I'm catching tricks in the Hong Kong variety show world

At present, the book has 103 million words, and 1 have been collected, all of which have been ordered to 4.

If I want to re-subscribe, the lowest number for the copy of Five Animal Gods is 50, which is slightly better than the lowest number of 45 for the previous copy of Yue Yaer. I guess it’s because of a popular popular book app.

Popular books nowadays, small APP recommendations on the secondary page, in a week, it will probably increase by 3-400 favorites, which is better than nothing.

Another reason is that the smart recommendations that I stopped for half a month have resumed.

Generally, it will be interrupted once between 60 words and 120 million words. I write this book slowly, so the second intelligent recommendation is before 100 million words.

Let’s talk about the updates in July. There were three days of interruption. As of the last day of last month, I had written 3 words, which seems to be about the same as the number of words in the previous months.

When you write 100 million words, or around 80 words, you become very tired, and you grit your teeth and persevere every day.

Books with an average subscription price of less than 1000 are not recommended, and the manuscript fee is not very good. In short, I just want to take a rest and not type for a week.

In addition, I secretly wrote the beginning of an original unlimited flow this month and submitted it to internal submission. It was rejected. I should be able to pass it with some revisions. I will take some time to write it out this week and put it aside for now.

There is also the beginning of a story about immortality and immortality, and the beginning of an urban rebirth original entertainment article. These are the two beginnings that I am going to write next. I will write 2 words in each of the three beginnings. I will wait for the editor to help me select them as the next book.

Preparing a new book does not delay the update of the old book, but it is more laborious to write a little by yourself.

If other authors generally won't say it out loud and will just do it secretly, I don't care. There is no contradiction between preparing new books and writing old books. Others don't know. I give priority to old books. I won't update the old books every day until they are finished. Will think of any plot of the new book.

This is the mentality developed in the previous book.

If the manuscript fee for this book was enough, I would not prepare a new book so early. I was forced by life.

The content for July started on the 7st with Uncle Feng accepting a disciple, and then I wrote the plot of the Soul Resurrection Night. It was divided into two times and ended with about six or seven pictures. I was stuck when I was writing, not because I had no thoughts in my head, but because I It was written once in the book Maoshan Secret Technique. If you repeat the same old work, you must write new ideas. Most people know the plot of Huihunye. It cannot be changed drastically. It is extremely difficult to write new ideas. The key is Li Ang's people. Suppose I haven't written it well either.

Anyway, I feel a little ashamed.

Then there is the plot of the Little Empress Palace, which is the Temple of the Dog King, burying the previous pit.

Han Yuerong's existence involves the subsequent reincarnation plot, which will appear after the double pupils.

Next is the five animal gods.

To be honest, I read that many readers in the book review section criticized me for the poor writing of this copy. I personally said that I tried my best, but I felt a little aggrieved and a little guilty.

After all, it is an original copy, and writing it was the story that consumed the most brain cells in my book so far.

Judging from the results, I gave this copy a score of 8.5 before writing because I had an outline in my mind. During the writing process, I found that many detailed outlines and logic were not solved well, and the score kept falling away from the target. After I finished writing, I looked back and thought about it. Think about it, just give it a 6.5.

I myself am not particularly satisfied. The reason for my grievance is that I consumed a lot of brain cells but did not receive corresponding evaluation. The reason for my guilt is that I did not write down my expectations.

I feel that my ability is not good enough, just at this level.

A little frustrated.

If I were to go back and do it again, I would use flashbacks and interludes to write about the Five Animal Gods, and would not let the protagonist disappear for several chapters.

After the protagonist disappears, the sense of substitution is greatly reduced.

So why would I want the main character to disappear?Because of my handling method, I want to clearly explain the causes and consequences. Here I found one of my shortcomings, that is, I didn’t do it well in detail. I will correct it in the future.

If I were to rewrite it, I would start directly from the murder case, and then move the plot forward bit by bit. This would consume more brain cells, but the protagonist would not lose his presence.

Why did I choose the two copies of Yueyue'er and Wuhushen.

Some people say that I am a literary young person, and some people say that I don’t want to write cool articles, but that’s not the case. A young street writer has no willfulness or the qualifications to struggle with his grades. Who doesn’t want to make money?

When you say I don't want to make money, that's really insulting to me. I love making money so much.

I have communicated with many authors in the group before. I asked them why I am still a loser after three years in the industry. They helped me find many reasons.

Let me summarize.

The first one is that I am often blind when choosing themes. I choose some niche and unpopular themes. If nothing else, just talk about my previous books, Is Water Margin cold or not?Before I wrote the copy of Water Margin, there was no quality book on Water Margin on the entire website (there is now, but there really wasn’t one before).

There are also supernatural literature, what is the market now?Supernatural writing is colder than fantasy and colder than sports writing. The two themes I wrote earlier can be basically summarized as follows. If you choose a wrong theme, you may choose the wrong direction.

How to solve?

My coping strategy is to write the opening paragraph in the future, write a few more, and let the editor help me choose. This is why I prepare 3 opening paragraphs for the editor to screen.

The second problem is that my book is too flat and has no emotions.

To be honest, I have just solved the problem of concise and smooth writing, and I have no talent. Now I don’t even have a thorough understanding of character design. I really don’t know how to deal with higher-end skills such as emotions.

No, but I want to learn slowly.

Always ask for progress.

Therefore, I now intend to make up for or work on my emotions.

Maybe the direction of efforts is not right, Yue Yaer and Wushu Shen are two emotional stories.

It’s not that I don’t want to write exciting articles, but that I am making up for my shortcomings and trying to learn to shape my emotions to make my books less flat.

The third question is, my book is not good or I don’t know how to write good writing.

This shortcoming can only be solved slowly. If I could write cool articles, I would be able to produce high-quality products, so I wouldn’t be stuck with hundreds of orders.

The above are three shortcomings that many colleagues have helped me analyze. I am currently working hard to slowly overcome or make up for them.

After learning the lessons from the copy of Five Animal Gods, I decided not to write an original copy for the third copy of this book.

The thankless work makes me even more tired.

So the third dungeon is related to corpses. It was originally based on Sammo Hung’s two dramas: Scary People and Ghost Fighting, and combined with a little bit of Uncle Nine’s zombie dungeons.

The third copy will probably be the last copy of the book.

In fact, when writing a copy, it is a bit difficult to clearly explain the logic and excitement of a story in just a few tens of thousands of words, and readers often do not have much patience. The author exhausts his brain cells and gets a follower. Ordering a [-]% off reward seems boring after thinking about it.

It is much easier to write about the main world. The main character and several supporting characters can write thousands of words in a dialogue with Shui Yishui, and the brain cells are in a healthy state.

The two copies of Yue Yaer and Five Animal Gods that consume the most brain cells in this book so far.

Let me say a few more words about the copy of Five Animal Gods.

There are two protagonists in this dungeon. The secret protagonist is actually Bai Mao, also known as Huang Xian. What I am telling is the story of the Five Immortals of Northeast China.

The protagonist on the surface is Chen Aiyang, also known as the third uncle.

As for the others, they are supporting roles.

Why did the three members of the old Chen family, Chen Aiyang, Chen Aibing, and Chen Ai'e, let Chen Ai'e die?

I know that Chen Ai'e is the kindest and the least deserving of death.

Then the death of others will not have this effect. Chen Ai'e's death was to write about the badness of the Chen brothers and their family, and to find a reasonable excuse for the subsequent extermination of the family.

Otherwise, if several members of the Chen brothers' family, including children, women, and elderly people, were killed by buffaloes, would anyone say, "It's so cruel?"

Chen Aiyang had been waiting for the two brothers Chen Aibing. After he was hit on the back of the head, he knew that the other party was going to kill them all, so he took the opportunity to pretend to be crazy, hid in the back of the mountain, and escaped from the other party's sight.

At that time, Chen Aiyang advised Chen Aibing to be patient, which actually pointed out his starting point.

Chen Aibing didn't know that he would be beaten to death later. Suddenly, the protagonist and his party came back and brought back Tan Zuochen's urn, which intensified the conflict.

This incident connects the secret protagonist Huang Mao and the overt protagonist Chen Aiyang.

Chen Aibing's surname is Chen, and he has gained Xiaojiu's trust. He is the next generation of Huangxian host and the only male of the old Chen family. Chen Aibing's survival represents the future of the old Chen family.

After all, Chen Ai'e is married, and her child's surname is Cai, not Chen.

It's not a matter of favoring boys over girls, but a custom that goes back thousands of years.

Chen Aiyang is the protagonist of revenge, and Chen Aibing represents the future of the old Chen family. So who do you want to die?

Is there any more suitable candidate besides Chen Ai'e?

Gone.

Let’s talk about why the protagonist has to run away for several chapters. If the protagonist is here, the protagonist knows kung fu, and the protagonist cannot be defeated. The autumn wind will sweep away all the fallen leaves, and the copy will end.

The period of time when the protagonist leaves is the time when the conflict between the two families is fermenting. If the protagonist takes action, not to mention whether it is morally appropriate, at least there will be no trouble for the Five Animal Gods or Huang Xian.

This dungeon tells the story of the Five Immortals of the Northeast. The protagonist of this dungeon is Huang Xian, Chen Aiyang, not Su Hao.

All I can say is that I didn't do it right when setting it up.

Anyway, I have finished writing it. I will at least be afraid when facing original copies in the future. Let’s see how long it takes to get over it.

When I reached 100 million words, I was no longer thinking about 24-hour reading data. What I was thinking about was how to finish the book from beginning to end and have a decent ending.

Try to be worthy of the 50 loyal readers who were at the lowest stage of this book.

At a certain point, I can have a pen name, so that even if I change my vest when I start a new book, at least the past 10 readers can still support me. This is the snowball accumulation.

As for the harvest from the Five Animal Gods dungeon, the protagonist said it when he returned to Hong Kong Island after the dungeon ended. The Five Immortals themselves had no use for it and could give it to his two women.

Su Hao may not be able to use it either.

There will be no purely original plot content in August.

The plot in August revolves around the movie "The Ghost Story" and the Hong Kong drama "The Detective", followed by the old corpse in the mountain village, and "2002". Before entering the third copy, I want to introduce the concept of 'corpse' , good preparation.

I’m not sure whether to write Zombie Rebirth in Seven Days.

There are other better materials to introduce the concept of corpses.

The total number of words in this book is expected to be around 150 million. The last few words are purely a matter of willpower and physical strength.

My most ideal situation is that by the time this book is completed, there will be 10 manuscripts in the new book and seamless connections.

Don't ask me why I don't take a month's rest and have enough time to eat.

I'll probably take a week off at most.

Chapter 267 There’s something wrong with this security guard

Su Hao concentrated, "Tell me the location."

"In XXX community on XX road."

"Tell them I'll be right there."

After hanging up the phone, Su Hao started working.

Xiao Ai, the receptionist of the branch, managed to catch Su Hao. He immediately informed his companions and rushed over, "Brother Hao, how did the matter I asked you last time go? Is there any follow-up to it?"

Su Hao hurriedly walked towards the underground parking lot.

"What is it?"

"It's just a matter of whether the second team of the serious crime team is short of people. You promised to help me introduce them, and now you forget about it?"

Su Hao glanced at Xiao Ai, who was following behind him, with a strange expression on his face. Of course he was flirting with him before. There were indeed few people in the second group of the serious crime team, but not everyone could enter.

He still felt that it would be better for Xiao Ai to stay in the lobby on the first floor to help find out the inside information of the branch.

However, in order to let the horse run away, Su Hao did give some overt and covert hints, and now the other party came to ask for debt.

Su Hao's eyes twitched, "Don't say I won't give you a chance. The crime team needs people, but they have very high requirements for their members."

Xiao Ai said like a chicken pecking at rice: "I've already inquired about it. The major crime team wants some agents who can fight and run, and can independently investigate cases. However, they will also recruit a small number of clerks to handle post-processing work. There are people like this in one group, but you still lack them in the second group, don’t you think I’m just the right person?”

Su Hao scratched his ears and said, "Please take leave now and go out with me."

"Where?"

"Go to the crime scene. If you don't conduct an on-site inspection, how will you know whether you are suitable for the work of the serious crime team? SIR Cheng is also at the scene. If you show your performance well then, maybe SIR Cheng will let you join the team."

Xiao Ai was overjoyed and quickly waved to say hello to her companions at the front desk, then followed Su Hao into the elevator.

It probably means asking the other person to help cover the shift and ask for a leave from the leader.

Opportunities to go out to investigate crimes are rare.

Su Hao deliberately took this opportunity to persuade Xiao Ai to retreat.

Many people think that female police officers are beautiful and dashing, and look majestic in uniform, but Su Hao knows the inside story. Why are there so few female police officers in the front-line police system?

In addition to the fact that the physical strength and fighting ability of female police officers are not as good as those of male police officers, there is also a natural threshold. Not much else to say, let’s just say that detectives often have to come into contact with front-line murder scenes and look for clues from corpses. Can ordinary people withstand this?

Some corpses were cut into many pieces and even made into soup. How could any ordinary woman bear it?

I'm afraid I'll be vomiting for days if I see the scene once.

Another point is that front-line agents are treated like animals. When they encounter urgent cases, they cannot go home for several days and cannot take a shower. This once again discourages many female police officers.

The two policewomen in Su Hao's impression are Cheng Jiahui and He Jiatong (played by Sammi Cheng, one of the blind detective characters, and Johnston's wife). The former has outstanding martial arts and is called the female Tyrannosaurus Rex, while the latter is a carefree tomboy and a complete tomboy. One, this is no ordinary policewoman.

Even such female police officers account for a very small proportion among front-line police officers.