"That's right, this is a novel that I have been thinking about before Xia Xia. I saw Teacher Yu Ye's birth, and I want to try it out here, but I just couldn't find anyone to show me how my novel was, so I came here. Please, please be sure to read and give me some advice!"

  Zaimiza Yoshiki bowed and hurriedly asked.

  Can I become a great god like a teacher with a knife and no umbrella in the rainy night?

  Let's see if this first step can be taken.

  "Okay, then let's change the content of the entrustment to help you read the novel."

  Xue Nai nodded and agreed that the Ministry of Serving is helping others, and this is exactly one of them.

  Teenagers with dreams certainly need help.

  Not to mention just showing him the shortcomings of the novel.

  Usually, Xuenuo rarely reads light novels, and she doesn't feel that there is anything in particular that needs to be brought up.

  It just feels relatively bland.

  He turned his attention to Mizusaki Yuma.

  Before, he could see at a glance that there was a problem at the beginning.

  Obviously he should have read a lot of novels.

  Suddenly Yukino felt that she seemed to be a little too dependent on the other party.

  She set up the ministry to help others, not to let Mizusaki Yuma help herself.

  Regardless of the previous emotional problems, or the current light novels to give opinions, Xuenai felt that there were some things she couldn't help. .

Chapter 103

  "How about this story?"

  Zaimiza Yoshiki looked at the few people who had read all of them and hurriedly asked.

  This is a light novel written by him with all his hard work.

  Aside from the beginning, the story inside should be fine, right?

  "How can I say this, the story is not bad, but it's too bland..."

  The story is not bad.

  But it was too bland, even Mizusaki Yuma felt like he wanted to sleep when he looked at it.

  Zaimiza Yoshiki took over the novel and hurriedly read it.

  I feel pretty good.

  "Add a little conflict and try it out. You can go back and revise it according to what I said, and then send it to us after the revision is complete..."

  The story here is pretty good.

  But it's too bland, and it doesn't fit the genre of hot-blooded light novels at all.

  If you have to say something bland, you must write about the pure love type, which does not require too many conflicts, as long as you write about your daily life.

  "Okay, I'll go back and revise it, add some conflicts..."

  Zaimiza Yoshiki nodded.

  This time I brought it to show others mainly because I wanted to show them.

  Do you have any other problems with your light novel?

  Since he pointed out his own problem, he will definitely correct it.

  "Mizusaki-kun feels like you know a lot..."

  Looking at the back of Zaimiza Yoshiki leaving, Yuihama Yui's face couldn't help but flash a trace of admiration.

  I didn't expect him to know so much.

  Not only is he good at cooking, but also has achievements in emotion and light novels.

  18 "The novel, in fact, you can probably know the plot after reading it, but you may not read it for a long time."

  "Does Mizusaki-kun often read novels?"

  Yuhihama Yui asked curiously.

  Generally, people who like to read novels are not otaku.

  No matter how you look at it, Mizusaki Yuma seems to be charging now.

  "Like watching, but don't have much time to watch."

  He doesn't have much time on his own.

  The control of time must be carried out to a very strict level every day.

  Otherwise, some things may not be completed.

  So for Mizusaki Yuma, if his own affairs are not handled well, he will not go to see it.

  "Ok."

  Yubihama Yui nodded and said, Xuenuo looked at the time and said slowly: "Go back, it's almost time to go home."

  Now is almost the time when the various societies need to go back.

  She also needs to go home.

  Touching Xiaoxueqiu's little head, although he was a little reluctant, he really needed to go back today.

  And looking at this situation, Mizusaki Yuma seems to bring snowballs over every day.

  So even if she leaves today, she can still see her tomorrow.

  "Okay, then I'll go first."

  "Goodbye, Mizusaki-kun!"

  After the three said goodbye to each other.

  Mizusaki Yuma put away the small snowball and left.

  As soon as he came out, Mizusaki Yuma saw Shiyu Kasumigaoka and Eiri who were walking together.

  The two seemed to be arguing about something.

  From the looks of it, Ying Lili seems to be at a disadvantage.

  "Xuedijun didn't expect that you haven't gone back yet!"

  Mizusaki Yuma saw them, and naturally the two of them also saw Mizusaki Yuma.

  Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu stepped forward to say hello, and Ying Lili was also a little surprised. When did the relationship between the two become so good?

  I saw Kasumigaoka Shiyu looking for Mizusaki Yuma twice before.

  But she never understood how the two were related.

  "Can't I join the club?"

  "I didn't expect my younger brother to join the club."

  Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's face was slightly surprised.

  One of her and Eiri is a literary club, and the other is a manga club, although basically they don't go to much.

  But she also joined the club in name. She knew about Mizusaki Yuma before, but he didn't join the club.

  Is it a comic book?

  Thinking of Yuma Mizusaki's career, but the next moment was denied by Shiyu Kasumigaoka.

  Because when I just came out, I saw Ying Lili leave alone.

  That is to say, if it was a manga club, they would definitely go together.

  "Otherwise, what do you think I am doing here so late?"

  He came here to join the club at the risk of being sent a blade by a reader.

  It feels so hard for me.

  "Let's go, the two of us drop by."

  Eiri didn't want to stay here for a while, so she happened to be on the way with Mizusaki Yuma.

  She just wanted to pull Mizusaki Yuma away quickly.

  But before she could act, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu pulled her directly and asked, "What are you doing walking so fast, didn't you chat with me just now?"

  Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at her with a smile, obviously not wanting the two of them to leave like this.

  Still have questions to ask.

  "Hey, I have nothing to chat with you!"

  Eiri turned her head, and then stopped talking. On the other hand, Yuma Mizusaki felt that this was a good opportunity, so she quickly agreed: "Would you like to find a cafe to have a good chat?"

  I just happened to say something to them.

  If this studio is to be established, there is still a shortage of manpower, and Sagiri has already joined.

  In the future, it can be long-range, and now, Shiyu Kasumigaoka and Yingli Li are currently listed as targets.

  Two are in charge of manga, and one is in charge of light novels.

  I continue to create myself.

  "It seems that Junior Brother has something you want to talk to us about?"

  A hint of curiosity flashed in Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes.

  He took the initiative to mention that he wanted to have a cup of coffee together, obviously not to let the two of them sit here and chat.

  "How about Ying Pear?"

  "kindness."

  Eiri turned her head away from Shiyu Kasumigaoka, although she wanted to leave, but after Yuma Mizusaki continued to ask questions, she agreed.

  in the cafe.

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