I just wanted to become an immortal and was forced to open a harem

Before I even reached the door, I heard a man shouting loudly.

"Lin, you still haven't paid me the money, you rejected my kind proposal, and you scolded me. How do you think I should punish you?"

"You are all too bullying!"

"You have a tough mouth, right? Come, push his head into the toilet with me. Wash your mouth well and see if you dare to be tough again in the future?" the man said with a sinister smile.

"Ah! No! Let go of Lao Lin, we will definitely pay back the money, please..." A woman cried.

"roll!"

Then there was a series of faint splashing sounds.

"Stop!" Lin Hezhen rushed in quickly and pushed away the men who were committing violence.

"You little bastard, you're looking for death!" The group of people came over and surrounded him.

……

Something emerged from the depths of my mind, fitful, fleeting, and broken, like a colored glass ball that had been smashed into pieces.

Who are those figures?

Who is he?

Who is she?

who I am?

A series of question marks appeared in his mind. He tried hard to think but could only recall fragments and could not put the information together completely.

There are only blurry images left in my memory, like walking in the dark with no direction or goal.

This is an endless darkness.

It's like an abyss, you're staring into it, and it's staring into you...

……

Lin Hezhen felt that his body was extremely heavy, as if a big stone had been pressed down on him, his eyelids could not be opened, and all the bones in his body seemed to be shaking.

"Ah ah ah..."

Suddenly, a sharp and piercing cry sounded in his ears.

Lin Hezhen opened his eyes, and what he saw was a scene that looked exactly like the 3 minutes and 32 seconds of the first episode of "Cyberpunk: Edgerunners".

Lin Hezhen was stunned for a few seconds before he reacted.

"What are you doing? Miss Yangno!" He stood up suddenly.

The other party was caught off guard and suffered an unexpected and violent attack.

"Ah!!!" Yukinoshita Yono screamed.

Then her body fell to the side, her dark eyes staring at the ceiling, breathing heavily.

"Why did the effect of this medicine wear off so quickly? Is it because... my body developed resistance after taking it too many times?"

Yukinoshita Harano murmured, with an unnatural blush appearing on his face.

Lin Hezhen reacted immediately: "It's that cup of tea! Every time you give me hypnosis, you make me drink that kind of tea. You say it can make me more relaxed. It turns out you added ingredients to the tea!"

"Why are you doing this?!" Lin Hezhen stared at Yukinoshita Harano angrily and asked.

"Why?" Yukinoshita Yono smiled slightly and stretched out his hand to ruffle his sweaty temples, looking lazy and casual.

"Because I like you!" Yukinoshita Yono said bluntly, her words and actions were as unconcealed as ever.

Her eyes were charming and fiery, shining straight into the depths of Lin Hezhen's eyes.

"Lin Hezhen, I have liked you since a long time ago. The first time I saw you, I was deeply attracted to you. From that time on, I was determined to get you."

Yukinoshita Yono's voice is soft and gentle, like the shyness of a young girl in love when she expresses her feelings to her lover.

Hearing this, Lin Hezhen's heart felt as if something had hit him, and he trembled slightly.

Yukinoshita Yono continued: "The person you like should be your own. This is my creed. But I didn't expect that my sister Yukino also likes you."

"You know, that is my most beloved sister. I have no choice. As a sister, I can't compete with my sister for a man, right? So I reluctantly quit and gave you to Xiao Yukino."

"But why did you not end up with Xiao Yukino but marry another woman? Now, tell me?"

"I..." Lin Hezhen was speechless.

"Since you are not with my sister, I don't have to worry about anything anymore. I want you to be mine!" Yukinoshita Harano declared bluntly.

The heat in her eyes no longer existed, replaced by crazy possessiveness.

Lin Hezhen said in a panic: "You, you can't do this! I'm already married, and it's illegal for you to force me to do this!"

Yukinoshita Yono ignored his angry rebuke and said lightly: "I know, but I don't mind. Oh, it's better to say that your married status makes me want to stop."

"You are simply crazy!" Lin Hezhen growled angrily, "I would never do that kind of thing to you, don't even think about it!"

"No, dear, you will, and your body has betrayed you."

After saying that, Yukinoshita Yangno stood up and walked to Lin Hezhen, with an evil smile on her lips and looked down at him:

"Just now, and before that, even though your consciousness fell into a deep sleep, you cooperated with every treatment. What's more, after you discovered the little secret between us, you seemed to have become more energetic."

"You bullshit!"

Lin Hezhen pushed Yukinoshita Yono away, jumped to the ground, quickly dressed up, and rushed out of the door.

He didn't dare to stay here for a second, not only because of Yukinoshita Yono, a terrible woman, but also because he was shaken by her words...

Yukinoshita Yangno looked at his running back, a trace of fascination flashed in her eyes: "If you are not willing, I will make you willing!"

"Moreover, even if my sister Yukino knows, I believe she will understand. After all, she is just like me before, enduring, enduring, suffering every day, but not being satisfied..."

Yukinoshita Yangno said resentfully, her eyes were watery, like two crystal clear black pearls, shining with a misty luster.

……

Lin Hezhen rushed out of the mental hospital, feeling hot all over his body, like a fire burning.

"Damn! How could this happen?" Lin Hezhen cursed in frustration.

He jogged all the way to the nearby bridge, and was blown away by the cold wind on the river. He suddenly felt much more awake, and the burning sensation on his body subsided slightly.

"I just reconciled with Hui and promised her that no matter what happens, I will tell her the truth and no longer hide or deceive. But if something like this happens, how can I open my mouth?!"

Thinking of his wife, Lin Hezhen felt a strong sense of guilt in his heart.

Explain why Volume [-] needs to be rewritten

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I saw some book friends saying that the reset version is not as good as the first edition. I think it’s because the tone before the reset was not as twisted and depressing as it is now.

The first version can be seen as the pure love between Hayashi Kazuma and Kato Megumi. The two got married and were very affectionate. They could send candy or something, it might be very sweet.

But have you ever thought about why Hayashi Kazuma and Kato Megumi were so devoted to Megumi as soon as they got married when there was almost no emotional description in the first four volumes?

Did he like Hui so much before, far more than other heroines?

Actually no, the real reason is that Lin Hezhen has an obsession with the concept of "family".

He was not nice to her because he liked Kato Megumi, but because Kato Megumi was his wife and his family, he was nice to her.

And this idea is morbid, which is what this inner demon is trying to solve.

In the case of the first version, I couldn't solve the problem at all.

Because Lin Hezhen's will is already very strong, even I, the author, cannot break the wall of his heart in his normal state.

In the first version, I arranged for other female protagonists to try to attack him, but there really was no progress at all. He just had the same attitude - no matter what you say or do, I can't betray my family.

Lin Hezhen's talent is the biggest factor that hinders him from opening a harem.

So how to write this?

Even if I barely shake off the baggage, I still can't convince myself that Lin Hezhen has untied the knot in his heart and realized his love for the heroines, so he decided to be with them.

Writing that way can only result in a forced happy ending.

This is my first novel, and I made a lot of mistakes. It’s hard to read until I subscribe to it, and I also know that the best option is to abandon this book and start a new one immediately.

But I still hope to finish writing this book seriously, as a literature lover, because I will be a business writer in the future.

That’s why I decided to rewrite it and make the heroines lose their memories. The opening scene was a combination of punches that knocked out Lin Hezhen, putting his family relationship in jeopardy. I used this as an opportunity to rethink things like love, marriage, and family, and through The deaths of the heroines forced him to face his feelings for them.

I know that the tone of this volume is very depressing, the relationships between the characters are very twisted, the cases are boring, and people keep dying, but Lin He is really going through a tribulation, so he deserves to suffer.

There is no need to write the H-plots of the other heroines in terms of structure, so they don’t need to be written later.But the first few are necessary for the plot, so I wrote them—I didn’t do H just for H’s sake.

This volume is not broken. Maybe you feel out of control, but it is progressing normally in my outline.I will try to speed up the pace and strive to finish it at 15 words.

Although there are some spoilers in this article, I don’t think it will affect subsequent reading.I am still somewhat confident in the core baggage and ending of my design.

Chapter 339

He betrayed Hui again, although he was still forced to do so.

Lin Hezhen scratched his head irritably: "What should I do with Miss Yangno?"

"I can't hurt Hui anymore, and I don't want to disappoint Hui."

"But, I don't know what to do now..."

"Hey -" Lin Hezhen sighed helplessly.

At this moment, he discovered that reality is always more absurd than movies and TV shows, and the relationship between people is always so fragile and unbearable.

What's worse is that Lin Hezhen can't guarantee what will happen to him in the future.

"What can I do to change the status quo?" Lin Hezhen was in trouble and frowned tightly.

It was already dark at this time, and the neon lights on both sides of the bridge lit up, decorating the surroundings into a colorful world.

The moon tonight is extra round and beautiful.

It's a pity that he doesn't have any appreciation in his heart.

"Why do I always encounter these things recently? Do I really have to go back like this? But if something like this happens, I have no face to face Hui. She will be very disappointed."

"Damn, what on earth am I going to do?"

This feeling is so uncomfortable, almost worse than death.

Lin Hezhen lay in pain on the guardrail of the bridge, looking at the mighty river under the bridge flowing towards the sea, and a terrible thought suddenly came to his mind - jump into the river!

If you can die, you won't have to face everything anymore, and you won't feel pain, entanglement, and embarrassment anymore!

For a moment, Lin Hezhen only had this thought in his mind, and no other thoughts.

"Perhaps, only death can free me from this nightmare." Lin Hezhen gritted his teeth and said.

Immediately, he climbed up the guardrail and prepared to jump off.

"What are you going to do? Stop it!"

At this moment, a strong man rushed over, hugged Lin Hezhen, and pulled him off the guardrail.

"You don't want your life? You actually want to jump into the river?" the other party yelled.

"Let me go!" Lin Hezhen struggled hard.

"Stop making trouble and get out of here quickly." The man shouted anxiously.

"I want to commit suicide, what does it matter to you?"

"The police asked me to keep an eye on you. If you die in front of me, I won't be able to explain to her."

Lin Hezhen turned around and saw that this person was a policeman with a mustache whom he had met several times.

"Yukoshita Yukino asked you to follow me?" He quickly came to his senses.

The mustached policeman shrugged his shoulders: "You are the key figure in the case. We will naturally arrange for someone to follow you, but it just happens to be me. I didn't expect you to want to seek death. What a coward."

"What do you know?" Lin Hezhen was furious.

"Isn't it just a matter of a few women? You're so worried that you're about to jump into the river. It's really embarrassing!" The mustache shook his head.