The King of Cultivation from Sakurasou

In the eyes of strangers who do not know, Shiyu of Kasumigaoka probably belongs to a demure and elegant girl of iceberg literature who refuses to be thousands of miles away.

In the eyes of acquaintances, she is not too shy and not good at accepting praise.

Putting down her hands, Qianliu saw that she was in good condition and expected to recover in a day or two, so she planned to leave.

"Wait, can you please help me read the manuscript of the second volume of "Metronome in Love"?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu hurriedly stopped him.

Qianliu moved for a while, then turned around and said, "You are still ill now, and you will have a lot of time in the future."

The subtext means that there is no need to worry for the time being.

"But..." The girl pursed her lips tightly, hesitating in her eyes.

The first volume of the debut work "Love Metronome" was successfully published as expected, but there was no sign of a reprint when it was released.

Yuan Zi told her that if she continued like this, she would probably be cut in half after the third volume.

Xiazhiqiu didn't want to give up halfway, and found various ways, whether it started from itself or looked for other ways, but it was useless.

Over time, not only did the sales of works not increase, but they declined and drowned in the huge light novel market.

Then, Yuan Zi gave her a suggestion and asked for help from another well-known light novelist in the industry.

Being able to soar to the sky in just one or two years, the genius light novelist Hanasegawa must have his own uniqueness. Although the two specialize in different fields, there are always some aspects in common.

Yuan Zi is willing to take the initiative to help her recommend, Xia Zhiqiu is very grateful, so I really want to seize this opportunity.

"Okay, I understand." Staring at her eyes, Qianliu finally returned to the place and sat down: "What about the manuscript?"

Xia Zhiqiang quickly got up and opened the laptop to take it: "Here."

Taking the initiative to push the chair to the table, the girl watched him sit down and scrutinized the manuscript.

Reading from the second volume does not affect Qianliu's judgment at all. "Metronome in Love" itself is a simple context story of a boy meeting a girl and then falling in love, many things happened, breaking up, but still together in the end.

Most of the light novel routines are similar, the difficulty is how to use these routines to create a refreshing feeling.

Including writing style, writing style, etc.

What he needs to do is to examine whether there are any errors or loopholes in the second volume that should not have occurred.

After reading the second volume half an hour later, Qianliu still did not catch any obvious failures. Although some parts are a little immature, the criteria for judging are too harsh for newcomers who have just debuted.

After a moment of thought, he looked at the first volume again.

At first, Kasumigaoka was very nervous and uneasy, like a student who had just prepared a test paper for the teacher to grade.

As time passed by, she calmed down instead, stared at Qianliu's serious profile, and wondered how he had shaken the industry in just two or three years.

Only when you step into this industry will you understand how difficult it is to reach the level of Qianliu.

Thinking about Xia Zhiqiu couldn't help being fascinated. Strictly speaking, she had a mentality for Qianliu to catch up with her goals. She was almost the same age and level, so why was she so much better than herself.

So, in the room, the rustling of the mouse was thrown away, and only the two of them were breathing steadily.

Until the hour hand points to three and the minute hand points to twelve o'clock.

"I know the problem." After reading the first and second volumes, Qianliu loosened his slightly locked brows.

"Ah?" Xia Zhiqiu seemed to wake up.

Qianliu looked at her squarely: "The story probably isn't too big of a problem. I need to modify some scenes that lack emotional tension and polish it up a bit. Although it won't become a big hit, it's okay to be a best-seller."

What Xiazhiqiu lacks is just publicity and exposure, the first step to make others interested.

Take the first step, and the follow-up will follow naturally.

Without exposure, no matter how good a work is, it is difficult to stand out.

It is said that gold will shine, throw you into a pile of chalcopyrite, the ghost knows how long it will take to scour it out, maybe it will melt with brass. *

Chapter [-] What is this hidden setting

"Just like that?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was stunned, this was slightly different from what she thought.

She thought there was something wrong with what she wrote. After all, no one gave any pointers, she didn't know other authors and friends, and she didn't know much about the industry.

In addition, Machida Yuanko has limited advice to her, so she doubts whether she is really bad at writing.

Qianliu comforted: "Don't worry, since the quality has passed the test, sales will rise sooner or later."

After giving her solid confidence, Qianliu stood up, "Do you have a line?"

Xia Zhiqiu nodded: "It didn't take long for the registration."

"Okay, add me first, and then ask for advice if you have any questions. That's it for today. When you're sick, you can change the bolded parts of the mouse. If you're not sure, send them to me. As for publicity, you don't have to think about it." , Qianliu has come to the entrance to put on his shoes.

Looking at his back, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, who felt weak but supported for the first time, couldn't help but blurt out: "Why do you want to help me like this?"

why……

"There are a lot of reasons, let's talk about life, Yuan Zi's request, be more noble, want to support the newcomer... There are more or less mixed reasons, but the most important..." Qianliu waved to her: " Thank you for being a beautiful girl, otherwise I wouldn't have the heart to talk so much with a dead fat house."

Then the door closed, and the sound of footsteps at the door gradually faded away.

Xia Zhiqiang's beautiful face illuminated by the laptop screen first flashed a hint of consternation. Obviously, this sentence sounded a bit too much, and seemed to mock her for being a vase, but Xia Zhiqiu wanted to laugh inexplicably.