Watching such a scene, Riber was really moved.

Some people try their best to obtain this illusory and pure witch power at all costs.

But the people around him (Antoinette? Unfamiliar with him) are willing to give this power easily.

"After that, you are the fifth pillar, Merian."

The ray of light surrounded the phoenix chick who thought it was impossible to return to its human body.

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On the other side, Ywenna watched all Riber's actions so far, looking at the very charming Lily, Antoinette who is no longer a doll, and the strange red who seemed to be born on the alarm bell. girl with hair.

She just felt that her eyes seemed to be spinning constantly.

No, it was because after she made the request, she confirmed the possibility of all of this, which led to so many...so many!

She is obviously... obviously thinking about it!

And when the last light dissipated and the blond maid who was as petite as her appeared, she watched Ribel's reaction.

Evanna was convinced that her eyes were really moving in circles.

...

What a familiar figure?

With his eyes wide open, Ribel stared blankly at Merian in front of him.

He stroked the back of his head and scratched his cheek, seeming a little at a loss.

Although he didn't cry, Riber felt a choking feeling.

It was as if he had returned to the beginning, the morning after he had just come down from the chandelier and spent a long night.

As soon as he opened the door, standing in front of him was an inconceivably radiant, delicate maid lady.

It wasn't until this moment that Riber realized.

In his heart, perhaps unknowingly, he was deeply imprinted by Merian.

Therefore, he is not even willing to compromise on himself.

That's why he said such unsightly words during the reunion not long ago...

After all, Riber is also different from when he just recovered his memory.

So, a little flustered, he quickly adjusted.

And what he saw was Merian's gesture of constantly pulling herself to cover half of her eyes, which was no better than his reaction.

With a long sigh of relief, Riber spoke solemnly.

"Long time no see, and first meeting, Merian."

Merian raised her head, pursed her lips slightly, and paused for a moment.

Then, as if giving up, he showed a soft smile.

"Long time no see, and first meeting, Riber."

No matter what the past has been like, we don't know what the future will hold.

But at least at this moment, it's not "Claire" and "Shane" standing here.

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The third volume ends.

Volume [-]: Summary of Volume [-]

Hello everyone, see you again.

In this volume, I have made some revisions to the "features" of other-dimensional conversations that appeared at the beginning and end of previous volumes.

Because a reader once responded that it was a play.At the time, I didn't pay much attention to it, but at the end of the volume, I found that one second the protagonist was still confronting Fear, and the next second it became a conversation among SD group friends...

Hey, it's quite a show.

So, I made a decision against my ancestors!Focus this part at the beginning of the next volume.

So, let's talk about this volume.

I originally thought that there was a lot to say in the summary, and there was nothing to say.

But it's not like that...

First of all, let's start with the often discussed "rhythm" issue.

Since I often see such comments, I wondered for a while whether there was something wrong with the rhythm.

But just looking at the title of this volume, I found that it doesn't seem to be the case.

From the very beginning, the core of this volume was directly named. After more than a dozen chapters, the visit of the original witch came, and after a while, the return of Merian with Egged, followed by the opening of the restaurant. Opening, the appearance of band members.Then, as if being pushed by one hand, I went to the performance to participate in.

Is there something wrong with thinking that it will end like this?

Then something really went wrong.

There is no need to elaborate on what follows...

In short, in terms of narrative rhythm, although it may not be called particularly compact.However, the corresponding nodes or events are not too long apart.

Therefore, the issue of "rhythm" may still be above the performance.

It's like clearing an RPG with a long process. When readers think they can finally find a save point to take a break, they find that Axi, this save point is actually a trap!

In the book, I felt the feeling of the trap game of the first kill...

And about that... I don't know what to say.

In fact, it is not that the author is independent, nor is he opposed to cool articles, nor is he trying to separate himself from other online articles.

Instead, the author will only write novels in this style.

Perhaps, some readers earlier may have seen through the author's work list that before writing this book, the author also published a book on Maomao.

The character of this book, um... how should I put it?

It took about [-] words to write a prologue.

Then even the signing of the contract failed, and it ended in despair.

This book came out after that. Since a preface of 200 words is not enough and the format is too small, then write a preface of [-] million words! (No

So it is not the author who is having trouble with the readers, but the author is sometimes having trouble with himself.Because what the author is good at is telling stories in this way...

As for the second volume, I was actually a little afraid to say.

Because the first volume is somewhat suspicious of "cheat the shark".

To describe it, the author obviously intends to open a noodle shop, but there is a sheep's head hanging at the door of the shop.

But by the third volume, the sheep's head has been removed long ago, so it has completely become a noodle shop.

So, sometimes I look at readers who are used to consuming in the nearby barbecue restaurant and ask why I haven’t eaten barbecue in chapter [-], and my skewers are still not good after chapter [-]?It's all sixty chapters, what about noodles?Eighty chapters and still making soup?It's been a hundred chapters, why haven't these seasonings been used yet!Wait for the question.

What the boss can say and what he can guarantee has always been quite pale.

By the time around chapter 150, when all the noodles are served, it has all internal organs and everything... and so on.

Customers obviously don't want to hear me say this.

Although, even customers who want to eat barbecue have been taking care of the business of my noodle restaurant, and I am very grateful.

However, when customers use the benchmark of a barbecue restaurant to ask for my noodle restaurant, I am also quite helpless.

If the boss really knows how to cook barbecue, it would be nice to be able to use some barbecue as a soup occasionally, and everyone is satisfied.

But the boss really only takes a long time to make a bowl of noodles.

And such a suggestion is actually good, the saddest thing is that when the guest left, he came with a bad review.

I don't know how much negative reviews will have an impact, but there will always be some impact and loss...

If the operating policy has been set long ago, high-intensity control and evaluation would be fine.

But this noodle shop has been open for more than half a year, and it seems too late to start now.

At most, I can only try it next time the noodle shop opens.

Although I don't know if this explanation is acceptable to customers, but it is indeed the limitation brought about by things like style and ability.

Of course, the owner of the noodle shop is not completely rotten, nor is it completely unable to absorb the suggestions to improve the formula.

For example, I originally planned to finish this volume at the end of last month.The final number of chapters is around 130, which is similar to the second volume.

However, after seeing the suggestion, I really don't feel the need to rush that much.And some roles, some things, can indeed come in handy, and indeed have value, but being brought out for a meeting also shows some problems.

Therefore, the length is appropriately extended.

I hope this improvement will make customers a little bit more satisfied.

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In addition to the overall affairs of the third volume, I still want to talk about the eighth chapter of Chapter 290.

Generally speaking, I will not get involved in such debates, after all, everyone has their own opinions.It's like the disgust of some readers towards Professor Aimo that the author can't understand.

But for that chapter, the author showed that he didn't want to back down.

It's not that there is a problem with the author's mentality, but as I said in the comment area.

Just seeing that a person is "disrespectful" does not matter why such a situation occurs, and does not even look at what the person said.Simply mocking, ridiculing, and reprimanding a person's struggling posture is really a terrible thing.

Just a few chapters ago, through Charlotte's words, it was all about the situation where the protagonist would be taken away at best.

However, even if he doesn't suffer much harm, he can escape from the vortex of events.The reason why the protagonist is so unacceptable, even acting more fearful than death... You can really think about why it is like this.

At the moment when so many people have been helped and so many people have been rolled into the chariot.After the protagonist is taken away, the truly unbearable loss is not on him.

Of course, after some readers' points, I also understand that those readers and I do not view this matter on the same logic.

It can be said that some readers are unwilling to read it, because they have completely jumped out of the story itself.It was because I was particularly dissatisfied with setting an obstacle in the process of rising.Even, this obstacle has been crossed in the past...

Therefore, the author also figured it out, and has no intention of continuing the stalemate.

I will delete the indirect posts and comments where I participate in the debate.

Of course, if you are not satisfied, you can post it again. As long as it is not straight-ball insults or extreme content with malicious distortions, the author will generally not delete the comment.

Also, I don't know if you have the same doubts.

That is our protagonist, not to mention not growing at all from the beginning to the present, but even regressing.

Because there is no such blunt narration in this article, and Riber is not the kind of character that sells himself.

So, let me say a few words.

Riber is always growing.

Compared to the first volume, Ribel just wanted to get rid of the troublesome sisters quickly.

Compared with the beginning of the second volume, Riber just wanted to eat and lie down, and passed the evaluation period in a low-key manner.

Compared to the third volume, Riber, who was caught in a strange circle, blindly wanted to solve everything by himself.

At that time, Riber, who didn't care about his dignity at all, but just wanted to take up that responsibility, was indeed growing up all the time.

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Finally, let's talk about the update.

In fact, the author also wants to update more, who will make it difficult for the manuscript fee?

I don't know if any readers understand that if the number of updated words exceeds 15 words every month, there will be a half-year bonus.

It’s about writing for six months and getting one month’s manuscript fee, that’s it.

Then the monthly update volume of this book is about 13 words.

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