……

Looking at the news of the other party on the screen, Shigongyue definitely didn’t have to be too polite.

In reality, I only promise, and I hit the Internet!

[Bai Yue: Do you really dare to say it? Yes? Black powder head. 】

[I can’t be poisonous tongue: what’s the problem?] White Moon Old Thief? 】

The two sides also did not hide it, directly through the network directly together.

However, both sides are also civilized people, and they will not spray people’s words with low quality, but it is this invisible smoke that is more terrifying.

[Bai Yue: Oh, then I wonder how our poisonous tongue lord feels when he sees the content of my latest volume? 】

As the third volume of an excellent light novel work that has been rated as five stars in the [God-level Novel System], even the old woman Machida Enko, who is the deputy editor-in-chief of the Immortal River Bunko, thinks that it is the most interesting light novel in recent times.

So Shinomiyazuki is still very confident in the content of this novel.

Even if the other party is a black fan, before this, the other party was also a reader of his light novel works.

Then there is no problem.

In fact, Shiwa Kasumigaoka, as a light novelist under the same editorial responsibility as Shinomiya Tsuki, knows something about each other.

Shinomiya Tsuki knows that the famous love department invites the light novel master [Kasumi Shiko] to be a beautiful high school student writer, and likewise Kasumigaoka Shiruha also knows the true identity of the newly promoted genius light novelist [Shiratsuki] and is also a high school student.

This is reciprocal.

And the unequal intelligence is that in the case of using the trumpet as the head of the black powder, Kasumigaoka Shiwa knows who [White Moon] is, but Shinomiyazuki cannot equivocally understand the identity of the other party, which is the problem.

Therefore, the problem of the fourth palace moon can be easily accepted by the other party.

[I can’t be poisonous: if you ask me what I think, there is indeed a point. 】

Didi,

Subsequently, Shiyu Kasumigaoka really sent a long list of impressions.

[I can’t be poisonous: the first thing to explain is the design of the plot, here is what must be praiseworthy, not only clearly understand what their readers want to see, but also be able to grasp this and use the reader’s heart to see, so as to build two points that are interesting enough to fit their own work…].

Didi,

Di Di Di Di….

This was followed by a reflection essay of more than 500 words, and it pointed out the weaknesses that still exist in Shinomiyatsuki’s writing and the areas for further improvement.

The professionalism is so strong that Shinomiya Tsuki thinks that the black fan head opposite him is a light novel master who has been famous for a long time and is very good at details.

Of course, that’s just the case.

Compared to the overall interesting plot construction that Shizuki Shinomiya is good at, the well-received light novel master [Kasumi Shiko], who is good at romance light novels, is best at the youthful and delicate description of adolescent men and women.

“Damn, although I don’t want to admit it, this guy is actually right.”

Sigong Yue, who was biting her nails, looked at the other party’s five-hundred-word small essay, and her heart was also extremely unwilling.

[I can’t be a poisonous tongue: Why, what does Teacher Bai Yue think of me? 】

[Hakugetsu: Although I don’t want to admit it, it is indeed my negligence. 】

Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who was sitting in front of the computer, also looked at the news of the other party unexpectedly, in her heart, the other party should be an extremely proud image, but she didn’t expect to admit her problems so calmly.

If it weren’t for Shiwa Kasumigaokaoka who is extremely professional and good at this kind of delicate description, he would never have found a problem.

Or it’s easier to understand that to put it bluntly, Shiwa Kasumigaoka believes that although the two are good at different places and light novels, on the whole, the other party’s audience is wider and better.

The proof is that as a keen fan of love-style light novels, Shiwa Kasumigaoka was attracted to the interesting places of Yotsuki Moon novels and became a big fan.

[I can’t be a poisonous tongue: Ah, I didn’t expect Teacher Bai Yue to be so honest? ] 】

[Shiratsuki: If you can, I hope you can also give my impressions for my novel in the future.] 】

Looking at the message sent on the screen, Shiwa Kasumigaoka pressed her slender fingers against her white jaw and said with a smile and incomparable elegance.

“I’d love it.”

……

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