The strongest self-disciplined captain of the Konoha Guards

Originally, I had written the final chapter on the 30th, then revised it on the 1st, and scheduled it to be completed on the 2nd.

As a result, things have been a bit busy in the past few days, so I have delayed it, and I am just making up for the ending now.

Say sorry here.

Let’s talk about the whole book. Everything in this book is based on the outline. It’s just that I originally planned to write one million words. But the initial order was too low, less than three hundred, so I wanted to finish it quickly and cut off a lot of it. plot.

As a result, it was finished in less than half a million words...

If I had known that the first order would be more than 200, and all subsequent orders would be 500, I would have finished writing it seriously.

At the very least, we should pursue a million-word completion.

This is the first Naruto fanfic written by the author. Although he has millions of words of experience, the previous one was completed a year ago, and he is a newbie now, so he failed to grasp it well and it collapsed too quickly.

This book summarizes my experience, and I want to write the next one seriously.

I am still a Naruto fan, and I want to start with some unpopular characters or professions and write something new.

For example, take Yahiko as the protagonist and let him change his own destiny and the destiny of the Akatsuki organization.

Then let the red flag cover the entire ninja world

It should be quite interesting.

The outline of the book with Yahiko as the protagonist is almost ready. The next step is to revise, improve, and write the beginning.

The next book should be available in early November.

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Next is the time for the author to summarize himself. There is nothing else, so you can skip it if you don’t want to read it.

shortcomings.

The first shortcoming is that the beginning is not well written. In the first chapter, there is a golden finger, and the conflict between Uchiha and Konoha is also brought out. However, the subsequent two chapters have too much setting content, which can easily arouse readers' disgust.

The second shortcoming is that there are many things from other worlds in the world of Naruto, which greatly affects the perception, and it is easy to jump in terms of combat power. It is an author's job to write well, and it will be poisonous if it is not written well.

Therefore, we should sum up our experience, reduce the content related to the outcome, and try to control it as much as possible.

The third shortcoming should be that Danzo was not dealt with quickly. I originally wanted to use it to force the third generation of the palace, but it turned out to be self-defeating. Instead, it made readers think that it would not have been written without the original work.

If you don’t know how to fix it, just solve it directly.

If we could go back to the past now, we should kill Danzo directly, and then quickly summon the Uchiha to launch a coup.

The change of political power is very fast. Looking at the past history of the flower growers, it basically changes overnight.

In this book, I asked the protagonist to give the other party three days to prepare, and it also required a public execution. Now that I think about it...

The fourth shortcoming is related to the third one, which is that the character of the protagonist is not set well. Influenced by the fact that the main character of the original novel is a Rakuko person, this book also accidentally seems to be close to Rakuko person.

Although it was later corrected that the protagonist should kill no one when he should, it was difficult to change in the past, so it still had an impact.

Therefore, in the next book, the protagonist should be made more aggressive and decisive.

The fifth early stage content was not prepared well. Not only did the strength increase too quickly, but the third generation group was also killed too quickly.

I wanted to write an invincible article, but I failed to write a truly invincible article.

We should first pave the way for the life of the Konoha Guards, and then use the identity of the guard captain to induce the conflict between Uchiha and Konoha. Then the subsequent plot will be much easier to write, and the group that killed the Three Generations can be finally put on the shelves. It will not cause a large number of readers to lose after killing three generations.

I’ll write it here first. After re-reading this book, I find the shortcomings one by one.

As for other character settings, plot control, and writing, there are many issues that need to be resolved step by step.

that's all.

Finally, I would like to thank all readers for their support. Your support is the biggest motivation for my writing.

bow.