heart that the other party is most likely to draw the list, not his real strength.

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