Tokyo Gentleman Story

To put it simply, the first season story of the magical girl Lyrical Nanoha is the story of Lyrical Nanoha chasing Fett and Yunuo as a light bulb.

Nanoha is the female number one, Fett is the female number two, and the suspected male number one is Yuno.

The original story of the first season of Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha tells the story of the ultra-ancient heritage sacred stone seed that Yuno excavated and was left on the earth, and then Yuno turned into a Y beast, a ferret, and the magic device sunburst Zhixin was handed over to Lyrical Nanoha who accidentally found and rescued herself.

Up to this part, the whole story of Lyrical Nanoha is a very orthodox story of a magical girl. In fact, at the beginning, Lyrical Nanoha's story is in this tone.

But later, the whole story changed.

The reason why Yuno is the "suspected" male number one is also for this reason.

In fact, to be honest, in Nanoha's story, many people think that Nanoha is actually the number one male, while Fett is the number one female. As for Yuno, he played the role of the grandpa who gave the treasure.

In the story, Lyrical Nanoha was born with a strong talent, and she helped Yuno start collecting the Sacred Stone Seed.

However, at this time, Lyrical Nanoha encountered Fett who was also collecting the Seed of Sacred Stone. The story began here, and the focus shifted from the Seed of Sacred Stone to the story between Lyrical Nanoha and Fett.

In the end, Nanoha knew that Fett was actually a doll made by his mother Testa Rosa, a substitute for the other’s real daughter. Fett had been abused by Testa Rosa, and Fett helped. The reason why my mother collected the seed of the sacred stone was to use the seed of the sacred stone to open the way to Yalhasat in another dimension.

In the end, Fett’s mother, Precia Testarosa, and the corpse of his real daughter Alicia fell into a different dimension, while Alicia’s substitute, Fett, fell in love with Neha. (Big mistake).

It's almost such a story.

On the surface, such a story seems to have no connotation that can be investigated.

But no matter how ordinary the story is, as long as the story can be welcomed, it means that there may be a lot to say in this story.

Among this, there is a saying that Prescia really treats her "daughter" Fett as a daughter.

This seems to be inconsistent with the performance of the script.

But Senxia believes that this explanation can actually be reasonable.

In the latter part of the plot, Plessia once said in front of the Time and Space Administration that Fett was not her own daughter, nor did she treat the other party as her own daughter. In the latter part of the plot, Fett once hoped that Pray Xia was able to accept herself, and she even did not hesitate to tell the other party that she could even be an enemy of the Time and Space Administration.

But Prescia did not accept Fett, but chose to fall into another dimension with Alicia.

These two plots are, in every sense, a "whitewash" for Fett.

The official statement is that after the death of her daughter Alicia, Plessia established the FATE plan to resurrect her daughter, and finally created Fate.

For a period of time, Fett was indeed regarded as a daughter by the other party, but Prescia suddenly realized that Fett and Alicia were different, so her attitude changed drastically, and she treated Fett in various ways.

However, the sharp-eyed and deep-sighted audiences discovered the "truth" hidden behind them.

The "FATE Project" itself is an illegal project. When Prescia was carrying out this project, she had cooperated with the big villain of the third part. The FATE that emerged from this project, together with Prescia It may be regarded as a criminal by the Time and Space Administration. Even if Fett can be pardoned, Fett's future is completely ruined. But everyone knows that Fett is a member of the Sixth Division of Special Agents and one of the "Big Three".

And in this, what did Prescia do?

The time is running out, Prescia began to cut off Fett's feelings with herself in various ways, and then abused each other in various ways, making Fett a "victim".

In the later plot of the first season, Prescia originally didn't need to show up in front of the Time and Space Administration, but she did it to clean up Fett.

But at the end of the plot, when Prescia was desperate, facing the olive branch that Fett threw, she chose to give up. This is not to say that this "big boss" does not want to fight to the death, but that she What pays attention is Fett's own life and future.

At that time, no matter what Precia said, it was not a good thing for Fett, but Precia finally chose to fall into a different dimension, and the whole thing was easy to say.

Morinya agrees with this view.

Eh?

Thinking too much?

No, no, it's not that I think too much.

In fact, Senxia was one of the instigators of this concept in her previous life.

As a conscientious young historical restorer, now I can make Lyrical Nanoha, why can't I put in some private goods?

Maki Tsuzuki may really just make the audience think too much, but Morinka is planning to design this way.

Pity the parents of the world.

Neon Gold did not deal well with Prescia who appeared in the memories and illusions later. Prescia who appeared in the memories and illusions all appeared in the image of a gentle mother. This is The "whitewashing strategy" of the mud bomb here.

But this strategy is too pale, and it can't explain Precia's abuse of Fett.

The strategy that Senxia thought of was to solve the problem from the root.

Precia may have realized from the beginning that Fett is not Alicia, but another individual, and then raised him as her own daughter; it is also possible that Precia is gradually living, Realize that Fett is not Alicia, but has accepted the fact that the other party is his "other daughter".

Morinia decided to treat such a plot ambiguously.

Since she didn't intend to describe a story of blackening and depression, Morika decided to turn the magical girl Lyrical Nanoha into a real "healing direction."

Well, it's not the kind of writing "healing" and pronounced "causing depression", but the real depression...Bah, it's the direction of healing.

That's right, Teacher Xia Sen wants to become a truly warm and good person!

In the plot, Senxia is ready to portray Fett's mother into such a mother.

A truly great mother, even if her child hates herself, will enable her to live strong and happy.

What Morinia wants to convey is such a concept.

When making the main storyline, Mori Xia used this storyline as the second mainline hidden under the fetters of the first mainline Nanoha and Fett, that is, the mother's love for her daughter.

Of course, in addition to this line, many very special things can be added to the plot.

On the bright side, the whole story may be a very passionate Lily Magical Girl's work, but hidden under this theme, there can be a lot of content.

Great maternal love, great sacrifice, great persistence.

These contents can be included.

And these contents can be very positive energy.

Morinka thought so.

"The first two episodes can be a little bit routine. In this way, it will create something that we are saying that this is a magical girl story, but in this, we have to reflect a little different thing. In this case, for the latter The audience will not feel abrupt when changing."

Senxia muttered, while looking at the laptop screen.

How should we modify it here?

Let Fett appear early?

Actually, it was Precia and Fett who attacked Yuno?

Well, it can be considered as a concept.

But this can't play a key role, and the key part still has to start from the top of human settings.

Think about it, what kind of characters are the magical girls now...

Well, a very ordinary girl will fantasize, have a girlish heart, will have a crush, and will do many things that a girl does, and her personality is as innocent and beautiful as a girl.

What about Nanoha?

In the original work of Tsuzuki Maki, Nanoha was actually a somewhat empty character at the beginning. Although she is like a normal character in her daily life, she has always been confused about what she wants to do.

This kind of personality is actually somewhat similar to the pleasure prisoner in the world of Xingyue FATE, Father Yanfeng Kiri of Mapo before his "pleasure" personality awakens.

In the FATE series, Yanfeng Qili is one of the behind-the-scenes in FATE/STAY_NIGHT, while in the prequel FATE/ZERO, the other party is an empty person who has no goals and can find no happiness, and acts completely according to the rules. After discovering that she was happy with the suffering of others, Yanfeng Qili began to transform.

Among the magical girl Lyrical Nanoha, Lyrical Nanoha was also a somewhat similar person at the beginning. Of course, with different degrees, but after possessing magic, Lyrical Nanoha began to change. She realized what she wanted to do.

By the way, this kind of conspiracy theory was also mixed by Senxia among the instigators of the previous life.

"But with this design, will it make Nanoha's setting a little gloomy? Well, sure enough, add some elements of the Department of Thermal Studies."

Morinia reserved his opinion about this idea. Although the change is feasible, whether the audience can accept it is another matter.

Sure enough, as one of the ancestors of the magic cannon, which is respected as the "magic cannon", the magical girl Lyrical Nanoha is more suitable for a positive style.

And it was at this time that the name of a work appeared in Senxia's mind.

"...Tianyuan breakthrough..."

Tianyuan Breakthrough is a combat animation. Because the plot is always related to various combustions, many people follow the term "scrap cute works" and call it "scrapped works".

Maybe it would be great if Lyrical Nanoha could be burned a bit?

Many people are among the magical girl Lyrical Nanoha, and Lyrical Nanoha is "making friends with a cannon", using magic to make friends with each other before making friends with each other.

But in fact, Mori Xia felt that compared with Nanoha's magical talent, her persevering character was more rare and valuable.

Even if Fett was beaten all over, he and Fett must understand each other. Even if they fall down, they must stand up again and show a healing smile at the sad enemy. In order to achieve all of this, Nanoha can use his own Will and tenacity will bear all the pain.

Well, in fact, this is the effect Senxia wants.

This is the "great persistence".

Many people think that Nanoha may be "invincible" at the level of magic, but Mori summer never thinks that it is her heart that is truly "invincible". Her warm light can still reach everyone's heart, making people feel the warm sun shining on their faces in the cold.

"Well, Nanoha's story starts here. In order to realize his gentle ideal, Nanoha can persevere and burn himself like Tianyuan breakthrough..."

Good_Job!

Senxia, ​​who was mixed with private goods all the way, said that her heart was very happy.

"By the way, in this case, should the plot of the first season be stretched?"

The first season of Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha is a season fan, that is, only about twelve or three episodes in length, and when it comes to the third part, Lyrical Nanoha becomes a half-year fan.

But when Morinka was conceiving the story here, he found that if he wanted to realize the content he wanted to shape, perhaps the content of about 13 episodes would not be a complete story at all. At this time, Morinka needs to be able to lengthen it. space.

In these pages, the normal plot may not be modified too much, but in the story, in order to increase the plot part full of hints and metaphors, it needs to be stretched a lot.

Moreover, Morinia did not create a story purely for the purpose of writing such a plot. The story has a purpose to be achieved, but in fact it is to make the story more attractive.

What Senxia wants to do is actually the kind of feeling that everyone can feel warm and passionate about the story at the beginning, and then add some parts behind this warm story to make some audiences think about it.

Of course, Morinka is not trying to make everyone feel scared, but to make everyone moved by the story.

On the surface, it may be a story of passion, a strong liquor full of impact, but in fact, it is a gentle and beautiful connotation, and it is full of mellow aged wine.

In order to achieve these conditions, the narrative structure of the entire story will be changed~www.readwn.com~ It’s a little troublesome. The first season of the original world line of Nanoha, the content is a season of content in total, but if it is transformed into a semi-annual show If so, the rhythm must be revised..."

Well, this is a big project.

But Senxia has no reason to refuse such a big project.

In any case, it is also very interesting to stuff our own private goods in when saving Lyrical Nanoha.

I don’t know what Tsuzuki Maki in this world and the original world will think after seeing her Lyrical Nanoha...

...

In fact, I was also one of the initiators of the concept that Prescia is a good mother... But it seems that this statement is not very popular, so I want to...sell, enter, private, and stock!

Ahem... Actually it might be like this~

All in all, two in one.