I will only take some good suggestions. For example, some book friends suggested that I add some new characters to enrich the color, so I added the character of Oreki Houtaro.

So, please don’t just tell me how to write here. The writing here is too rubbish.

What are you kidding, I signed a contract and put it on the shelves, but I stopped writing because of your flirtatious "You can't write well"?It's really funny. If I really follow what you said, I can't write well and teach, so I won't write.

Is it then you who take on this responsibility?

What annoys me the most is that I didn't even read the content behind it, just read Chapter 1 and said such things directly, such as how to write after the protagonist E class, let so and so drop out of school.

I have my own outline, and since I have already written it down like this, it means that I have considered the consequences of writing it like this.

Are you here to teach me how to write?

In addition, I have revised the previous two volumes, but the plot has not changed, just to make some plots look more reasonable.

Of course, I will also modify this last time, because I found that no matter how many times I modify it, what should be sprayed should still be sprayed.

Then let’s talk about some of the problems in these three volumes.

The purpose of the ending you saw in the first two volumes is actually my true thought.

As for the first volume, to be honest, those website, library and other foreshadowings were all written by me. When the first volume was finished, I found out, hey, how these contents seem to be connected together.

Then I connected them all in series, and ended in such a muddle-headed way.

But there is a problem with writing this way, that is, the book friends are all in the fog, and they don't know the meaning of these actions of Dazai Osamu.

Then in the second volume, I tried to intersperse it so that book friends can understand Osamu Dazai's actions, and then I have already explained the purpose in the beginning of Chapter 1.

But my writing was too bad at that time (although it is not very good now), and I thought that every chapter must have a protagonist, otherwise it would be incomplete.

That’s why you can often see in the second volume that the occasions where Osamu Dazai is obviously not needed, but the protagonist often comes out to say something, which makes you feel embarrassed, and indirectly causes you to not understand Osamu Dazai’s behavior up.

Now in the third volume, I have improved my previous habits. Every step I write now, you are almost in the perspective of God, and you can know the purpose of Osamu Dazai's behavior. (It may also be impossible to guess, that is, my writing is too poor)

Then you are watching the part where Mio Ibuki goes undercover. I wrote the part of Sho Ryuuen and Kohei Katsuragi directly. There is no Dazai Osamu during this period, but Dazai Osamu is inseparable from the conversations of all the supporting roles. . …

This is another description.

Then I enriched some images of supporting characters, such as Haruki Yamauchi, Hirata Yosuke, Katsuragi Yasuhiro, etc. In the past two volumes, I described too few supporting characters. The actions and psychological descriptions of the supporting characters are richer.

Then you may feel that Ayanokoji Kiyotaka has more descriptions than Dazai Osamu. In fact, I want to make up for the plot of Ayanokoji Kiyotaka in the first two volumes, and then make Ayanokoji Kiyotaka more eye-catching in this volume, so that some people who have never read the original work It is easier for friends to understand the strength of Ayanokoji Kiyotaka.

Also, you may not know what is going on with Horikita Suzune and Dazai Osamu’s relationship problem. This is because I have too few descriptions of the interaction between the two in the past, and then I want to have one in this volume. A larger leaping description, and then pave the way for the subsequent emotional description of the two.

Afterwards, I will add some descriptions of the appearance of the characters, such as how handsome Oreki Houtarou and Dazai Osamu are, and what happened to some behaviors at the time.

After all, what I wrote in the previous volumes was really immature, and some improvements can only be made up slowly later.

In general, although there are still some shortcomings in some plots, the third volume is the one I am most satisfied with so far.

And I also found the biggest problem now, that is, the shaping of the original link is not strong, I don’t know how you feel, anyway, I feel that the original plot I wrote is very very very very very blunt, and I will try to improve this aspect in the future of the problem.

Then, regarding the character of the protagonist, you may be a little confused, why it is different from the one in Wenye, please don't get entangled, I have three explanations here.

The first one is that my writing is not good enough to express the charm.

The second is that you can completely regard the Osamu Dazai I wrote as a person with the same name.

The third is that the protagonist has just turned 16 years old and has not been precipitated.

You can choose whichever of these three you want, and I won't answer any questions about the character of the protagonist after that.

As for the supporting roles, I think it’s normal to forcibly lower their intelligence. Otherwise, the plot would not be able to develop. For example, in the original book, Chabashira Sae just said that the man wanted Ayanokouji Kiyotaka to drop out of school, and Ayanokouji Kiyotaka was skeptical He completed the uninhabited island test, and here I directly pointed out the identity of Ayanokōji Kiyotaka, so he has to believe it if he doesn't believe it.

Next, answer some questions from readers.

1. Question: Does Osamu Dazai have supernatural powers?

Answer: Yes, but there is no supernatural power in this school, so Osamu Dazai can't use it, and even if Osamu Dazai uses it, it can only illuminate the surroundings, not as bright as the bald Superman. (Because of the use of supernatural powers, there are special effects of light)

2. Question: Will Houtaro Oreki play in the future?

Answer: You will appear in the fourth volume, and you will drop out of school in the fifth volume.

3. Question: When will Osamu Dazai join Class D?

Answer: Probably also the fifth volume. Originally, I planned that in the tenth volume, Sakayanagi Yusu and Dazai Osamu would cooperate to expel Haruki Yamauchi, the black nabe king, and then Dazai Osamu would join Class D.

But I was thinking, book friends may get tired of watching a routine all the time, and more importantly, my brain cells can’t think of too many wits and plans with only the protagonist alone. It just so happened that a book friend suggested that Let me add a new character, so I just let Oreki Houtaro appear, and the fifth volume makes way for Dazai Osamu...

4. Question: Is the author male or female?

Answer: Hideyoshi

5. Question: What is the current relationship between Ayanokōji Kiyotaka and the protagonist.

Answer: It is a real use

6. Ask. Will the author send out special codes of characters like the original work?

A: It depends on your mood.

7. Question: In addition to Oreki Houtaro, will there be more characters from other worlds?

Answer: Yes, but it will not integrate the world view, and will only appear as a cameo, because I can only write realistically in this book, and I will not write other things at all.

8. Question: About how many [-] characters can you write?

A: Of course, I will write as far as the original book is written. Isn't it 13 volumes now, so I estimate that it will be at least 100 million words.

Let's stop here, and the protagonist's personal points at the end of the third volume are about 2500 million.

Regarding the rules of renewing, change it to reward 1000 coins to add a chapter, 2500 recommendation tickets to add a chapter, and October tickets to add a chapter. As for the rewards of the previous book friends, I will include them all, but I I also want to see if this update rule can work, so the previous rewards from several book friends will be transferred to next month. [I owe 5 updates to the book friends who gave rewards before (I want to cancel the rules of adding updates, because the results are too bad)]

In addition, please actively comment and give feedback, and I can make proper revisions.

The group number of the last book friend group is 1103982995.

Finally, I still want to thank the book friends, whether it is genuine or pirated, thank you for liking my work, thank you all! (Also please come and make a favorite, order a subscription %>_<%)

PS: Secretly tell you, as long as you sign in seven days a week, you can have 50 points of valuable coins every week. If you don’t want to recharge, you can get some coins from this aspect to support the author. (?˙o˙)?

Oreki Houtaro escape bonus

やらなくてもいいことなら, やらない.やらなければいけないことならhand short ni

Don't do what is unnecessary, and keep things simple.

This is my motto, I have been pursuing energy conservation from beginning to end.

but.

I found out that everything changed when I got to Advanced Nurturing High School.

Because its slogan is that as long as you graduate here, the school will solve the employment problem afterward.

This really appeals to me, who is an energy conservationist.

So I got into this high school.

But the strictness of this high school is far beyond my imagination.

It pursues an extremely strict power supremacy.

This is too contradictory to my energy conservationism.

Here is neither a gray campus life nor a rose-colored campus life.

It's a campus life like blood.

The strong live, the weak die.

Although it is a bit exaggerated, it is like this in this school.

and so.

I want to escape.

Ichinose Sail Wave Lost Premium

I've been paying attention to him ever since he was pulled into the student council by Vice President Dazai.

When Xiao Qianxun confessed his love, the first thing that came to mind was Vice President Dazai.

I found a bandage in Horikita-san's hand.

I asked her, is this from President Dazai?

She said yes."

You may not believe it.

I felt lost for a moment.

I don't know why I should be lost for such a tiny thing.

Could it be that he has something to do with Vice President Dazai?

Why is this?

Horikita Suzune self bonus

I don't know what's wrong with imitating my brother.

Because my brother has always been powerful by me since he was a child, so as long as I imitate my brother, I will definitely be very good.

but why?

Why both my brother and Osamu Dazai told me to find myself.

I don't see what it would be like to get back my 'self'.

However, he said a word to me on the cliff; "Try to entrust something, anything... to look forward to what may happen later, there will definitely be."

Will there really be everything?

But I can't find someone to entrust to now, so let's put it aside for the time being.

just for now...

Sakura Airi's Sprout Bonus

After the special exams started, the school life in my heart changed drastically.

Because they live on an uninhabited island?Because it is a cruel life that I have never experienced before?

No, that's not the case.These are small things.

I stared at the boy who was walking in front of me in the dense forest.

Why?I don't know the reason for asking this.

When he came back to his senses, his eyes were already on him.Obviously, nothing like this has happened so far.

The distance that can be reached by reaching out.Try reaching out a little bit.

However, that is absolutely unreachable.So close yet so far away.

Suddenly, the boy... Ayanokōji-kun stopped, turned around,

With my heart beating faster, I quickly withdrew my hand.No, didn't you see it?just now.

"Take a break. After all, it will take some time before we reach our destination."

As if seeing the fact that I was starting to feel tired, he said softly, looking for a place to rest.

Although he felt ashamed of his lack of physical strength, he was able to think of me like this, so happy.

Standing there not knowing what to do, Ayanokōji-kun found a big tree, walked over to it, waved away the soil and leaves with his hands, and after tidying it up so that he could sit down, he sat down.

While there was packing out of my place, I couldn't help but make a sound.

I want to sit next to Ayanokouji-kun, but I'm so shy...

Sitting there was equivalent to staying close to him.

Maybe, Ayanokouji-kun intends to sit there comfortably by himself, if I force him to sit there, will he show an unhappy expression?

Thinking of this, I really couldn't sit beside him.

Although I planned to find a place to sit down properly, the surrounding ground was uneven, and it seemed that it would be painful to sit down.Woohoo, be patient.

In order not to be hated, I sat down a little away from the place.Butt hurts.

Although he tried his best to pretend that nothing happened, but Ayanokouji-kun kept staring at this side, he must have seen through it.

"Sit here"

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