Tokyo's Gentleman Story

ALDNOAH.ZERO However, if we pull out the story and mission character between the hero and heroine, we will find that the final ending is not right. The seemingly garbage ending is just a compromise.

Why did it end like this?

It's very simple. The writer has no idea.

Of course, it doesn't rule out that the screenwriter wants to play deep and show that "ah, there is no love in front of politics".

It's very traditional, but it's not modern at all.

If you simply modify the ending, it will be natural, but the plot will be far fetched, because the protagonists will become very strange.

Then, Sen Xia found that the root is not in the simple ending, but in the heroine's plaintive petty bourgeoisie sentiment.

This is what needs to be knocked down!

"Well But if you don't give the heroine so many parts, it's hard to show the change. "

It's rare to change the Mars emperor from a fool to a clever boy The clever old man, senxia is quite satisfied with such a magic reform.

This is the emperor.

ALDNOAH.ZERO The original is about the Martian Princess eiseiram who is assassinated by a Martian Earl when she comes to visit the earth. However, as a result, she has already disguised herself to go shopping, so she has escaped a disaster.

Then, the heroine and the hero meet each other by chance. Under the leadership of the protagonist, inairfan, they smash the Earl of Mars, and they go all the way to find the battleship deukalion, which was developed by earthlings with Martian Technology.

Then, eiseiram was wounded in the battle and was taken to the moon by the man-2 for treatment. He was in a coma. From then on, this silly white sweet lady stayed in the jar and went off the n set. The hero and the number two even beat the dog's brain. And then, the woman woke up and ran away with Huang Mao Run away

If there is any interpretation in AZ's original work, it must be this.

Lick the dog and have nothing at last!

Of course, it is said that the heroine is for political marriage and peace. But how to say, it is not advisable to force the black to be disabled.

Black deep can if from the heart, not forced. Jpg.

If you want to make lunch, you should pave the way from the first episode. If you want to make a tragedy, you should lay a foundation from the beginning (cough) Mr. Xiasen won't do this this time. He wants to be a person and a good man.

So, Mr. shawson is going to take the sunny route.

Well, I'm going to write an interesting story for the haapyend of xuenai and me.

"Well, yes, I'm even shawson of light now!" Senxia could not help but make a voice.

“…… So what about Mr. shawson of light? " Qian Jia sits beside and listens quietly.

Senxia just brought out the story of magic transformation. Qianjia over there still likes it.

But Sen Xia here said more than half, most of them are telling the story of the heroine, the total feeling seems to be less than half of the appearance.

"Well, of course, there are plots of inasmus jiezuka, but we have to understand that as a princess of Mars, eiseiram is the core role in promoting the works."

It can be said that the characterization of the princess in the original work has not been completed at all. The abrupt transformation and ending seem to have hurt the brain because of serious injury, and finally ran away with passers-by. No matter what the reality is, when the animation develops to that step, it gives readers the impression that her decision is not normal.

Because of the relationship between the original work and the needs of the plot, Sen Xia unconsciously gave the other side a play.

As a result, after senxia conceived it, he found that it was not a matter of a day to change his mind. Even this process may have more than ten episodes.

This can be regarded as a drama.

However, if the princess's character is resolute in the beginning, it will be meaningless.

Animation needs drama. Jpg.

Moreover, at the beginning of the cute sister paper, into a determined fighter, it seems good.

Exactly, it can also be in sharp contrast to the current seed lacs. At the beginning, lax Klein was a naive singer, and finally became a politician, one of the origins of "pink black".

Our golden hair (the color of the princess's hair) was also a naive princess at the beginning, and then became a firm beauty of light Ah, it's the warrior of light. This contrast is also great.

"But there's a real need to reconcile the issue of play."

Senxia muttered.

AZ's original work also has this problem.

The identity of the princess runs through the whole animation. It can be said that she is the invisible real protagonist. Maybe the screenwriter also noticed this problem, so she was seriously injured later. In fact, the essence is to make the heroine's identity not to snatch the drama. But the result was a sudden change.Facts have proved that Rome wasn't built in a day, and the accumulated burden of the early stage is reflected incisively and vividly at the last moment.

That's the problem.

"It's not impossible for the heroine to be the protagonist." Qianjia thinks it's interesting.

"But wasn't senxia thinking about air combat at first? And the royal highness of the princess will not drive a machine? " Yulixiang has not forgotten the original intention of Mori Xia.

"Let the heroine also open the robot Is that ok? " Xiaotou thinks it's very good.

"The girl who drives the robot? Is this the pinnacle of what kind of leap? But it's not easy to do now, right? And it doesn't match the heroine's identity and temperament. " Senxia thinks this is not good.

It might be possible to change the situation, similar to the story of angel and dragon wheel dance, but at least this script can't.

"It seems that you also wanted to cooperate in a heroine's aircraft battle before, senxia?" Qianjia still remembers what senxia did before.

"Yes." Mori said, "Fukuda is still interested. Seed's planning for the second quarter is now in progress. After that, Fukuda will come over. "

Just after two, the third. Jpg.

The "whore of angels and Dragons", which is jokingly called "the third part of seed", should be started after the end of the second part. It is more interesting. If it is too late, the drama will be poor.

"So we're here, and the supervision is not sure yet?" Qian Jia thought of a practical problem.

"Lihua has been asked to investigate." Lihua isn't here because she's helping senxia with the list. Suitable works also need appropriate supervision.

We can't let the new house take a plane fight.

After finishing the episode, we are now returning to the problem of reality.

No matter who the supervisor is, Sen Xia is a screenwriter.

Of course, the concrete expression depends on the credit of others.

However, as a planner and screenwriter, Sen Xia needs to finish the preliminary work first.

The preparation time of animation is very long.

But, you think you're really starting to make?

No, it's not.

In fact, in the early stage of animation, most of the time is - in! Pull! PI!

Yeah, bullshit.

Of course, it's not just about pulling, but about the tone, the script, the settings, etc., including lines, colors, etc. What kind of works should be used, what kind of painting techniques, what kind of characteristics need to be taken into account.

Not only Japanese animation, but also a big eastern country in the future.

In fact, more than half a year is enough to start animation production. What needs to be determined in the early stage are various settings, tone and so on.

If the supervisor completes the dubbing of the split script, the actual painting is very fast.

Of course, it can't be too fast. It will collapse too soon.

As the creator of Mori Xia, this time, of course, is guided by the plot, and the script is determined first.

Of course, it doesn't necessarily work if it's confirmed, because it depends on the supervision.

So what senxia asked Lihua was to choose an interesting supervisor who could accept new things.

"Do you have the supervision you like? How about following this idea as far as possible?" Qian Jia asked.

"Water island supervision." Senxia said.

"Ah? Isn't it from this club? "

Musashino also has its own oversight.

But senxia didn't seem to want to use her own people. She looked for people from outside.

"It doesn't matter. I'm going to tell you through the Nuno supervisor. Lihua is coordinating. However, the water island supervisor is working on the alchemist of steel. He should be free when he finishes. But I'm not sure. If I don't have time, I'll have to find someone else. " "Moreover, there are few love stories in Shuidao's supervision works, but although our new work doesn't need love stories, the key parts are very important. We need to rely on the diversity to solve the specific problems. We need some professional talents here..."

For example, at the beginning of senxia's story, there was a light but wonderful boymeetgirl feeling, but that feeling was not something that everyone could do. This did not even see the power of supervision, but the level of diversity performance.

"All right. However, in this case, I think the ideological nature can still be reflected. "

Senxia has a profound connotation of the works, but this connotation is not reflected by ordinary people.

If you let the baby dolphin supervisor do it, maybe the whole taste is wrong.

"No more supervision!" "Let's talk about the story and the script. If I can't help it, I can do it myself

Of course, senxia can also go on. At least, it's OK to make a appearance, but we still need a "Deputy Supervisor", otherwise the quality of the work Maybe there is no quality.

Although he has specialized skills and Mori has theoretical knowledge, he still needs some experience."Well, let's start with the story." Since Sen Xia has already had the supervision that she likes, Qianjia has a bottom.

"Well. OK. I'm still thinking about how to do it. It's not easy to assign parts. "

Senxia shook her head.

in fact, when she took the story of her royal highness, the whole story has changed from a simple hero story to a double protagonist story.

Senxia said: "the hero is a normal line. At the beginning, he was an ordinary person. He looked at the world from the perspective of ordinary people. He took the kingly route. After realizing that the earth's countries are dregs, he launched the road of self-help. Because of the camp problem, the heroine can see the decay of the Empire. She knows the emperor's heart skill and that the emperor is paving the way for her future. But she knows that this is class oppression Cough, it's too much. It's probably like that. "

Sonchard paused and drew two road maps on the whiteboard.

“…… So in the end? "

"Of course, it is the founding of the people's Republic, the reunification, and the community of human destiny. In short, when we get to the back, we play together

In fact, the design on senxia's side is not a good thing, regardless of the pros and cons.

“…… So after the initial resistance, the hero is also disappointed with the earth. This made him embark on a new road, a road of seeking truth from facts... "

Although Sen Xia said the role of the heroine before, but in fact, the role of the male protagonist jiezuka InaI fan is also very important.

The heroine needs to sublimate the theme, while the hero's existence is to lead the story to the end.

Only when the hero and heroine are together can we reach the final necessary and sufficient conditions.

It is not dynastic reincarnation, nor eternal Empire, but a truly integrated human destiny.

Of course, this is not easy, and even the struggle still exists, but it is the business of posterity. They just need to do their own things well.

The outcome is not necessarily the optimal solution, but the outcome must be hopeful.

"Let's separate the hero and heroine and make two stories." Hulixiang felt very troublesome.

"That's not complete." Senxia shook her head.

However, this sentence of the monitor's adult, let Sen Xia think of what in the heart.

"Or are we going to tell the story from two perspectives? Two routes? " Qian Jia thought.

Eh?

This seems to be more interesting.

And Youqi over there seemed to think of something when she heard the two people's words. She wrote a paragraph.

"The odd number tells the story of the hero, and even the story of the heroine. How about that?"

"Oh, oh, oh, that's it!"

Mori suddenly opened up.

This is a good way.

It is represented by ab double route.

A lot of people have done this kind of thing, and it's not just mud boom.

For example, the hope chapter and despair chapter in "on the destruction of bullets", and in a large Eastern country, there are also "zhenhun Street" which adopts a similar method.

Of course, there are still some differences between the two sides.

The method proposed by Youqi is more similar to POV perspective. In fact, the first is about the same thing as the heroine.

This kind of thing is better done, in fact, it is not the two works, but the work "anecdotes of the headless knight".

"It's a good way to behave. However, the requirements for supervision are particularly high. " "And maybe drag the show But it doesn't matter. We can do two episodes a week... "

Musashino is short of everything, but there is no shortage of money.

Self production and self-sale is so confident that other people sell DVD need 3000 discs to return the cost, and their own only need 1500 discs to return the cost. This is the difference between working and self-produced.

"Well, that's it." Sen Xia thought it was very good, very good, "the actor's perspective is mainly to play, and the heroine's line is more important in literary drama. Well, this is probably the feeling."

As for the rest of the trouble, such as the coordination of the play, the rhythm of the narrative and so on Leave it to the supervisor!

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