Poverty story after Tokyo actress

So even though "Amazons" is an online drama that is not included in the TV series, even if it is still just a project, but having such a name here means stability!

Seeing Zhenqin's determined and proud expression, and the little twitch that was coming to praise my thoughts, Jiang Bai couldn't help laughing, she pinched Zhenqin's cheek and smiled: "Wow~ Si Guoyi~ Zhenqin is really amazing~ I'll reward you~xiumi~"

After complimenting Zhenqin, Jiang Bai kissed Zhenqin's cheek like a superficial kiss, and this kiss immediately made Zhenqin so excited that he couldn't find the north, and began to laugh silly.

Seeing her excited appearance, Jiang Bai's mouth slightly curled up, and he looked at the plan of "Amazons".

Although Xiaoling Jingzi is a very good script designer, it is really for Jiang Bai to evaluate "Amazons".Then Jiang Bai can only say that the plot of "Amazons" can only be ranked in the middle of Yasuko Kobayashi's works, and it cannot be regarded as an amazing work.

This is a work with very obvious advantages and disadvantages, and it also shows the common faults of Kobayashi Yasuko's works, that is, emphasizing modeling instead of logic, emphasizing conflicts instead of foreshadowing, and emphasizing characters instead of setting.

Many of Yasuko Kobayashi's works have this common problem. She is a script artist who is good at character design. Each character in the script has distinctive characteristics, which makes people unforgettable.However, she is also a ruthless person who is willing to sacrifice plot logic in order to implement the character design, which is very obvious in "Amazons".

The plot of "Amazons" has some places that obviously rely on setting and logic, which also leads to the main reason why this work has mixed reputation.

Moreover, Yasuko Kobayashi’s generally participated series are full-length. However, "Amazons" is a short TV story, with thirteen episodes in two seasons, and a total of only 26 episodes. However, the stories of two generations are told separately, and the length is not enough for Yasuko Kobayashi. play.

Therefore, the rhythm of the first season is obviously too fast.

It is also necessary to create group portraits, show the hero’s struggles, and leave room for fighting scenes. Thirteen episodes are obviously not enough. This caused the hero to know his own life experience, and he has not had time to struggle to figure out whether he is a human or an Amazon. The finale is coming, and the fastest speed really makes people overwhelmed.

And this has also led to "Amazons", the biggest problem is nothing else, but the protagonist Yu Mizusawa, because the plot is too fast, resulting in insufficient shaping, and there is not enough groundwork for Yu Mizusawa's growth and transformation.

From the very beginning of the Virgin to the following: No one said there was anything wrong with cannibalism.The overly wavering determination and inconsistent behavioral principles really make it difficult for the audience to empathize.Kobayashi obviously seems to let Mizusawa Yu show growth, but it is a pity that the episodes are not enough and the energy is insufficient. The jump is too fast, and the growth has become ooc.

On the contrary, the male second Ying Shanren is quite outstanding, with consistent values ​​and unshakable determination. For his own principles, even his wife and son can be ruthless to kill, so that this role, which is obviously a supporting role, has become a real popularity. oThe main character.

The rhythm of the second season is slightly better, because the first season of supporting roles has been shaped, and the new story only needs to tell the new protagonist well.

However, this is enough to show Yasuko Kobayashi's ability to control the plot. With so many characters, he can tell a logical and distinctive story in thirteen episodes. Although there are many problems, it is still a story. Excellent web drama.

And the role plan that Makoto got was none other than Izumi Chiha, the partner of the second male Takayama Ren.This character is very popular in "Amazons", because of the subtle but sweet relationship between him and Ying Shanren, and the love tragedy of being killed by Uncle Ren himself in the end, which is remembered by the audience.

But in fact, the role of Izumi Chiha is a typical Kobayashi-style character, who emphasizes characters and despises settings.Because of this role from beginning to end, Kobayashi Yasuko did not explain her background setting.

Where did it come from?What is the purpose?What's the past?Didn't say anything, but used a lot of pen and ink to describe the interaction and love between Sister Qianyu and Ying Shanren.

This is similar to Reese, both of them blur the background setting of the characters, and pay attention to the behavior of the characters, using the behavior of the characters to shape the characters instead of using the settings to shape the characters.

It looks really sloppy, but Gao Ming is really smart.Just ask, who doesn't want a lover like Lacey?Who wouldn't want a wife like Sister Qian Yu?As for who they were before?does it matterunimportant!I only know that they are good women!

Therefore, Jiang Bai must give this role a try.Moreover, Jiang Bai also plans to find Kobayashi Yasuko to communicate about the script.After all, there are many plot logic problems in "Amazons" that can be avoided. Jiang Bai plans to talk to Kobayashi to change the script or something...

Um?You said I swore I would never do any extra work other than acting?Tch, superficial, don't you see what Sima Yi said: The way a husband lives in the world is the art of adapting, how can he be paranoid?Being a human being is all about adapting to changing circumstances!

"Okay, I want this role, did you say when the interview will be?" Satisfied with the role planning, Jiang Bai asked Zhenqin curiously.

But when it came to this, Zhenqin stopped talking, instead she tried to hide the panic in her heart with a calm expression, and seeing her react like this, Jiang Bai thought for a while and thought that this document was actually a plan, and suddenly understood in his heart the reason.

She said with a wry smile: "Makoto... the planning of this drama series, in fact, it hasn't even started the preparation stage, right..."

"Well... Ah~ I can't help it~ There is no shortage of people in the Knight TV crew and they don't give my family face at all. The only people who are missing are these dramas that are still in the planning stage... Uh~ If Jiang Bai is not happy If so...how about I find someone to ask other crews?"

Zhenqin crawled into Jiang Bai's arms and acted like a spoiled child, and began to rub against Jiang Bai's stomach. Seeing Zhenqin lying on the sofa and writhing in her arms, she I couldn't laugh or cry immediately.

She lowered her head and pinched Zhenqin's cheek, and said with a smile: "Idiot, why am I unhappy? I am already very satisfied that you can give me such a plan. Yasuko Kobayashi's script, I am too happy to be happy."

"Well~ Anyway, I have a lot of spare money now, and the popularity has already been established. In a few days, if there is no accident, there should be advertisers looking for endorsements. By then, there will naturally be no shortage of money, and there will be no major problems in repaying debts. so……"

As Jiang Bai said, the corners of his mouth turned up slightly, and he lowered his head and asked Zhenqin: "Do you want me to rest for a few weeks and accompany you, Zhenqin, as a reward for you..."

Having said that, Makoto's eyes widened, and the excitement and excitement could hardly be held back.

But Jiang Bai added another dose of surprise, she touched her chin and thought for a while, and added with a slight blush: "These few weeks~ I am willing to do whatever Zhenqin wants me to do~ After all, it is already so Now that we have established a relationship, what we should do can almost be done..."

"Suck!!!!"

As soon as this sentence was finished, Makoto felt as if her heart had escaped from her chest in an instant and rushed straight to her forehead. She played it hundreds of times in a row in her head, making her dizzy and losing her mind, and then from head to toe. He slammed back and forth several times from his feet to his head, unable to return to his original position for a long time.

At this moment, she suddenly felt that the cat and mouse is not an exaggerated animation, but a realistic animation!The moment the heart beats, the heart will really jump out of the chest with excitement!She jumped up from the sofa suddenly, and yelled wildly.

"Wuhu! Good!!!!"

On the other hand, Jiang Bai looked at Zhenqin who was excited like a child, and the corners of his mouth could not help but tilt slightly. Well, I really paid too much attention to work during this time, and some ignored Zhenqin. Slow down the rhythm and accompany her. It's also pretty good...

ah?You asked me before I said that I didn’t have enough money, I had to hurry up to make money to pay off my debts, and I didn’t have time to waste time?Oh, superficial, don't you see what Sima Yi said: The way a husband lives in the world is the art of adapting...

Chapter 110 Don't Leave Me

"In the past few weeks, whatever Makoto wants me to do, I promise..."

Lying on the bed, Zhenqin kept thinking about what Jiang Bai said to herself in the living room at night. When she thought of her saying such words to herself, Zhenqin couldn't help but smirked and twisted into a quilt wrapped in a quilt on the bed. maggot.

And Jiang Bai was taking a shower in the bathroom at the moment, listening to the sound of the shower coming from the ear, Zhenqin waited expectantly.Didn't Jiang Bai say that he can agree to whatever he wants to feel in the past few weeks?

So~ hehehe, come tonight~

Thinking of this, Makoto's hand holding the quilt tightened again, and twisted again excitedly.Since Jiang Bai is willing to agree to whatever he says, then~do you want to make an inch of it and have fun~

Ask Jiang Bai to put on the purple lace pajamas I gave her before, and it is best to wear earrings. When the time comes, I will bite Jiang Bai's ears, pry out her earrings with my tongue, and then stick out my tongue in Jiang Bai's vacant ear. cave reoreo～

Then Jiang Bai like this is definitely not shy, that kind of blushing is not good, but because he can’t resist or violate what he said, the look of refusal and welcome~ Hehehehe~ The idea is so shy, so good Shame~ But I can't stop at all!

Wow no no no!I feel like my nose bleeds are coming out!

Makoto's brain was full of ideas. When she couldn't stop thinking, she thought of the place where she felt ashamed, and hurriedly buried her head in the quilt with joy. Just when she was forgetting herself, a soft voice came: "What are you thinking ~ bury your head in the bed and laugh like that~"

"Huh!?" Zhenqin's head suddenly turned cold, and she quickly put away her shy thoughts about Taozi, then pulled her head out of the bed, then calmed down and looked back at Jiang Bai.

Although it is beautiful to think about it, but if Zhenqin really asks Jiang Bai like that, she might not dare to do it if she has ten guts. It is a typical example of lust but no courage.So one second I was still thinking about opening a peach garden in my mind, and the next second I no longer dared to have any unreasonable thoughts.

only……

When she looked back at Jiang Bai, her brain seemed to be down, because...

The most important thing is that at this moment, she is wearing that lavender lace underwear!Because the lace pajamas were attached to Jiang Bai's skin just after taking a shower, the lavender color could not cover Jiang Bai's skin, and the slight flesh color outlined Jiang Bai's Miaoman's figure.

Jiang Bai, who looks like this, really expresses the word pure desire to the fullest!

Looking at Jiang Bai in this appearance, Zhenqin suddenly understood at this moment, what is called seeing and not being seen, is art!Obviously, I have seen Jiang Bai naked for a long time, but... now this Jiang Bai in pajamas is much more charming than naked!This kind of state is hazy through a layer of tulle, but it seems to be clearly visible... so provocative! ! ! !

"Jiang Bai... Didn't you say... you don't like this set..." Zhenqin swallowed her saliva and asked Jiang Bai. Although she said that she was very excited at the moment, on the surface, she still held back her excitement and sat Pregnant not disorderly.

And this thought Jiang Bai naturally saw through at a glance, she smiled lightly, lifted the shoulder strap of the pajamas, gently picked it up, and moved the neckline of the pajamas down a little bit, and suddenly, the wonderful scenery seemed to be like Zhenqin A few more secrets were revealed.

Just this one action made Zhenqin feel that her nose seemed to be unable to hold on, and a blush instantly climbed onto Zhenqin's cheeks.

"Hahaha~" Looking at Zhenqin's shy look, Jiang Bai let go of the hand holding the shoulder strap, clapped his hands and laughed.

"Kawaii~ Makoto. Obviously you were the one who encouraged me to wear this outfit at the beginning~ Why are you embarrassed to put on this outfit now~ Is it possible that you only talk about it, Don’t dare to actually do it~”

Speaking of this, the corners of Jiang Bai's eyes bent into two crescent moons, and a sly and charming smile like a fox appeared on her cheeks, making Zhenqin feel inexplicably teased, and at the same time, there was a trace of inexplicable fear in her heart...

This is not right... Shouldn't I be the one doing the attack?Shouldn't it be me asking Jiang Bai to the side?Why now... it seems that I am the passive one! ?

"Uh...cough cough cough, I...I'm just, surprised, yes, a little surprised." After giving herself a reason, Zhenqin raised her momentum, and then asked Jiang Bai face to face: "It's just, hehe~ I didn't expect Jiang Bai that you are such a person~"

Said, Zhenqin also crooked the corner of his mouth, stretched out his hand to lift Jiang Bai's chin, made a smile that he thought was very offensive, and continued to Jiang Bai: "Obviously so elegant, mature, stable, knowledgeable and courteous, behind the scenes It's so..."

Speaking of this, Zhenqin suddenly shut up, because, how should I put it, that word is not very elegant... Will evaluating Jiang Bai make Jiang Bai unhappy...

"Soo~?"

Just when Zhenqin was struggling, Jiang Bai had already said that word with a smile.

Zhenqin, who was robbed of the conversation, was startled, and then coughed slightly in embarrassment: "Uh...cough cough..."

But Jiang Bai didn't seem to stop attacking, she continued.

"Astringent~?"

Said, Jiang Bai moved closer to Zhenqin...

"Want~?"

Jiang Bai approached again...

"Or……"

This time, Jiang Bai had already stuck in front of Zhenqin's cheek, lightly poked Zhenqin's nervous face with a little excitement, and asked with a chuckle: "Do you think~ I'm too frivolous?"

"No, no, no!" Zhenqin shook his head and responded: "Impossible! Jiang Bai, you are the best! How can you be frivolous! And...even if I am frivolous, I don't hate it..."

In the last sentence, her voice obviously lowered several levels, as if she was whispering again.

This answer made Jiang Bai laugh again, and then she lay gently in Zhenqin's arms... In the past, Zhenqin liked to lie in her arms, like a cat, acting like a baby to her, towards her She seeks caresses...

This time, it was her instead...

"Hmm~" Jiang Bai snorted softly, lying on Zhenqin's lap, stretched lazily, and rubbed his head into Zhenqin's arms.

And looking at Jiang Bai who is acting like a cat like a cat at this moment, Zhenqin feels that her head is down again, this...this...isn't she dreaming?Jiang Bai... lying in his arms... rubbing against each other... acting like a baby... and making that soft sound...

Ahhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

At this moment, Makoto's inner self has completely become Mr. Incredible who will become the light. If there is a little more stimulation, he may directly transform into Ultraman, holding Jiang Bai and flying to the M78 Nebula.

"Huchihuchihuchi..." She panted heavily, trembling her palms, gently stroking Jiang Bai's still a little wet hair, it was cool and soft, and it felt really wonderful...

The scene at this moment is very similar to the scene I used to forget myself and fantasize in the bed... It's just that I asked Jiang Bai to do this and that in the fantasy, but the reality is that Jiang Bai took the initiative to do this... Could it be that Jiang Bai turned out to be like this people?

"Jiang Bai..."

"Ok?"

"I thought...you would never act like this... On the bright side, you are always quiet, elegant, and knowledgeable...I thought you would be a very conservative...quiet girl... ..."

"Well~ so... don't you like the way I look like now?" Jiang Bai stuck to Zhenqin's arms, tilting his head and asking with an inexplicable smile.

"No, no, no! How is it possible! I... I'm too happy! How could I not like it!"

"Hehehe~ That's fine~ Since Zhenqin likes it~ What are you still struggling with?" Jiang Bai stretched out his fingers and gently scratched Zhenqin's chin, which made Zhenqin couldn't help humming softly, It made Jiang Bai burst into laughter.

Then, she looked at Zhenqin and said, "Zhenqin, as long as you like it, you can make me whatever you want, whether it is pure desire, pure, intellectual, or quiet...as long as you like Zhenqin, I It can be whatever you want it to be…”

"It doesn't matter if you're above or below, whether it's attacking or receiving, it doesn't matter if you make me shy, or you make me seductive, I can satisfy all the looks you want..."

Jiang Bai's eyes were not affectionate, and he didn't even show any obvious love, but what Zhenqin felt inside was the unshakable sincerity, which was like a confession, but more like a promise!Promise that she only belongs to her own promise!

"Actually... there's no need to be like this...it's too..."

"Too much?"

"No, no, no... too... It feels a bit too, absolutely... It feels like Jiang Bai has become my property..." Zhenqin said with some embarrassment, although she also hoped in her heart that this woman could become own belongings...

However, the rationality in her heart told her that a person cannot occupy another person's freedom like this, at least, for Jiang Bai, she dare not do it...

And Jiang Bai smiled lightly and asked: "Is it not good?"

"!?"

"Let me be yours, won't you? I don't care."

"……not give a damn about?"

"Hmm~ After all, love needs to be paid for in return, doesn't it?"

"...However, Jiang Bai, don't you think the price is a bit too high for such a payment?"

"Is it big?"

"..."

"I don't think so..." Jiang Bai raised his hand and poked Zhenqin's cheek, and continued: "Because, I believe that Zhenqin will never let me down. So ~ the more I pay, Zhenqin Naturally, your reward will be greater ~ I will give everything to you... Then, Makoto..."

Saying that, Jiang Bai stopped poking, and turned to stroking Zhenqin's cheek, and Zhenqin couldn't help but get nervous, not knowing what kind of request Jiang Bai would make in return...

"I ask you..." Zhenqin couldn't help holding her breath, but in the end, Jiang Bai lowered her voice and asked with a hint of pleading: "Can you confess to me like you said...don't abandon me forever, okay?" ?"

"..."

Chapter 110

BGM of this chapter: "Mystline" by: Nujabes

The night was filled, and Zhenqin was lying on the bed with Jiang Bai in her arms. Jiang Bai's refreshing body fragrance was teasing at the tip of her pen, scratching her heart, but until the end, Zhenqin didn't really decide to do anything to Jiang Bai.

Because, for some reason, when I heard Jiang Bai ask: "Don't leave me, okay?" That sentence, an inexplicable sadness rushed into Zhenqin's heart.

She suddenly felt that she had never really seen through Jiang Bai's heart. She looked at Jiang Bai lying lazily and weakly in her arms like a kitten. The charming and dependent appearance was the acquaintance of Zhenqin and Zhenqin. I haven't seen it in more than a month.

She instinctively regarded Jiang Bai's usual external initiative, decisiveness, and maturity as Jiang Bai's true face. She thought that Jiang Bai's appearance was deliberately made to please herself...