Transformed into a comic book artist

"The creativity of Miaobi is a bit outrageous!"

"Is this what the Book of Life and Death actually does?"

"The protagonist Yagami Yue is so incomprehensible that it is impossible for the police to catch him."

"The plot at the beginning of Miaobi is too big. The protagonist is invincible! He doesn't even need to be at the scene to kill people. He is a new generation of King of Hell. How to draw this situation next?"

"Tsk, tsk, I like Yagami Yue's character. Some things in our society are too stupid. To protect and protect each other... we need people like the protagonist to save her."

When Su Xianer published the content of the first episode of "Book of Life and Death", both cartoonists and readers came to watch it.

As one of the masterpieces of the previous life, the opening rhythm of "Little Book" is very tight. If we refer to the online text, the first episode of "Little Book", whether it is creativity, content, or the rhythm of writing, is is extremely attractive.

In one sentence, the first chapter has already entered the Gao Dynasty! And she didn't modify any content at all. She just changed the names of places, people and the God of Death, turning it into the "Book of Life and Death".

Qiao Mo, who was at home at this time, carefully read the first episode of "The Book of Life and Death" with a gloomy expression on his face. He finally calmed down after thinking of something.

Qiao Mo looked down on Miao Pen before, but this time the other party made him treat him differently, but he was only slightly surprised.

Is the beginning of "Book of Life and Death" good? Well, great! It can be said that anyone who has watched the first episode will be attracted to it, but it also has a fatal flaw.

Thinking of this shortcoming, Qiao Mo knew that the real enemy of this newcomer comic contest was still the duo of Liu Ping and Zeng Yi, not this so-called wonderful pen. Even if the opponent was a cute girl who was extremely popular in Tencent Animation, but the review The Newcomer Comic Competition is not for readers.

Jingle bell bell! ——

The phone rang, and when he saw it was Lin Xueqin, Qiao Mo answered the phone.

"You can give up paying attention to Miaobi. By the way, you don't need to lead her anymore." Lin Xueqin was a little ashamed at this time. He hated Miaobi half to death before, but yesterday it was revealed that the other party was a girl, which made his resentment dissipate. A lot.

It's not that he has become a fan of Miaobi, but he feels that for a middle-aged man to compete with a young girl, he really loses his status and is a bit bullying.

"It seems that the teacher has also read the first chapter of Miaobi?" Qiao Mo said with a smile after hearing this.

Lin Xueqin snorted coldly, "I have to say that the first episode of "Book of Life and Death" changed my view of Miaobi a lot, but from the first episode it can also be seen that Miaobi cannot tell stories at all!"

Yes, Lin Xueqin still thinks that Su Xianer can't tell stories.

"The stall for the first chapter is too big, the comic will collapse, and it won't be able to survive in the later stages." Lin Xueqin said with a cold expression, "The comics are actually similar to the novels. In "The Book of Life and Death", the protagonist Yagami Yue The setting is that he is a genius high school student and the controller of the book of life and death. This means that Yagami Yue is invincible and will not be caught no matter how he kills, because he is not present at all. How to catch such a murderer? How are the people from the police station going to catch him?

This is the difference between gods and humans, and Miaobi still draws it like this. Her beginning is really great, but it's a pity that Miaobi is just a seventeen-year-old girl. There is a sentence in the suspense mystery comic that is 'the author's representative work of IQ' The IQ of the characters', and the IQ of a seventeen-year-old girl can control the protagonist Yagami Yue? If the protagonist's IQ settings are inconsistent, it means the comic collapses. "

Not only that, although Lin Xueqin has never drawn suspense mystery comics, he has read many suspense mystery novels. He has never seen the protagonist or the murderer commit a crime with mythical means.

So without a very reasonable plot, how could the police defeat this protagonist?

Of course, if the mysterious man who appears on the last page is someone with the same means, then he can continue to draw, but this means that this comic has become mediocre.

The struggle between man and God is more attractive, or is the struggle between God and God more attractive? There is no need to discuss this point, there is a conclusion.

This is why Lin Xueqin is so determined. In some comic book author groups he has joined, many people are scratching their heads and cannot figure out how to find out the protagonist.

You can kill people in the air, and you can also set the prisoner's death. This book of life and death is simply an artifact. Coupled with the protagonist's IQ, it is obviously invincible!

If you put this in a novel, it would be a brainless and enjoyable article! But this is a suspense reasoning that requires logic and reasoning. Obviously, the first chapter of "Book of Life and Death" did not let him see these contents.

Therefore, "Book of Life and Death" may be popular in other categories, but in suspense reasoning? Certain death!

"Not bad!" Qiao Mo nodded in agreement. This is the fatal flaw of "Book of Life and Death". It's fun at the beginning, but what happens next? This is a great test for a cartoonist, and he, who is very good at suspense reasoning, can't think of any way to find out the protagonist, let alone other people.

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While Lin Xueqin and Qiao Mo were talking on the phone, a pair was also discussing. This pair was Liu Ping and Zeng Yi.

"How about it? Can you think of some subsequent plot developments?" Zeng Yi looked at Liu Ping expectantly, hoping to get a response from him.

People in the comics industry didn't know that he and the other person were college classmates or roommates, and they had a deep relationship, so as soon as Zeng Yi invited him, Liu Ping came over to work as a story scripter for him.

As the winner of last year's National Silver Award for Suspense and Mystery Novel, Zeng Yi has great confidence in Liu Ping. Today, Miaobi suddenly released the complete first chapter of "The Book of Life and Death". The two of them read it two or three times. Zeng Yi and Qiao Mo and Lin Xueqin basically have the same idea.

Liu Ping shook his head to signal the other party to be quiet.

Then he watched it over and over again. As a senior author of suspense novels, Liu Ping knew that anything in a suspense mystery novel could be a clue, so the same could be said for comics. In other words, comics have pictures and are easier to discover.

After a long time, Liu Ping frowned slightly and said, "If my guess is correct, the last mysterious person who appeared should be the protagonist's opponent. According to some rules of the book of life and death that the protagonist obtained before, one of them indicates that ' If you don’t know the appearance of the person being named, it won’t work. Similarly, if you don’t know the name and only know the appearance, it will be the same. In other words, if you want to confront the protagonist, then this person cannot show up and reveal his name..."

After a while, Zeng Yi couldn't help but said, "No more?"

"It's gone." Liu Ping said helplessly, "The information in the first chapter is too little to make it easy to reason, and this notebook is indeed invincible. If you look at it from the police perspective, you don't even know which country the protagonist is from. There are billions of people in the world. How do you catch the protagonist? It’s like finding a needle in a haystack, it’s difficult!”

"Then this comic is bound to collapse?" Hearing this, Zeng Yi breathed a sigh of relief. You must know that the pressure of Miaobi is very great. This style of painting can increase his points a lot. If the competition had not already started, he would definitely You have to imitate this style of painting.

"Don't be too happy too early. After all, we are not Miaobi. Maybe Miaobi has his own way..."

But when he said this, Zeng Yi was a little doubtful. Can he really follow this second chapter?

When the first episode of "The Book of Life and Death" was released, many people were discussing the content of the first episode. As a result, they all discovered that the protagonist Yagami Yue was simply cheating. As long as he didn't do anything, Death is a completely invincible existence.

And Zhao Jing even asked in the Tencent animation editor group, and the replies he got were all "If you don't collapse, you will be a god". However, this made him smile bitterly. The logic of the first episode was too poor. "Book of Life and Death" as a A suspense mystery comic, it seems difficult to not collapse now.

While there was a heated discussion in the comics industry, at 8pm on October 3rd, Su Xianer posted the second episode.

Chapter 2 of "Book of Life and Death", L!

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Gabrielle has been updated and the coffin is revealed!

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Thanks to ‘Ling Xin Lost Dream’ for being the helmsman of this book~