Let’s talk about the characters in the book and the poisonous points in the plot, as well as the shortcomings in the whole book.
It is convenient for me to correct and study in the next book.
. . . . . . .
In addition, the second part will depict a broader world of cultivating immortals, so what must be indispensable are the dragon sleeves of various forces and the various treasures of heaven and earth.
So start calling now.
My current framework for the overall power of the immortal cultivating world outside the sea is:
Ichinomiya, Zhenhaidao Palace
The second sect, the evil demon sect, lack
Three gates, Kuang Lei gate, lack, lack
Four Pavilions, all missing
All grains are missing
Six great people, Zhang family, Lei family...
. . . . .
Finally, when I have time, I will write a side story, mainly for the patriarch. It mainly tells the story of the time when the patriarch practiced energy to build the foundation, obtained the life charm, and became the patriarch and led the family step by step to turn the family from danger to safety.
Of course, you can think about who else you need.
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