The Most Beautiful Boy In Tokyo
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I changed it all night yesterday and just woke up.
It was three o'clock in the afternoon, and there was no meal.
I discussed it with a few friends for five hours, mainly about this plot.
I read the comments, the controversy is quite big, half the good and the bad.
Outlines are fine.
The plot arrangement went wrong.
There are currently two versions of this episode.
One is the version of Shen-e's gorgeous rescue (the kind of Yukiko's rescue before), and the other is the current version of the two-person set.
Wrong choice.
Actually, this episode is pretty important.
The youth chapter mentions the setting of chess pieces once, which leads to the concept of the Priory, and then refuses to join, after all, I don't want to get involved.
Then, the junior high school chapter came up again.
Then through a point push, the high school kingship chapter officially docked with this long line, and then entered the climax of the battle for chess pieces.
It's my pen power that's wrong, sorry, I'm so tired.
In the past few days for the exam, I have a mock test at 9:00 in the morning, rest until 12:00 noon, and at 1:00 in the afternoon, other people are lying on the table and sleeping, I am there with my mobile phone and typing, and then I have a professional get out of class at 2:00, and end at 6:00 in the afternoon. There is another class from 7:00 to 9:00. It’s already ten o’clock when I get home, and it’s twelve o’clock to take a shower and have a meal. Then I write until two in the morning, and all the cigarette packs are empty.
It was torture, but no way.
Let's just watch and play with this version.
In the next few days, the first version, that is, the version of Shenhui's rescue, will be replaced. The number of words is only a lot more. The plot should be liked by more people, and it will not affect the plot of the second public performance. Keep looking back.
I will remind you when the new version is ready.
Then.
I'll compensate you for a free extra, and let me know who you want to see.
Nobody makes mistakes.
Especially when it's really tiring.
But it doesn't matter, making mistakes will make progress, knowing what is lacking and correcting it is good.
I was wrong, I apologized, and I was beaten upright.
Nothing to be ashamed of.
Don't admit defeat, that's all.
Can do better, then do better.
I went to eat first. I didn't go to the mock test in the morning. I went to pick up the test paper in the afternoon and then went to class.
Let's grow and make progress together in the future.
Please bear with me too.
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