……

Shinomiya Yue never imagined that the first meeting between herself and her beautiful female reader fans would be in this way.

It’s just that Senior Sister Bunny didn’t give Shinomiyaki time to react, and continued.

“I have only read the third volume you wrote, the content is very interesting, but compared to the first two volumes, there are still some shortcomings, and I always feel that there is still something that can be improved.”

“Where can I improve?” The fourth palace moon is also the most critical place to hear accurately.

Originally, communicating with readers is a very necessary thing, which has a very good effect on improving the quality of the work.

What’s more, the current four-house moon is in a special “Kaven” state.

It’s not that you can’t write a novel, but you can’t write a fully interesting novel that satisfies you.

In fact, due to the very high quality of the content of the first two volumes of Shinomiyatsuki’s “I Can’t Be a False Devil”, the vast majority of the letters received from readers and fans are letters urging him to be sent and asking if he is physically “healthy”.

There are very few letters expressing their opinions on the plot of the content.

Not to mention this kind of face-to-face discussion with the reader, it is definitely the first time.

“So, where do you think it’s worth improving?” When talking about his works, Shinomiya Yue is also unusually serious, and he is in a completely different state than before.

The colorful Miss Rabbit in front of her suddenly became unfragrant.

“What to say? I don’t write light novels, but from the reader’s point of view, your last two chapters are interesting in the battle where the protagonist defeats the four generals under the Demon Cadre. ”

“However, in addition to the power of the four great generals of the Demon Race that you wrote, as well as the characteristics and personality charm of these five people, I would like to see a wonderful battle with the Demon Race cadres.”

Listening to Mai’s senior sister’s words as a complete layman. Shinomiya Yue also seemed to have realized something.

“Well said!” Shinomiya Yue’s eyes lit up, and she looked at Mai Senior in front of her in surprise. “That’s what the reader thinks.”

“I know what to write.”

“Have you decided to take my opinion?”

“No, how come, the depiction technique for the sake of cool and refreshing is only the lowest technique, and the novel written in this way is not brilliant at all.”

Mai Sakurajima: “…”.

Direct cool points will only fall into the inferior, but the sense of gap brought by the known results will give the reader a sense of expectation, the reader will have a huge sense of expectation when he knows that the demon king is the protagonist for seconds and the four heavenly kings are pretending to be forced in front of the protagonist, so that the laughter brought by the cognitive gap is what the four palaces and the moon only realized in the square.

“It will definitely be possible this time.”

Shinomiyazuki was also very excited to say, and at this time, Senior Mai on the side also asked at the right time.

“Then, can you tell me by the way why the four major leaders under the Demon Race cadre will be five people?”

“Ah, this? Isn’t it common sense that there will be five of the four? ”

Mai Sakurajima: “…”.

In a short period of time, Senior Sister Mai didn’t know what to say to pick up Shinomiyatsuki’s words.

In the book “I May Be a False Devil”, the protagonist is the setting of the ceiling of combat power, a bit similar to the setting of one-punch man, the funny feeling brought by absolute invincibility is unique, so highlighting this core is the most attractive part of his light novel, thus giving readers an unexpected and reasonable unique feeling.

Returning to the notebook again, Shinomiya Yue seemed to have an epiphany, Kavin’s state also disappeared, and the inspiration in his mind was like a fountain of talent, and in a flash of inspiration, he refined a new outline in his heart.

“It will definitely be possible this time!”

“Write absolutely interesting novels!”

Looking at Shinomiya Yue, who was concentrating on creation, Mai Sakurajima, wearing a bunny girl costume, just looked at Shinomiya Moon silently.

The appearance of the other party devoting herself to the industry she loves also reminds Mai Sakurajima of her past, the profession she loved, and she was so engrossed at that time.

It’s not that she can’t let go of the gap of returning to the ordinary, but she really likes the profession of acting.

“Then, goodbye, Bai Yue-sensei.”

“I’m looking forward to how interesting the latest chapter you finished at the end.”

Whispering, as if afraid of disturbing Shinomiyatsuki, Mai also left silently, and when Mai Sakurajima walked through the door of the library’s study room, she muttered a word.

“Hope never again, Senior Brother Shinomiya.”

……

Near dusk, Shinomiyazuki finally completed his creation.

Stretched out, rubbed his somewhat sore hands, and the hunger coming from his stomach reminded Shinomiyaki that he hadn’t even eaten lunch.

Now, though, there are more important things.

“System, search evaluation again.”

[Evaluation works (novel): “I Can’t Be a False Devil” Volume III;

Evaluation results: anti-routine Brave Demon King works, the plot is very smooth, the funny part of the sand sculpture is particularly outstanding, the top level in the same type of other-world works, comprehensive evaluation, five stars;

Estimated number of points earned for publishing: 200 points;

Recommendation: Keep the state. 】

Five-star reviews!!!

Looking at the virtual panel that only he can see, Shinomiyazuki also smiled with satisfaction, you must know that the first two volumes of winning the Newcomer Award are only four and a half star evaluations, and the latest chapter has actually received a five-star evaluation of the system, and the number of points that can be obtained has also increased from 36 points to 200 points.

Looking at the position of Miss Rabbit, who had already gone to the empty building, Shigongyue nodded gently.

“Thank you, Senior Mai.”

……

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