The world enters the age of myth

Hippopotamus Hippopotamus Hippopotamus (take a day off and push a book)

We agreed yesterday that we would have a day off today!

Although this book didn't do well, I don't know why, but I was quite happy when I wrote it. The current order backlog is about 900, and the average order is a little over 2,000. I don't know why my grades are so bad. After thinking about it, I can only attribute it to "poor writing". There may be many readers who read pirated copies, but the biggest reason is that they didn’t write it (ah!).

I think this book has made some progress. For example, the emotional scenes have gone from being completely absent to having slightly more. Whether it's well written or not is another matter, but at least it's not too embarrassing and the heroine isn't annoying, so that should be fine.

If you don’t write at all, you will lose a lot of fun, and you will never know how to write...

There is also the battle aspect, which is much more in this book than in the previous ones. Some parts of the book were written a little too quickly, so that even before it reached 500,000 words, a lot of stories had already happened. If another author were to write it, maybe it could reach 700,000 words.

The dungeon of Exploration Laboratory could actually be a little longer, but the overall rhythm should be okay, and there are no parts that stretch too much. Overall, I think it’s okay. The subscription gap may be due to too many people giving up before it’s released.

Okay, let’s not say more about this for the time being. Let’s give a little spoiler. In the following writing outline, the Unkai will have a medium-length period of peaceful development, and then it will usher in the first night above the Yang River. .

It’s always more unsafe at night, so it’s important to highlight this opportunity to increase your strength...

Okay, that’s it for the leave part.

Today is a salty day, hippopotamus, hippopotamus, hippopotamus, hippopotamus, hippopotamus (if you want to watch pirated versions, please subscribe now)!

Next is the py link.

In addition, I recommend a science fiction novel "I Really Don't Want to Be the Savior", which won the 31st Galaxy Award for Best Online Literature.

One year before the destruction of the earth, Chen Feng, an ordinary young man in the 21st century, traveled through time and space to a thousand years later, and found that he would return to the 21st century every time he died. Faced with the seemingly destined outcome of human extinction, Chen Feng raised the flag of resistance again and again. From a small citizen who was just waiting to die, he finally grew into a lonely savior of the entire civilization.

The work begins with the rebirth of the city. After writing 100,000 words, it reveals a magnificent worldview like a spring thunder and faces the ultimate proposition of human survival. The tragic resistance of human beings represented by the protagonist, under the future opera-like science fiction world view, interprets the classical tragic and passionate feeling, perfectly combining the hard core of science fiction and the rhythm of Internet literature, presenting a A rare masterpiece of online science fiction.

(If you haven’t seen it, be sure to check it out. Wan Ding’s works are much better than those I wrote on the street.)

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