The days of retirement with the singing queen

Lu Anzhi took out the outline of the novel "Fights Break the Sphere" and gave it to Xu Changqing to write. Lu Anzhi made a lot of considerations.

All of this is mainly based on Xu Changqing's own sufficient skills. This is what he likes, and it is also the reason why the editor has taken a liking to Xu Changqing and is willing to publish Xu Changqing's short martial arts stories with cliché plots.

An online novel is actually not that easy to write, especially an excellent online novel, and it is even less easy to imitate.

In the previous life, "Fights Break the Sphere" was called a novice novel. It had a simple structure and was looked down upon by many people. What they said all relied on the routine of slapping Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi at the beginning. But in previous lives, there have been so many imitations of the beginning of "Fights Beyond the Sphere", but few of them have become popular.

The key point here is that few people can grasp the rhythm of the novel so well, so brightly and crisply. This requires not only basic skills, but also talent.

Lu Anzhi had read Xu Changqing's short martial arts story and was sure that Xu Changqing could do such a thing if he worked hard. The reason why the short stories written by Xu Changqing are favored by Ku Ku is that he can use vivid words and distinctive rhythm to package extremely clichéd stories and make them look like the real thing.

If Xu Changqing can adapt to the rhythm of online novels, then letting him write "Fights Break the Sphere" may have a different feeling.

Of course, before handing over the detailed outline of "Fights Break the Sphere" to Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi still has to do a few things -

First, I asked Xu Changqing for his opinion to see if Xu Changqing himself had this intention and agreed to create this book in this way;

The second is to go to the store to meet this Xu Changqing and see what he is like in person. Use your own eyes to see what this person is like and whether it is worth entrusting him with this detailed plan;

Third, after the first two items were determined, let Kukun draft the contract according to his own requirements and sign it with Xu Changqing.

If there are no problems with these, when the serialization is officially created, the signatures must be from two people. This directly clarifies the nature of the matter and the novel, and saves someone from pursuing him for finding a gunman in the future. It also clarifies the employment-cooperation relationship between himself and Xu Changqing to avoid future disputes.

Once all these are ok, I can save some energy and write more other novels.

"The Three-Body Problem", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", and "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone" are all waiting for him to write.

The detailed outline was written very quickly, and Lu Anzhi finished writing the plot of the Novice Village part of "Fights Break the Sphere" in a very short time.

Zhang Suxin read for a while and felt a little tired, so she put down the book and stood up for a walk, wanting to rest and rest her eyes. But as she walked, she walked up behind Lu Anzhi. Without resting her eyes, she stared at Lu Anzhi's computer screen again.

"This is too mysterious, the teacher in the ring, this is more exaggerated than the adventures in martial arts novels!"

Zhang Suxin couldn't help but say after seeing the details of this novel. She only saw the old grandfather being carried with her, but not the time travel.

Lu Anzhi deleted the crossing part at the beginning. The identity of the protagonist Xiao Yan as a time traveler in "Fights Break the Sphere" is just an addendum, used to increase the reader's sense of involvement and does not play much role in the plot of the story. People in this world have not yet been baptized by online novels, nor have they read "In Search of the Qin". Although there is also Mark Twain's "Congolese in the King of Arthur" by Mark Twain, most readers are not familiar with the keyword "traveler". , still have no idea.

Therefore, readers’ empathy threshold for reading online novels has not yet been raised in this world. In this case, Lu Anzhi simply eliminated the identity of the time traveler.

Maybe when the new micro-Chinese website develops, other authors will come up with time-travel novels, and he won't need to specialize in them. Or when Xu Changqing finishes writing "Fights Break the Sphere", the cooperation model between him and himself can continue, and I can get him some more "Xunqin Ji" and "The Sweet Potato Master from Another World" to strengthen the concept of time travellers. That's ok too.

But in "Fights Breaking the Sphere", a novel that focuses on pretentiousness and upgrading, the identity of the protagonist as a time traveler is not necessary in this world.

Lu Anzhi said with a smile: "Anyway, there are adventures on both sides. Wouldn't this be more enjoyable?"

Zhang Suxin rolled her eyes at Lu An and said, "You are the author, and what you say makes sense." But she also had questions, "I remember you didn't write an outline when you wrote novels before. How can you write a good outline for this book? coming?"

Because it was an outline, she just glanced at it casually. A mere outline would not inspire her interest in reading. She prefers to read text with rich text.

Lu Anzhi explained to Zhang Suxin: "This book is to be serialized on Xinwei Chinese Internet. I don't plan to write it myself. I plan to find an author through hard work. I will provide an outline and the author will write it." of."

Zhang Suxin said: "Isn't this not good? Isn't writing a very personal thing? It's not like writing songs. One person can compose the music, another person can write the lyrics, and another person can arrange the music. If you write a book and co-author it, it's difficult to unify it. Thoughts?"

Lu Anzhi said: "I just try it and see if it works. If it doesn't work, I have to write it myself."

That's exactly what he thought. At that time, Xu Changqing will also need to write a beginning according to this outline and take a look. If Xu Changqing's writing is really not good and he cannot grasp the essence of this book "Fights Break the Sphere", then he will have no choice but to give up.

When Zhang Suxin heard what Lu Anzhi said, she nodded and said nothing more. She just said: "Don't make yourself too tired."

Lu Anzhi glanced at Zhang Suxin and said with a smile, "Do you think I'm tired?"

Zhang Suxin couldn't care, but she saw Lu Anzhi's Versailles. She was speechless for a while, and couldn't help rolling her eyes at Lu An again and said: "Yes, yes, who doesn't know you, a sow with a knife! You wrote twenty books at once You won’t be tired either.”

Lu Anzhi didn't feel dissatisfied and laughed.

Zhang Suxin asked again: "Isn't this book a tragedy?"

My husband's reputation for writing tragedies is getting more and more famous. "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" also have some light or heavy tragic elements, especially the current "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". Zhang Suxin couldn't bear to look down. Not to mention "The Three-Body Problem", Zhang Suxin always felt more and more desperate the more she watched it. She has now made up her mind and plans to wait until she gives birth to her second child. Otherwise, the emotions will be disturbed, and it may also affect the fetus, which is not worth the gain.

Lu Anzhi said: "It won't be a tragedy. This novel is serialized on the Xinwei Chinese website. This serialization mode is not suitable for tragedy, and there should be no tragedy at all."

"Yeah?"

Zhang Suxin didn't believe it at all. If Lu Anzhi said anything else, she would believe it, but she would not believe it to her death.

"Yes... maybe... we can wait until it develops to a certain extent in the future... or maybe it's not, there are always exceptions to everything."

Lu Anzhi answered Zhang Suxin's words, and as he spoke, he remembered the early development of Internet literature, when a hundred flowers were blooming and chaos abounded.

At that time, online novels were in an emerging area without supervision. Those who wrote online novels in the first generation simply let themselves go in all kinds of ways, such as "Pig × Blood", "Ada Ji", etc., which were all messy, including comedies and tragedies. The first generation of readers who had just come into contact with online novels were not as spoiled as later. They could read whatever the author wrote.

Lu Anzhi still remembered the first online novel he read, which was "Super Demon Killing Empire". It also ended with a mass destruction, which made him depressed for a while. The new micro-Chinese website may have to go through a period of time like this - of course, some measures are controlled by Maple Tree, and it should not be like the previous life - Lu Anzhi thinks this is not a bad thing.

In an era when a hundred flowers bloom, there will also be many different styles.

As for later, even if Internet literature has developed for twenty years, there are always talented authors who can write a different style in the era of great literature, and even make readers feel depressed for a while. For example, the scumbag Chen Gou was written by a great author.

So Lu Anzhi couldn't be so decisive as he talked.

Seeing Lu Anzhi's stuttering answer, Zhang Suxin thought, "Sure enough." This "Fights Break the Sphere", I have to wait and see when the time comes, I can't fall into the trap casually. My husband is a sow with a knife, and even if he doesn’t do it himself, he might be able to make other authors grow knives on their hands.

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In the evening, Lu Anzhi turned off his laptop and said to Zhang Suxin: "I'm going to pick up Xianxian, and I'll go to the new store later. Sister Wang is here too. I've said hello to her. Do you want to come with me?" Come over and take a look?"

Zhang Suxin said: "Okay, I haven't seen Sister Wang for a long time." Although she didn't meet her often, she had a very good impression of Sister Wang. She felt that Sister Wang was a very kind and amiable elder, so she liked her very much.

In the past, she always felt that it was inappropriate for her and Lu Anzhi to call Wang Ping Sister Wang, and it was also inappropriate to call Xianxian Aunt Wang. After all, Wang Ping is much older than them. She also made comments about it. Lu Anzhi also tried to change his words, but Sister Wang was used to it and couldn't change her words for a while. Wang Ping also said that she was used to hearing Lu Anzhi called "Sister Wang", but she was not used to being called "Aunt Wang" again.

And Xianxian called her "Aunt Wang", which she quite liked and said she felt young.

So Zhang Suxin stopped insisting and continued to call Wang Ping Sister Wang together with Lu Anzhi.

Zhang Suxin thought of something and asked, "Are you planning to ask the clerk in the new store to write this new novel?" She had heard about the new clerk and knew that he was also under the maple tree. writing a novel.

"There is a plan, but we still have to look at the specific situation."

Lu Anzhi said, telling Zhang Suxin what Wang Ping said about Xu Changqing's situation.

After hearing this, Zhang Suxin sighed and was a little unhappy: "Why are there still such people?! Did Xu Changqing's ex-wife have such an idea from the beginning - first promised to give her daughter to Xu Changqing, so that Xu Changqing could have a clean life? Then he came to take his daughter back on the grounds that Xu Changqing had nothing and was unable to take good care of her daughter?"

Lu Anzhi said: "Maybe, who knows?"

While the two were talking, they came to the kindergarten and picked up Xianxian. Xianxian stood in front of the car door and watched for a while, then asked, "Where is the electric car?"

The little guy still likes electric cars and doesn't like riding in cars. The main reason is that she can blow the horn of an electric car, but in a car, she has to sit in the back seat and cannot blow the horn of the car.

Lu Anzhi said: "The electric car is at home. Dad drove here to see you off this morning, so he is driving to pick you up now. We are going to see Aunt Wang now, do you want to go?"

"Which Aunt Wang?"

Xianxian didn't react for a moment.

Lu Anzhi said: "That's Aunt Wang from the bookstore."

"good!"

Xianxian suddenly became happy and agreed.

So Lu Anzhi drove Zhang Suxin and Xianxian all the way to the new store. The new store "Baicao Garden" is located in Zhuyuan Community, which is far away from the kindergarten. In addition to getting off work, the traffic jam on the road is a bit serious, so it took him a long time to drive there.

But when he was at home, Lu Anzhi had already called Wang Ping, so Wang Ping and Xu Changqing were waiting in the store. After Xu Changqing determined the time when the boss would arrive, he hurried to the kindergarten to pick up his child before Lu Anzhi left.

Wang Ping doesn't need to worry about it. Her daughter-in-law Liu Xiuting got off work early today and can cook for her grandson. Her grandson Yan Junjie can also walk home by himself, so she doesn't need to go back to pick him up.

When Lu Anzhi parked the car at the entrance of Baicao Garden, when he got out of the car, he saw Wang Ping and a thin middle-aged man standing there. Next to the middle-aged man was a little girl who looked about the same height as Xianxian.

"Boss, the road is very busy, right?"

Wang Ping came up and said. Then he pointed at the middle-aged man and introduced it to Lu Anzhi, "This is the new clerk in our store, Xu Changqing."

Xu Changqing nodded nervously to Lu Anzhi and said, "Hello, boss." He did not recognize Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin. Although he likes to see Lu Anzhi's works, he has no impression of Lu Anzhi's image.

While they were talking, Xianxian was already standing in front of the little girl next to the middle-aged man.

The two little girls looked at each other in silence for a while, then Xianxian suddenly stretched out her hand. Then the little girl stretched out her hand nervously. The two little people didn't need any communication, so they held hands and Xianxian pulled the little girl into the store.

Several adults couldn't help laughing when they saw this scene. When Xu Changqing lowered his head and saw it, he unconsciously showed a gentle and relieved expression.

"Is she your daughter?"

Lu Anzhi asked.

"Um."

Xu Changqing nodded and said, "My daughter, named Xu Ranran, has just started kindergarten this year. She goes to kindergarten nearby." He deliberately suppressed his emotions when he spoke, but Lu Anzhi could hear that the voice of this father There are extremely complicated emotions about his daughter.

There was love and pity in that emotion, as well as a faint self-blame - a father's self-blame for not being able to give his child a complete home.

I fell into insomnia around three o'clock. I chose a novel and tried to fall asleep while listening to it, but the more I listened to it, the more I couldn't fall asleep.

Chen Zhagou deserves to die!

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