Transmigrating to the Ming Dynasty’s Imperial Examination

Lu Juren looked at his newly revised poem, and compared with the previous one, the generosity of thinking about the king and serving the country was stronger. As for the feelings of family sorrow...I used a "sigh of sorrow" to find the right level, and it can also express the feeling of thinking about the father in my heart. The phrase "Thinking with the flow of water" was changed to "Thinking for the passing of two wings", which is more closely connected with the last sentence, "Meng Jihuan cruise ship", also points out the deep affection of father and son's soul and dream. .

After the change, the artistic conception is more muddled, the poems have prosperity and fu, and the family relationship between father and son can write the righteousness of the emperor and the minister, and it can be regarded as the first Zhongping work.

It's just that it still lacks vocal changes and is a bit stiff. Lu Juren read it again and explained to him in detail: "Your poem uses too many upper two syllables and not enough syllables, so it sounds like a beat to the end, lacking a sense of change. In the four tones, The flat sound is comfortable and long, the flat sound is short, and the middle of the flat sound is different from up, going, and in. The going sound and the flat sound are the same as the raising sound, and the air is long. The second sound is the suppressed sound, and the breath is short. Long and slow, too much squeaking makes the breath short and steep."

He pointed to the phrase "Meng Jihuan Boat Tour" and said: "This sentence uses three words for Qusheng in succession, followed by two Yangping words, Yang Zhi is too much, unlike the tone of the opposite sentence. The next sentence is'so "Yu Cangjiang Liu" is also used alternately with two tones up and down. Although the up tones are tuned up, they are still different from the incoming tones: the up tones are turned up, and the betting on the incoming tones is more useful to suppress the tone of the word. Reading the full text, there is only one wing word for the entering sound. There are too many flat and going sound, and the tone is stiff. If the place where the going sound is used continuously is changed to the three-tone rotation, the intonation is only Richer and more lively."

Cui Xie still felt that he was flat, sticky, and doing well in the confrontation in the past two days. After asking Mr. Lu to dial so little, he realized that he was still far behind.

Writing poems not only depends on talent, but also has to memorize the rhyme table. It seems that Qianlong is not so easy.

Lu Juren looked at him with awe and emotion, with a smile of approval on his face: "It's good to know that you are not doing enough. Now I ask you to be harsh, because we can't hear the flatness in the Mandarin of the Central Plains, no Like the southerners, you can easily remedy it when you make a poem. When you listen to it, you need to get familiar with the rhyme department. When you write a poem, you need to know which sound and rhyme you use, so that you can write it. Great sentence that everyone appreciates."

Cui Xie solemnly handed over: "The disciple understands."

Mr. Lu said again: "Although the rhymes are harsh, they can't be used to harm words, so later generations have come up with many ways to save them—some of them can be saved but not; The sentence is a few remedies; there are also sentences that are solitary, solitary, and solitary, and those who need to be remedied in the opposite sentence, all have a saying, "One, three, five, two, four, six." But you have not even heard four or eight diseases. Remember, if you teach you how to save, you can use rhymes more casually. You have to learn the most rigorous first, relax slowly, and go far in the future without losing the integrity."

Understand, this is just like when he learned to paint before, he first learned to sketch, 2B pen basics, and when he grew up, he could draw beautiful pictures.

Seeing that he did understand his own deep meaning, Lu Juren nodded secretly in his heart, but his face was still so stern. He said in a deep voice, "Writing poetry is also practicing. You have mastered the law of poetry, and you usually touch it. If you don’t touch it, just wait for the inspiration to be touched that day, and then write, it will be impossible to wait for a lifetime. I understand your hard work and do not force you to write a few articles a day, but whenever you see something strange and new, I have to write one and hand it to me for review at the end of the month."

What kind of new situation...He stays in the Imperial College every day, either listening to lectures or repeating lectures. It will be dark when he comes home sooner or later. What inspiration can he have?

That is to say, on the fifteenth day of the new year, I can go out loosely, but I don't want to write this kind of thing in the diary and give it to the teacher.

Choi Xie struggled.

Mr. Lu knocked on the table with his manuscript paper roll into a tube, and said: "You are a person who wants to enter the civil service examination. In the future, whether you want to promote peace with your classmates, or write response poems at banquets or courts, you will be given one at most. Think about the time of Zhuxiang, usually when you compose poems, try to urge yourself to be quicker. Most of the time you write poems quickly, even if the sentences are normal, people can also politely praise you for being brilliant, if you can write If you have a thoughtful sentence, then you can really be regarded as a poet."

There can be such an operation!

Unexpectedly, Mr. Lu is a person who looks rather roundabout and understands image packaging. If it weren't for being a husband in their house, it would be necessary to maintain the teacher's dignified image in front of the students. Maybe he would have formed a school outside and taught small classes, and became a romantic talent.

Cui Xie looked at Lu Juren respectfully, and replied respectfully, "Students understand. Students must think more about writing, in the hope that there will be a day when they will be enlightened."

"Not only think and write more, but also read more." Lu Juren threw him a few books of Tang and Song poetry, which he had prepared for a long time, hidden under the "Thousand Characters" and a pile of messy papers, and told him to go back to play well and chew on them. Allusions of words, rhythm and rhyme.

Lu Juren also had to prepare for the exam in three years. He was going back to study in the evening. After teaching here, he felt that it was almost enough, so he asked him to go back to study on his own and return to the guest house with a book and paper.

Cui Xie went in to bid farewell to the second elder, sent his husband home, and returned to the small courtyard where he lived.

Cui Qi is tracing the sub-regions of the new color picture in his room. The progress of the painting has reached the end of the twelfth volume of "Ma Chao vs. Jia Mengguan, Liu Bei leads Yizhou Mu". This time there are also two large cross-page pictures, one is Zhang Fei Zhan Ma Chao, and the other is Zhao Yun persuading Liu Bei. Because this time the Chinese Super League and Ma Chao dropped out first, and the drama was heavy, he and Liu Bei, who had changed the costume of the state animal husbandry, were also included in the single-player color book. However, Cui Xie personally changed Ma Chao to Guan Yu——

Anyway, I have painted a lot of Ma Chao in the previous book. This time about Yu wants to enter Sichuan and Ma Chao competes, how can I draw more Guan Yu dressed as a prefect? It happens to match Liu Bei, and he can also advertise for the next volume of the solo meeting.

He opened the book of poems and browsed it, printed it as a PDF in his mind, and asked Cui Qi as he read it: "How is your father and the others selling these two days? Is anyone making trouble? If you deliberately find fault and tell me, I will take the adult's Post to Shuntian Mansion to file a complaint."

Cui Qi put down the pen, looked at him and said: "Our shop is visited by many people from the noble family, and no one dares to make trouble. It's just that your big picture, big brother, is so good. People always ask the buddies and shopkeepers to buy them. Officials and honorable people. My father has already pushed a few, but I'm afraid there will be no one in the future..."

The Four Beauties had been asked by Prince Wang to leave. The Three Kingdoms were so popular, it is normal for someone to ask for the big pictures.

But now I still have to rely on them for publicity, and it’s too easy to sell and it’s worthless, so I’ll do another wave of publicity... He folded a piece of paper as a bookmark, inserted it in the poetry collection, turned his mind, and asked, " How about the employees of Nanhuo Store who can go outside? Are they ready to go south?"

Cui Qi's eyes lit up and asked, "Big brother finally intends to shop in the south? I heard that they are reprinting our editions, and they are also branded as Zhirong Bookstore. Our reputation is ruined by them! Gan Ming'er Let's distribute some seriously engraved books, and let them see who is the true originator of color printing!"

Hey, this is not corruption, this is whitewashing him! Someone took over the name of Cui Meiren'er, and he will be the innocent Cui Jiansheng from now on!

He waved his hand and said, "Look at the quantity of goods. We have a small number of people, and the printed Beizhili can be digested. We will sell the monument in Beijing first. I think we have a lot of money now. I want to ask you to go out of Beijing to find some engraving and printing craftsmen who have no home and are not tired in the south. Apprentices are also good. Bring them back and cultivate them. There will be more things to be printed in the future."

Cui Qi said, "This is easy. Mr. Fang is familiar with Jianyang. They have a lot of editions, more pear trees, and more craftsmen. Fujianese are also willing to endure hardships and should be willing to come over. It's just that the people there are a little listening. Don't understand."

That's not a big problem. When you come, you can teach slowly, and then you can get married and have children locally, and you can take root.

Go back and sign a long-term contract for them for several decades. Now that the market has just opened, they just don’t want to leak their secrets when their Ju’an Zhai is on the rise. Daming printing industry will develop sooner or later, and now there are so many sets of color printing, he does not expect to keep the printing technology secret for a lifetime.

Cui Xie smiled and said: "Then you should arrange for people to go there as soon as possible. Not only do you need to hire people there, but also buy some good-quality fashionable book editions. We also need scripts and opera books. Let's come back with pictures and print books. By the way, help me buy something..."

Now he lives in the Cui family, and it is his responsibility for the Cui family's old and young people, not only thinking about his own business, but also thinking about opening the Cui family's two stores.

The silk and satin shop is now rejuvenating for a while with two popular trolls, and later slowly draws modern and improved gowns, maybe they can sell another wave of them; but the rouge shop has not had any fist products, nor can they sell it. To pay a high price, you have to look at what is in the chemistry book cheat sheet.

He has made a wine retort now, so he can plant some flowers from the south, try to make a deadly expensive flower lotion, and then make a soap or something.

He was thinking about it, when he saw Cui Qi still looking at him with his mouth half open, he smiled, and pulled his fleshy little face back: "I haven't thought about what I want to do, wait for it. I'll tell you again."

Cui Qi nodded obediently.

Cui Xie picked up the collection of poems again, stroked the cover and said, "Next time someone wants to buy our beautiful pictures, just say to them: This beautiful picture is just like a real beautiful girl, and it must be a beautiful talent that moves the world. , Those who were quietly locked in their homes before they were famous are always a little bit of a petty and low status. Then tell them that the store will ask famous artists to draw big pictures of Da Qiao, Zhen Shi, and Diao Chan, and make up a three-nation five-beauty, which will be delayed until early July. Seventh, let’s hold another vote like that in Qian’an. If they really like it, they can join the conference."

Cui Xie hadn't been to the store very much when he was in Qian'an. I don’t know what happened when he chose the first beauty, but Cui Qi had personally experienced the situation at that time. When I think about it, the hair on his back is standing up, nervous and nervous. Excitedly asked: "Then we still put stamps in the book this time and tell them to vote with the stamps?"

No...That's not enough to grab money.

The Four Beauties don't have a mass basis, so it's just a small deal. Diao Chan, Er Qiao, and Zhen Mi are beautiful women who have been famous for more than 500 years. How can they show their worth with a few worthless paper votes?

Cui Xie's eyes shot two bright silver brilliance like snowflakes, and he smiled: "Does the hardcover book we published already have pictures of five beautiful ladies on the cover? Just one Sun Shangxiang, and 12 volumes will be the cover. Just use it. Their cover pictures are votes. If there is no color picture, you can replace them with poems of chanting beauty. When voting, I would like to invite a few classmates to be judges to rate the poems they voted. Whoever received the most votes and the best poems , Who is the first beauty in the Three Kingdoms."

By the way, I can also comment on the number one talented man in Three Kingdoms poems.

...Who is the painting sold to? In the unlikely event that many wealthy families are fighting, they will offend anyone who sells these paintings to them. Not to mention that Ju'anzhai is not under the name of Cui Xie, and without asylum, even if he is still under the name of Cui's house, a fourth-grade referee can actually not protect anything.

With the simplest ideas of ordinary people, Cui Qi was afraid of offending those high officials.

Cui Xie shook his head and smiled: "We don't have the one who is bothered by customers. We sell this but not the other, and also make people miss the ability to be infatuated without regrets. Isn't this time has been delayed, and there are more painters in the middle? Trace a few large pictures and stare at them to make them the same. Or simply sculpt the face and hands to print, trace the outline, and it is much easier to line and fill in the color. Prepare dozens of sets of drawings first, Whoever wants it will sell them a pair for ten taels of silver, and then slowly draw out and offer as much as you want."