The First Order

The previous chapter was rewritten, so you can see it, you need to refresh it to see it.

Originally it was 6200 words, now it is 7142 words. After deletion and addition, many contents have changed.

However, the subject matter remains the same.

Let me talk about the reasons for the change, mainly because of everyone's opinions on the blackening of Yan Liuyuan.

Until insomnia, I decided to look at this chapter again and look at my shortcomings.

The first thing I want to say is that I don't agree with the word blackened because, as I said, each character in this book just has his own position and cannot be distinguished by intuitive good and evil.

Therefore, Yan Liuyuan did not suddenly become an evil and unforgiving demon, but only to go his own way.

Secondly, let me summarize the shortcomings of the previous chapter. Because of the rush to update, I did not make enough preparations, which was very unconsidered. During the update, I also felt that there was almost something, as if something should have happened, but I did not. It seemed like writing, and tangled for an hour.

So many times I will update around 5pm, but after 6pm yesterday, I can only update helplessly.

I must admit that it is not enough.

So the direction of modification is mainly here.

On the one hand, Yan Liuyuan felt that he could no longer face Ren Xiaosu, or that he could not face Ren Xiaosu, but was unable to face his past self.

As I posted on Weibo, "Many people will not be able to face their past self when they grow up."

On the other hand, everyone has been curious, what is the price of Yan Liuyuan's curse now?

I wanted to talk about this when he went back to the grassland to face Sister Xiaoyu, but suddenly found out that it was no longer possible to do so, so he wrote it in the previous chapter.

This is also one of the reasons for the so-called "blackening".

On the other hand, the prairie needs him. When he was with Ren Xiaosu, he felt more like a vassal of Ren Xiaosu. In the prairie, he didn't need others, but others needed him.

That's why Kiki Ge said.

So in my opinion, Yan Liuyuan made these choices for a comprehensive reason, not for a specific reason.

But because the rush update has not been written, I can only refine it again. In the future, I may return to the third refinement. It is also possible to return to the chapter by chapter after the book is finished, until I am satisfied.

You can look back, and then come here to discuss.

I have insomnia again today, and those hours are very tormented in the evening. I am really afraid that because of the renewal amount, the regret of the king will appear again. This feeling is too sad for a storyteller.

Sorry.

Another is that the wall of break is not between Ren Xiaosu and Yan Liuyuan. This is not that I don't want to abuse you, but the two people in this story, whether from the analysis of personality or the heart, or even from The analysis of the world will not turn against the enemy. This is my objective view of the two of them, so there is no need to forcefully create dog blood.

There is no conflict of interest. If Yan Liuyuan really wants to be the king of the world, what would he do as Xiaosu's character? Ren Xiaosu has never been a righteous person, I think so.

The ending of this story has long been set. A magnificent era should not be a one-man show of one or two people.

Finally, I also have a sincere attitude to talk to everyone. I hope that if this situation occurs again in the future, I will not be able to update it on time and everyone will be more tolerant.

After all, I'm kind of worried to see you leave a message saying that I have no letter, and I will try my best, at least the best within my ability.

thank you all.