I don't even want to impose my own ideas on the readers and guide you to read this work.
However, compared to these concerns and meaningless reserve.I don't want everyone to think that I am an arrogant author who doesn't bother to communicate with readers.
So, just at the end of the paper, I would like to respond to some of your comments.
As I said before, I am reading everyone's posts and comments.
Among them, readers often see that the second volume is too "long".
Of course, I also know that this is the reader's opinion, dissatisfaction and even criticism of the second volume.However, the more such voices there are, the more confused I become.
What is the concept of "long"?
Are you talking about my water?or not...
If not, there is no need to point out "long" specifically.
Because, it is also difficult for me to accept it as criticism.
Judging from the content of this volume, there are a total of five acts in the original plot, compared to only one act in the first volume.
Therefore, the length is different, which is actually quite normal.
Perhaps, some people don't like to read long stories, but long stories are also attractive enough.
In the sufficient space, there are enough information, clues, foreshadowing and other things, and then cooperate with some branch lines entangled with the main line to slowly display, concentrate, and gather these things.
Taking this volume as an example, it is long enough to show a large part of the important core of the book "The Witch".As a result, a sufficient worldview has been expanded.
So, just saying long... I really don't know what emotions to deal with.
I don't know if it would be better to divide this volume by each scene and present it in five volumes.
Next, it's about the ending.
I can understand that some readers feel anticlimactic about the death of the villain BOSS.
It is also understandable that I have been contending with wisdom all the time, but in the end it was brute force to solve the complaints and so on.
In this regard, I can only make some pale excuses.
In fact, it is not difficult to see that apart from the actions of the protagonist, there is no way to deal with the boss who would kill the protagonist group in the original plot.
And the way to kill this villain boss is not a trump card that appears suddenly, a mechanical descendant or something like that.
It is the "Death Bird", "Sword of Destruction" and Riber's "Special" that have been gradually paving the way since the beginning of the volume.
Therefore, when the conditions are complete, but it is not well displayed, it should be a problem with my writing method.
I am sorry for my lack of ability.
Maybe I should describe it more, at least give the villain BOSS a tense death.
Still, think on the bright side.
The more understatement and ease of the villain's death, the core idea of "they are not really a big deal" can be shown.
Demonstrating the correct values that evil cannot prevail...
Um...
Let's just argue here.
In short, it makes everyone feel dissatisfied, and at least [-]% of it is my problem.
Therefore, I will learn my lesson and strive to present a better third volume.
After all, the second volume is not the end of the book. After Earl Riber successfully killed the witch, what kind of a series of things will happen is more worth looking forward to.
Then we will see you in the third volume, and I hope you will continue to support us.
ps. The next chapter should be about New Year's rewards and communication group related information.
Volume [-]: New Year's Reward & Exchange Group
Happy New Year!
Happy New Year!
Congratulations!
Congratulations!
Hey hey hey hey hey hey...
Okay, let's get to the point.
According to the rewards in October and November, I should have added eight more chapters, but as you can see, I still owe eight chapters.
I thought about whether to lie about some particularly long chapters, but they are actually two-in-one chapters to perfunctory.But after thinking about it, it seems a bit too stubborn, so forget it.
I will return these eight chapters slowly.
In the new year, the reward standard is the same as before.
2000 recommendation tickets, 100 monthly tickets, 10000 rewards, whichever condition is met will be accumulated once and added for a period of one month, and the blade will be counted into the monthly ticket.
I can actually justify the fact that I have added eight chapters to add updates.
Something has happened in my house!
Hmm...had a cat.
Young kittens are more labor-intensive than imagined.
It just tortures me every day.
Later, I thought it’s fine if I can’t let it torture me every day, I will torture it too.
So I got another one.I hope the new cat can torture the aborigines.
As a result, now it's two cats tormenting me together...
At this time, someone is about to ask.
What does your having a cat have to do with my not seeing Gaga?Such a reason, do you think I will accept it?
Well...
This is not completely irrelevant to everyone.
Because, if you want to see what the cat that tortured me looks like (showing the cat), you can join my new penguin colony.
The group number is 156804447.
So, waiting for everyone to come--
Volume Three: Chapter 150 Nine, A New Beginning
"As a loyal player of "The Witch Screams", which line in the game do you like the most?"
"What's the matter, so serious today?"
"It's hard to choose this question, because I like all the lines (witches)."
"+1."
"+1111."
"Indeed, each line has its own charm. I don't know if 'Jian Zhang' is a line, but if so, I should like Jian Zhang the most."
"Oh? Is that the short story, "Sleeping Winter"?"
"I like it and I like it too! That interlude is really poignant."
"Aren't you talking about your favorite thread? Why are you talking about chapters?"
"Off-topic is part of the group chat (no."
"Recall carefully, isn't there almost nothing happening in the inter-chapter? Why do you like it so much?"
"How should I put it? It's the atmosphere? It's serene, peaceful and so on."
"It's because everything happens, it's just some daily fragments, so you like it?"
"When I saw the daily life in the chapters, I always felt closer to those characters. There was a feeling of, 'Ah, they really live in that world'."
"It's better to say that it's thanks to the group of important characters from each line gathered together like evil stars, and nothing broke out. Except for Zhang Zhang, the line that gathers characters from all lines is the 'Academy Line', and then that line. ..”
"Forget it..."
"If it is placed in other galges, "Sleepless Winter" will be directly skipped without any ups and downs, right? But it will be popular in "The Witch's Sorrow", which is incredible. "
"This is where the production team chicken thieves come in, they are really good at it!"
"Among the extremely intense plot lines one after another, there is such a place like a safe haven interspersed. Everyone will be intoxicated in it."
"Yeah, the scene of the protagonist of 'Traveler Line' falling asleep on the bench with the soft BGM left a deep impression on me. Let me know, these characters are really different. easy."
"So, isn't "The Witch's Scream" a galgame? Why does every line have to be so intense? Is it not good to use a peaceful strategy strategy to conquer girls? Everyone is going to die..."
"It's easy to say, if "The Witch's Scream" is really an extended story like the "Academy Line" of the peace version, everyone is intertwined with each other in the noble academy, and have mutual affection. Would you buy such a game?"
"Hmm... It's true that everyone's vision is too high now. This is especially true for veteran GALGE players. In addition, "The Witch is Sorrowing" is for all ages, no matter how beautiful the heroine is drawn, there can't be a plot that you like to hear and see. You can only win with the plot. Therefore, if it is mediocre, this game should die in mediocrity.”
"No profit leads to no extinction!"
"Speaking of senior GALGE players, haven't we seen that guy for a long time? He's the guy who calls himself 'GALGAME Master' and pushes almost a single-line game to turn over the strategy."
"Du·ren·tong."
"Who knows? Isn't that what groups are like? Everyone may suddenly disappear one day and go to reality as a present."
"I hope that the current charging will explode (sorrowful."
"Unknowingly, I'm digressing again. I want to talk more about the chapter."
"Then let's talk about Jianzhang. By the way, there is another special feature of Jianzhang, that is, the earl is rarely active in Jianzhang!"
"The activity of counting ghosts is just to be alive... Is your requirement of the count already so low?"
"It's also the first time the Earl's fiancée has appeared, right?"
"It's the 'original' fiancée!"
"Ah, it's Shan Shan! Sure enough, topics related to the Earl will pop up in Shan Shan."
"What the hell is 'Single' called..."
"The earl's former fiancée, in the first chapter, looked like a model of aristocrats. I didn't expect that she would look like that in the 'Academy Line'..."
"Yeah, when I played the interim chapter for the second time, I felt a little embarrassed looking at her."
"Compared to the Earl who is a villain, but full of style. The former fiancée is basically a buffoon who appeared to set off the protagonist."
"Obviously the drawing is quite beautiful..."
"Yes, yes, so it would be great if "The Witch Screams" is the best work!"
"Get down!"
"I'm going down too!"
"Eh?"
...
...
Early winter season.
The Knights of Greenwater City held a grand funeral.
Since the first foggy night fell, a total of 61 members of the Knights sacrificed, and this day was a belated sleep.
As a specially invited witness, Ribel also attended the funeral on this day.
Thus, two wheelchairs were lowered from the classic black carriage of the Campret family.
Brigitte and Riber sat on it, one left and one right.
"Mr. Riber, let's compare who can reach the venue faster! Hehe, I have a long wheelchair, and I will not lose to anyone except in turning the wheelchair!"
"..."
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