Tokyo's Gentleman Story

Although senxia still wanted to chat with the uncle, he checked out after he came back from the mountaineering. Senxia didn't see each other. However, the other side left a note to Sen Xia, which said: "I'm looking forward to seeing your new EVA work, a passing cartoonist."

Where's the pit father! Now, what is your name!

Although I don't know the identity of the other party, it doesn't affect the next thing of senxia.

Don't worry, xuenai. Brother won't laugh at you!

Senxia looks at xuenai with encouraging eyes, on xuenai's face Well, I can only say that the expression is quite subtle.

Anyway, senxia has been working hard on the writing of plays at this time. If it rains all the time today, he thinks that he should be able to write about 10000 words today. The script of a play is not a novel, but a lot of 10000 words.

Generally speaking, the best time for a play is about 1 hour and 45 minutes. According to the different scripts and the number of people, the length of the whole play is about 10000 to 50000 words. The school drama could have been a little more casual, but according to the instructions of the elder sister, they wanted to be "professional", so senxia carried out according to this specification.

"Well..."

After writing a lot of words, senxia yawned and looked at the time. It was already noon.

It was a bit dark outside, and it was bright at this time. The lightning had stopped, but the rain didn't seem to diminish at all.

In the opposite of senxia, at this time the snow has stopped, she is lying on the table looking at himself.

"What's the matter?" Senxia wrote more than 4000 words in hand. He was preparing to have a rest at this time.

"My brother is really good when he is writing seriously." Snow is smiling, "imperceptibly to see infatuated."

"Hoo It's almost time to have a rest now. I'll go to lunch later Senxia pointed to xuenai's manuscript, "how much did you write about it?"

"In terms of words, it's more than 6000 words." Xuenai said, while passing the text to Sen Xia, and then she said, "by the way, brother, I think we can modify it here."

Xia Sen, however, can't think of so much love drama as snow.

"This is the first draft and will be revised later. What do you mean?"

Senxia took xuenai's manuscript, and then looked at the other side with his fingers on his own text.

"Although Mizuho is a boy, Maria once reminded him not to show off before, so I think Mizuho at this time would be better if she used a feminine tone."

In Japan, there are some differences between boys and girls in terms of self assertion and tone. Although the pronunciation is similar to "I" in translation, there are still some differences in some places. For boys, it is usually "servant", while for girls it is "private".

As for Maria, she is Mizuho's childhood sweetheart, who helps Mizuho disguise as her sister in the story.

"Then this place should be Mizuho, speaking with a hesitant manner and tone." Xuenai put forward his own suggestion.

"Well, it is." Senxia heard xuenai's suggestion and added a note to the back, "well, let me see what you wrote."

Then he picked up xuenai's manuscript and observed it.

"Ah The writing style is surprisingly sophisticated... "

Before reading the article, senxia originally planned to read xuenai's writing style, but xuenai's writing style really scared senxia.

"Even if I had written it myself, I'm afraid it would not have been better." To tell you the truth, "but I still like my brother's style of writing. I always think that my brother is a genius. Although some things will do strange things, my brother is really good."

Snow is smiling.

Senxia did not answer xuenai, but continued to look at the article in hand.

Xuenai's style of writing is somewhat different from senxia's. Sen Xia's writing style is more vigorous than that of senxia's, while xuenai's writing style is very delicate. For EVA's stream of consciousness works, this delicate description is more important than senxia's wild spirit.

Just over 6000 words, the whole character image of Shinji has been reflected in senxia's heart.

After passing through time and space, Shinji was puzzled and shocked at first, and then this emotion gradually changed into another mood. Shinji doesn't want to see the Earth destroyed, and Shinji doesn't want to see all the destruction caused by his own mistakes.

In this part of the plot, xuenai is corresponding to the plot of the last two words of EVA's TV Version, which tells a kind of detachment of Shinji's mood.

"It's really great." Senxia couldn't help but praise again.

However, after the praise, senxia blushed a little. Before that, she seemed to want xuenai to become a talent. But now, after seeing xuenai's article, senxia felt her cheek hurt."Eh Wait. " Senxia looked at the wonderful writing style and seemed to think of something, "this style always has a sense of deja vu. I always feel that I have seen it somewhere..."

What What Where on earth is it?

"Ah!" Xuenai was still smiling and listening to senxia's praise to herself, but after hearing this sentence, she cried out in silence, and then said in a panic, "probably because I have read a lot of famous works, so subconsciously copy their writing style, ha ha ha..."

"Well, it does have the demeanor of a famous man." Xuenai's talent, even Sen Xia can't deny, "in this way, if EVA retake is given to you, I can rest assured."

If you can, I'd like to give this article to master Ji ye and let her draw illustrations. Since senior sister Qianjia says that master Ji Ye is good at drawing younger sister's paper, she will be given the younger sister's paper for this novel to draw.

"Well, that's it for the moment. Let's go to lunch first." Sen Xia put down the manuscript, and then called snow to go out with himself.

Well, with xuenai's joining, there should be no trouble in the second half of the year. Before that, it was caused by the shortage of manpower. But with xuenai, everything will be all right.

In this way, the future is really wonderful. As long as we go on in this way, senxia's ambition can also be realized

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