Poverty story after Tokyo actress

And Caihua was stunned for a moment, looking at the comic book that Kujo had patted under her hands, she felt quite pity in her heart.I really like the style of this work...

"What doesn't suit your appetite?"

"It's just... the plot is relatively... monotonous." Jiujo expressed to Caihua tactfully, although he wanted to say that the plot was basically the same as the same.

"Then...this book? The painting style is also good...and the story is also quite good..."

Saying that, Caihua gave Jiutiao another booklet.

This book is indeed much better than the previous one, there is not such a brainless plot, and the relationship between the characters is also handled well, the plot

But compared with the humanistic care and thinking in Fei Li, it's not at the same level at all.

So after reading it, Kutiao just nodded and commented: "It's not bad."

"Ah... Kujou, you really have a high vision... I thought you liked BL, but it seems that you like stories." At this moment, Caihua also understood that Kujo didn't like Kiman, but rather It's just that the plot of Fei Li happened to make Kujo like it very much.

"Well, I read a lot of novels at home, so I like the plot more. As for the painter...er...hahaha, I don't understand these, anyway, I can read them all."

"SO ga... If that's the case, then I can't recommend Kujo to you by type, but by manga artist."

"According to the cartoonist?"

"That's right, the style of the cartoonist affects the quality of the work. For example, the authors of the cartoons I recommend to you all have that template in their works. Authors who can draw stories naturally draw beautiful stories, and authors with good drawing skills You can only stick to the painting style, and the plot will just pass."

"Eh? But Ayaka, didn't you say that an artist who can't tell a story can't be a manga artist?"

"That's right, so most of the authors of these BL comics cannot be regarded as orthodox cartoonists, they are all underground cartoonists, and they can't be serialized in serious publications. Top publications like Shonen Jump and Xiaoxiaoguan don't have theirs. figure."

"They can only hang out in offline comic exhibitions and online forums, and draw comics such as notebooks, and this kind of cartoonists are mixed, and an artist like me can make a living in it."

As she spoke, Caihua gently brushed her short hair, with a rather proud expression on her face.She is still quite confident about her painters. Although she is relatively conventional compared with those painters who excel through painting style, she is more than inferior than inferior.

And Caihua is indeed quite prestigious in the circle, and her illustrations are well-known. Although the comics are not satisfactory, there are still many fans who are willing to pay for her exquisite painters.What's more, Caihua is still a beautiful girl, a beautiful girl painter or something, isn't that enough! ?

Caihua's words naturally aroused Kujo's curiosity, so he asked, "Then, Miyano-san, have you ever drawn manga?"

"Well... I have drawn a few books..."

"Can I see it!?"

"Ah? This..."

How should I put it, Caihua really wanted to refuse Jiutiao's request, but... the little vanity in her heart started to make trouble again. After all, who doesn't want to be praised by others?Especially acquaintances!

So, after weighing it up, she finally agreed to Jiutiao's request, and gave Jiutiao the one with the highest evaluation among the comics she had drawn, and looked at Jiutiao with a rather expectant expression.

"This is the one I drew...it's my debut work." Caihua said pretending not to care, but in fact, after she drew more than a dozen books, this manga is the only one that can be recognized by readers other than the painting style. Let me praise the manga for its advantages. Even fans ridiculed its previous works as products that are basically the same as toilet paper except for the artistry.

And even so, the plot of this book was not completed by Caihua alone... because the plot is the product of Caihua's mother, Miyano Ruri's changes!

So much so that Caihua herself fell into deep self-doubt. She has reached middle age, and her mother, who is usually a bit natural, is actually better than herself in writing plots...

But these are not important, the important thing is that I can't lose face in front of the monitor!So, this time, it was rare for Caihua to pray to Miyano Ruri in her heart.Mother!You must be strong in changing the plot!

"Ah!"

At the same time, Miyano Ruri, who was sitting in the living room chatting with Makoto, suddenly sneezed, which surprised Makoto.

"Hey! Auntie, do you have a cold? Do you want me to find some medicine?"

"Ah, no, no, it's just that the nose is a little itchy ~ it's not a big deal. Let's continue talking, Makoto, can you tell me more about Jiang Bai's interesting stories in the crew."

"Ah... well..."

Makoto smiled wryly and nodded. She actually didn't want to talk more with Miyano Liuli. Because of Jiang Bai's debts, she didn't dare to reveal Jiang Bai's current situation to Liuli too much.But now she can't do anything, because Jiang Bai is still busy preparing meals in the kitchen.

Faced with Miyano Ruri's curiosity and inquiries, Makoto could only bite the bullet and chat with her. This was a very headache for Makoto who had no social experience.The inventory of her experience in the crew with Jiang Bai is almost exhausted!

What will we talk about next?Said that Jiang Bai is suffering financially now, when she met her, she was squatting in a metal house and selling goods online?Or has he abducted Jiang Bai to his own home, or even shared the same bed?

Speaking of the former, Zhenqin felt that her aunt would kill Jiang Bai, and speaking of the latter, she felt that her aunt would kill herself!

She is looking forward to it now, can Jiang Bai's rice be cooked faster, if it is slower, I am afraid I can't hide it!

And when Zhenqin was praying wildly in his heart, Jiang Bai's voice came like the voice of salvation.

"Dinner is ready~"

Chapter 65 Let's be a school puppet... a manga artist!

How to get Kujo to comment on Ayaka's manga?Let him use one word to describe it... It's extremely clichéd...

It's not that Kujo is welcome, but the plot drawn by Caihua's manga is really hard to compliment.

This short manga by Caihuahua is a small love manga. It tells the story of the hero and the heroine from acquaintance to acquaintance. This kind of manga can be read as long as the plot is not outrageous.

However, the heroine and heroine portrayed by Caihua are very different. Simply put, the character creation is a mess, and there is no conclusion about the character. At one time, the heroine is self-reliant and self-reliant, at another time, the heroine is weak and predictable, and at another time, she is willful and savage.

The personality is as changeable as split personality, and the behavior is completely illogical, and the male protagonist is similar. At one time, he has no opinion and cannot make a decision, and at another time he attacks with a straight ball. There is no unified behavioral tone before and after.

It feels... It feels like the plot is not written by one person.

However, Kujo couldn't tell Caihua the bad things about these plots, so he could only say euphemistically: "Ah...the story...is lacklustre...the painting style is not bad, but the plot...is a bit off.

"Jump?" Caihua's face froze, and she asked, "How to escape?"

"It's just...it doesn't feel like it was written by one person..."

"How do you know!?" Caihua couldn't help asking back.

"what?"

"Uh..." Caihua's face froze when she realized that she had slipped her tongue suddenly, and could only tell the truth in embarrassment: "Okay...it's true, I asked someone else to write the plot together..."

"Ah, that's no wonder. There are many contradictions between the characters in the content. For example... this part and this part, the way the male and female protagonists speak is very different, it's like a split personality..."

As he said that, Kujo found a pen and sketched in the lines of the manga, and Caihua leaned over to take a look, and the content of the sketch was exactly what he hadn't changed and what his mother had changed.

"How should I put it, the former's lines are quite naive, while the latter's lines appear to be more mature, but they have a great conflict with the lines set up by the previous person..." Kutiao explained while sketching, and Caihua's face was full of listening Awkward.

This is the first time someone bluntly said that the lines he designed were childish. Even after reading it, his mother just said that Caihua's writing is great, but there are some places that can be improved.

Kutiao, who didn't understand the situation, naturally spoke bluntly, which made Caihua feel ashamed for a while.

"Is the writing... so bad?" Caihua muttered softly.

"Eh..." Asked by Caihua, Jiutiao suddenly realized that the plot was written by Caihua in front of him. Thinking of his previous evaluation, he couldn't help but said with embarrassment: "That... is actually not very bad! Many lines are only It needs to be changed!"

"...Change it? How?"

"Take these two places... If you want to unify the character design, you have to change it like this..." As he said, Kutiao changed the way of speaking next to the line box, then handed it to Caihua, and asked, "How is it? Is it more natural?"

Caihua took the manga and looked at the lines on both sides. Although Kujo just changed the way the characters speak, there is no difference in the content, but there is no doubt that the content of the dialogue after the change is indeed more consistent with each other.

I didn't expect the squad leader to hide his secrets, and he could write lines so well... For a moment, Caihua's eyes lit up, and she looked at Jiutiao with a cute face, and her mind couldn't help but move.

The most troublesome thing when I draw manga is the lines. I don’t understand what the characters will say at all, but Kujo can easily write lines that fit the character’s personality.If I can let Kujo write my lines for me...

In an instant, Caihua felt that she had found a treasure!

"Student Jiutiao!"

"Eh? What's wrong, Miyano-san?"

"Come and help me draw manga! Let's be a manga artist together! How about it!? Okay?" Said, Caihua held Kujo's hands with bright eyes, and asked him excitedly.

"Eh!????"

Just when the two of them looked at each other, the door of the room was suddenly opened, and Miyano Ruri enthusiastically shouted: "Children, let's eat... eh?"

At this moment, in the eyes of Miyano Ruri, Caihua is holding Kujo's hands and eyes shining close to Kujo's face, very intimate.Therefore, it is obvious that Miyano Ruri... thinks wrong...

"Ah, it looks like mom is bothering you a little bit~ You guys continue~ Caihua~ Gabbard!"

After finishing speaking, Miyano Ruri smiled shyly and supported her face to close the door, leaving Kujo and Caihua sluggishly confused in the wind... Realizing that her mother had lost her mind, Caihua quickly got up and backed away The door chased after him and shouted.

"No! Mom, don't think about it!"

As for Jiu Tiao, he scratched his head. He simply said that he couldn't understand the development at all... But he heard a message clearly, and it was time to eat...

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"Really, mom, don't think about everything you see..." On the dining table, Caihua was sitting on a tall chair with her rice bowl in her arms. Under the table, her volleying legs were swinging back and forth.

"Hahaha~ hey hey~ it's my mother's fault~" Miyano Ruri laughed, and then stuffed a few pieces of meat into the Jiutiao bowl, making Jiutiao quickly thank you politely.

On the other hand, Jiang Bai looked at the two curiously, with a curious expression on his face.

"What's wrong? What happened?" As he spoke, Jiang Bai picked up a few pieces of fried broccoli and sent it to Caihua's bowl.

Caihua looked at the meat in Jiutiao's bowl, and then at the broccoli in her own bowl, her complexion instantly turned bad.

"Hmm... Ou Nei-chan ~ I want to eat meat..."

"Eating more vegetables is good for your health, and broccoli is delicious."

"Broccoli...delicious..." Looking at the emerald green broccoli in the bowl, Caihua's facial features shrank in an instant. What's so delicious about green vegetables...the taste is bland and not good...but she looked at Jiang Bai's eyes Under the gaze, Caihua finally chose to eat it.

After entering the mouth, her expression brightened. Broccoli is mostly used in Western food in Japan, and the method of cooking broccoli in Western food is to choose to boil it in salt water... If it tastes delicious, there will be a ghost...

For Jiang Bai to do it, it is natural to choose fried broccoli. Compared with the soft and rotten broccoli boiled in salt water, I don’t know how much better it is.The crispy and thick taste of this stir-fried broccoli instantly captured the taste buds of Caihua.

"Oh vaguely!"

"It's delicious~ My sister didn't lie to you~"

"Well...not...not bad..." Caihua maintained her dignity and replied stiffly, and at the same time stuffed a few pieces of broccoli into her mouth, the crispy and not stiff taste was very comfortable to chew, Let Caihua swing her legs happily again.

"Sister did you do it?"

"correct."

Caihua looked at the dishes on the table. Compared with the monotonous dishes in the past, today's table is really full of color, fragrance and quantity.

"It's all done by you, sister?"

"uh-huh."

"..." Caihua looked at these dishes in surprise, and she was at a loss for words for a while, she asked Jiang Bai: "Sister, why did you go outside, how did you learn to cook so many meals? It can't be to go Have you become a cook?"

"Um...it's been a while..." Jiang Bai touched his cheek and muttered, this is really true.

"That's it...it feels like you have changed a lot, sister...you used to say that you didn't want to do this kind of work..." Caihua murmured. The old sisters always expressed at home that they would be successful in the future, but they didn't want to do the hard work. The dry type.

But after going out to live for a while and coming back, there was a big change. Not only did he have good cooking skills after returning, but he also became a cook outside?

God, she really wants to rub Jiang Bai's face, suspecting that there is another person hidden behind this skin, and not only the cooking skills have improved, but also the personality has changed a lot. How Jiang Bai used to spoil her How come, big fish and big meat are all given to her little sister.

But after coming back this time, my sister actually told her to eat more vegetables, which is good for her health... her temperament is also very big, and she has become more calm than before. I can see it.

But now, Caihua couldn't see what Jiang Bai was thinking at all... But Caihua didn't think much about it, she just blamed it on her sister growing up after living outside.

Although the growth rate is the same as taking hormones...

"Then, sister, are you still working as a chef outside?" Caihua asked Jiang Bai curiously.

"Ah, no, the chef is very tired, and my cooking skills are not up to the level of being a chef." Jiang Bai smiled and shook his head, but Caihua glanced at the dishes on the table and said, you believe you ghost .

"Then sister, what are you doing now?"

"Well...don't tell outsiders, my sister is now an actress~"

"Actor?" Caihua's face was startled. First of all, she was surprised that she could be an actress with her sister's IQ?But soon, she remembered the changes of her sister outside, and looked at Jiang Bai's delicate face and plump figure.

Well, indeed, it's a pity that she doesn't look good enough to be an actor, especially for Naoko, who used to rest her head on it and felt super comfortable!

Thinking of this, Caihua looked at her barren body again, and a sense of resentment arose involuntarily. They are obviously sisters, why...why the gap is so big...

Thinking of this, Caihua turned grief and anger into appetite, and frustratingly took a few mouthfuls of food, Jiang Bai was puzzled, what happened to this girl?It seems very unhappy to hear that I am an actor.

"Don't you like me being an actor, Ayaka?"

"Well... no... just..." Said, Caihua glanced at Jiang Bai's Naozi, and then immediately put aside, this kind of eye-catching thing, as long as it is placed there, is a full-screen psychological aoe!

"Just what?"

"It's just... I just don't know what kind of play you're playing, sister. I'm more curious..."

"Ah, this one, I'll keep it a secret~" Jiang Bai said with a smile to Caihua.

"Hey, don't say it if you don't say it, it must be my sister, your acting skills are too bad, don't dare to say it~"

"Cough cough!"

After Caihua said this, Makoto, who was touching and eating, couldn't help but coughed.