The King of Cultivation from Sakurasou

"Well, I've put the key in your skirt pocket."

"Oh! Is it in my pocket?"

Hearing that the sky reached into the pocket of the skirt, the next moment he took out a copper-colored key: "I really found it, Miss Dejima."

Chapter [-] is really yours, the sky

"Then I'm hanging up here."

"OK Bye Bye,."

Hanging up the phone, the sky with his face flushed with his legs tucked in his hands, was immediately at this moment.

Go to the bathroom.

Seeing this, Qianliu and Nagi looked at each other and suddenly felt tired.

Unlike all the girls he had ever seen, the type of sky couldn't stand it.

"That..., Qianliu, can you help me look at something now?"

Looking at each other for a while... Nagi lowered her head and said embarrassedly.

"Um"

"Xiao Nagi wants you to help evaluate and guide her manga."

The twisted Nagi was sold by her own mother.

I don't know where to turn it out: a thick book with a beautiful cover came, Zi Zi Zai Nagi handed it to him proudly after not responding in time, just like a "prank" between the two

like a victory for oneself.

"This is"

Qianliu turned a page and hesitated: "Magical girl-themed manga"

Unstoppable Nagi nodded: "I feel that my drawing skills should be okay, and I have participated in many fan comic competitions, but I haven't won so far. I want to know what went wrong, so please, you are famous in the industry. The teacher to guide one two 2."

No wonder I was in a hurry to invite him to the door, but there was something wrong.

Seek each other.

Qianliu understood, and after opening the next page of the book, his eyes narrowed slightly.

While remaining silent, it took him more than [-] minutes to read the entire comic.

During the period, Zizi ran away because of boredom and the sky after going to the bathroom.

"How about it"

Nagi can't wait for his evaluation.

"It's weird."

"Um"

Nagi blinked.

"Let's not say that you are a young manga with a magical girl as the protagonist."

Chiliu stopped here for a while.

Well, a magical girl...a muscular, macho magical girl who actually looks more like a samurai.

"It's just that the subject matter is weird. The unique style of painting has nothing to do with it. There is actually a certain market for this unconventional way of portraying the protagonist, but your content is completely beyond the understanding of ordinary people."

Qianliu's impression after reading it is...he saw something.

"Aside from the subject matter and style of painting, a comic, unless it is banned from [-]+, will attract readers with its rich and excellent plot content."

"Since it's a juvenile cartoon, then you need to pay attention to friendship, growth, and passion... Although there are more routines, different people use it with different effects, and your comics can't be seen at all. Excellent place.”

What Qianliu said was not polite at all, very direct, and pointed out the biggest problem.

Nagi listened to the comments in dejection, these... It's not that others haven't mentioned it, but she thinks it's right.

As the saying goes, there are always horses, but Bole is not.

She considers herself to be a maximalist, and those who...

Now it seems that it is not that there is no Bole, but the problem really lies with me.

As soon as Nagi put away the book, Zizi and the sky appeared haunted.

"Mom, where did you go just now?"

"I played that... pinball game with the sky."

It seemed very happy.

"Ah, Aunt Zizi is amazing, she can win every time."

The sky is very envious of her good luck.

"Balls"

Nagi frowned: "The pachinko machine."