At the end of the Tang Dynasty, it was a feudal town, but in Western Europe

However, Ador's words made him feel a little strange. Is this Ador playing a fantasy role in her secondary school, or is she really a gifted girl who is extremely smart?

"I know what you're wondering about."

Raising his head suddenly, Feng Sen looked up, and then couldn't help looking at Ador. He just heard a female voice whisper these words in fluent Chinese.

Feng Sen almost thought it was a hallucination.

Swallowing a mouthful of saliva, Feng Sen asked tentatively: "Odd changes and even remain the same?"

"What?" Ador's usual cute and naive look appeared again, "What is the reason?"

"It's nothing, it's nothing." Feng Sen frowned. He glanced at Ador suspiciously, and then looked around suspiciously before sitting down again. It must be a hallucination.

After recovering from the strange feelings before, Feng Sen carefully watched the expression on Ador's face, and soon found a trace of self-satisfaction and joy in her seemingly serious eyes.

"It turns out that you never pamper yourself... Then what happened to that time you and Volard went hunting secretly?"

The serious look stopped immediately, Ador opened his mouth wide, his eyes slanted upwards, and muttered: "That time..."

Under Feng Sen's teasing eyes, Ador said anxiously and coquettishly: "Okay, my mother taught me these things, are you satisfied? You big silver devil! Sister Gisela is a nun, I like her very much, now it's all right, Gisela and I can only be rivals in love."

"Little girl, you almost tricked me into it." Feng Sen couldn't help being a little amused, for a moment just now, he almost believed Ador's words, thinking that she was really a hidden genius girl, "I and You are just brother and sister, it is impossible to like you."

"I'm so good-looking, I will definitely be a hundred times prettier than Sister Gisela and that Arvo in the future!" Ador said in a coquettish voice with his hips akimbo.

"Let's talk about it later." Feng Sen reached out and rubbed Ador's head, "Where are you going from now on, or are you going to run around with your father?"

Ador pushed Feng Sen's hand away at once, took two steps back, covered his head, and looked defensive: "I'm going to Aachen, and it's all your fault. If you weren't injured, I wouldn't have to look for you. If I didn't look for you, I wouldn't be ordered by my father to go back to the court in Aachen."

Speaking of this, Ador's eyes flickered suddenly: "So, don't get hurt in the future, do you understand?"

"Saxony is in such a mess, there is no reason not to be injured. At most, it is less injured." Feng Sen handed the box in his hand to Ador, "Here, this is a Christmas present, and it is also my apology, specially prepared for you."

"Really?" Ador took out a Tang-style bustier dress from the box, and it was obvious that this dress was more than one size larger than Ador's figure, "Specially, prepared for me."

Smiling embarrassingly, Feng Sen introduced: "You can wear it when you grow up. This is a treasure from the Tang Dynasty. It is very precious. It is called [Golden Butterfly Wearing a Flower Dress], and it cannot be customized."

Ador's eyeballs rolled around in their sockets, and she waved to Feng Sen: "Feng, come here, I have something to tell you."

The moment Feng Sen approached, Ador suddenly held his face, and kissed him on the mouth like a chicken pecking at rice. Before Feng Sen could say anything, her face turned red quickly.

Turning her head, Ador picked up the box on the ground and left along the corner in a swift motion, while her clear and pleasant voice like a wind chime was still shaking in the air: "When I can wear this dress, you will definitely like me!"

Watching that agile figure go away, Feng Sen touched his lips with mixed feelings, and he took out a gold coin from his pocket, which was a gold coin given to him by Ador in Weldon back then, and he always wore it on his body.

In the distance, half a waning moon hung in the night, and when he looked up, he saw a stormy sky. Soon, he would set off and return to Hamburg, and the Duke of Saxony was just the starting point.

Feng Sen couldn't help but let out a long roar, which aroused countless crows and birds:

"Saxon, here I come!"

Summary at the end of Volume [-]

1. Problem

You may not believe me, but this is indeed the first book I have written on the shelves. I have written it before, but most of it is for fun. If you sign a contract and write less than 150 words, you will be an eunuch. This time, I really take it seriously.

Although it is really difficult to balance between studies and codewords, I had to interrupt twice in the middle and was late many times, but fortunately, I defeated the lazy cancer and persisted without eunuchs. Congratulations, congratulations.

But persistence alone is useless, but I have always believed that code words alone cannot improve the level. After coding the words, you must think about it in order to make progress, and the summary at the end of the paper is used to do this. At least I think so.

So, after finishing the last chapter of this volume, I used the remaining time to write the summary at the end of this volume. After reading it, I found that there are still [-] words, so you guys should treat me as a double update.

(Since you want to post free chapters, you have to post one that is less than 1000 words first. You may only see 1. Problem, refresh the chapter to see the whole article)

2. Summary

As the title of this volume says Earl's Vision, the goal of this volume is the story of the protagonist becoming an earl from a group of rebels, and then becoming a duke at the end of the volume. It is a very simple single-line plot. Judging from the current progress, this goal has been completed Good, but there are still many problems.

The technical summary begins below.

First, the positioning is not clear. What is this book about?At the beginning, I had no idea. I only had a rough story about the warlords of the Tang Dynasty coming to Frank to make a big splash in my mind, and I wrote a crude outline based on this. But this is not the standard of positioning. The standard of positioning is what is the target group?

My positioning has never been clear, and I have been vacillating on this point. Is it going to be serious and high-quality?Or is Shuangwen going for entertainment?The different groups of readers attracted by the two are as important as the three families of Pokémon, but it is a pity that I choose both, and I went to the wild to catch a dung beetle.

In the mid-term, I once wanted to completely refresh the culture, such as giving the Jingnan soldiers [healthy] and other traits, and then a thousand Siris supermen flew over the walls and smashed through Europe.

But that's too royal, and I can't accept it myself, and this article has set a relatively realistic tone from the beginning, and set this realistic style. If you change the style rashly, it is estimated that a large number of readers will be lost, so I can only write in embarrassment.

It’s just that I want to go up and write high-quality goods, but my ability can’t keep up, and I want to write cool articles, but I can’t keep up, so this is the most embarrassing, I can’t help it, I’m stuck here.

The wrong tone cannot be corrected. This is a strategic mistake. Unless I overhaul the previous article, I can only continue to write in this state of not going up and down.This can be improved in the next book.

Second, the structure is chaotic.What is the main character going through?What is the protagonist's goal?How did he develop through farming and construction step by step?This is the core point of Tiantianwen, in other words, it is collection and cultivation.I know it's there in my text, but I have to say, it's not obvious.Warning: The next part will involve some cool deconstruction and spoilers, which is a bit irritating, so don't watch it if you care.

【Warning Warning】

Cultivation and collection are the most primitive desires of human beings.In the farming text, developing selling points is mainly about building territories (developing one’s existing infrastructure, talents, and ideas), and collecting selling points is mainly about expanding territories (robbing other people’s infrastructure, talents, and wealth).

Here comes the question, where is the coolness?

When people collect cards, there are two happiest moments: [-]. Getting new/key cards.Second, get together a set/fetter.

Therefore, readers must realize from the very beginning that they can summon Shenlong by collecting all seven dragon balls, but I did not do this. I just let the protagonist open up wasteland and develop farmland and pastures for no reason. During this period, there is no sense of expectation.

If you really want to change it, it should be the protagonist planning the future development route, discovering the potential of the land, and then predicting how much wasteland can be opened up in the future and how much profit you can get. However, facing these problems, one, two, three, four, five, and then solve the five problems one by one Or solve them all at the same time, and then succeed in farming at the end to reap benefits.

Concretely speaking, there are five tasks, complete task one, get fragment one, and the first fragment brings benefits XXX (or not), then task two, get fragment two, collect all five fragments, and synthesize!What I want is to synthesize the pleasure of this moment.

And writing this process in an interesting and reasonable way is my goal in the next chapter.

【Warning ends】

Third, the characters are not fresh.This also stems from the question of setting.

What is your impression of Charlie?The iron-blooded king, passionate and heroic but yet cruel and resourceful, is a contradictory image. This is the goal I set, but what can really be reflected is not obvious, but a bit capricious.

However, Charlie and Zhenhui are already relatively prominent characters.Think about Wang Sima. At the beginning, he was a cowardly and down-and-out literati, so he watched the scene of Zhang Shicheng fighting with Han Shizhong timidly (Chapter 3).

And what about Zhang Shicheng?No character?What about Han Shizhong?There is still no character, just two ordinary generals, readers don’t even know anything about them, I can only use PS at the end of the chapter to fill in and enrich the image. In the beginning, this was actually a helpless move. (However, the effect was very good and decided to expand)

The most important thing is Feng Sen's personality setting. He was already a mature character from the very beginning, a cold-blooded and pragmatic military leader. Although he has a little warmth of the modern world, he has essentially been assimilated by the contemporary warriors.

In other words, his growth potential has reached its limit, and other people's goals are his starting point. Where does this go?Characters must be alive, there must be changes, from cowardly people to strong people, from timid people to brave people, the price and sacrifices paid during this period, the process they go through, is what makes them like real people key.

But Feng Sen didn't have this process. He was like an absolutely rational machine, strong and mature, with a grown-up personality that was difficult to change.

For this problem, I have a solution: although the people who have achieved great things from ancient times to the present are down-to-earth practical realists, they also have a strong sense of idealism.In other words, a hero can at most be Cao Cao, and a hero can be Li Shimin and Zhu Yuanzhang.The goal of the second volume is to turn the protagonist from a hero into a hero.

Hope this is correct and hopefully I can get it done.

That’s all for the big problems, and of course there are many minor problems, such as the writing style (a large number of meaningless particles are used: suddenly, again, also, and, conveniently. The picture feels monotonous, etc.), and the use of stalks Sometimes it is blunt, the writing is dry and not interesting enough, the textual research is not reasonable enough, there are a lot of typos and wrong sentences, and the big world view is not developed, which leads to readers' lack of understanding of the medieval world.

Due to space limitations, I will not talk about it.I will read everyone’s opinions in the book review area. Of course, due to the asymmetry of information between the two parties, I can’t write all of them according to what you said, but I basically read all the book reviews and comments you posted one by one, and I will copy them critically.

(I have seen those indirect posts about the Hedgehog and Cat God Sect, and I will try to come up with a non-dramatic nickname, such as Neige Sect or Garlic Leaf-eating Koala)

3. Outlook

In the next chapter, it is a volume where the protagonist flexes his muscles. According to the plan, the protagonist will usher in a period of peaceful development, and then still go through war and expansion. This volume will last for about ten years, ending with the end of the Battle of Avar, the protagonist becomes the king, and then starts with another big event.

I estimate that this volume will be about 80 million words. At this time, the protagonist is about to step onto the big historical stage of the Middle Ages and stir up the situation in Europe. I hope I can write it well.

Then, this book has been written for more than four months, and it was put on the shelves at the end of September. I remember that the average order was [-] when it was put on the shelves. In December, the average order was about [-].

Compared with those bosses who frequently order tens of thousands of times, this [-] average subscription is very surprising to me. I thought that the [-] average subscription is the end of the writing. Thank you for your optimism and support, and also thank you for your help. , gave me a lot of recommendations and attracted me a lot of readers.

Watching the average subscription increase a little bit, it’s like watching the progress bar of something while playing a game. It’s a pleasure. Thank you for your support. Although there are congenital problems, I will not let it go bad. I will try my best to write it well and finish it.

At the end of the next volume, my goal is to reach [-], I hope I can do it, go!

ps: Come to think of it, there are also ps in the summary. This ps is the if line, which is my useless case. In fact, many of them are better than the current one (because I only thought of it when I found the problem when I wrote it later), let's have fun.

The softness of the if line is also Han. Feng Sen and the Jingnan Army came to Avar and became a part of the Avar Kingdom, resisting the invasion of the Frankish Kingdom, and suppressing feudalization in peace.

The best plan of the if line, Feng Sen participated in the Battle of Avar in 792, and later became the Earl of Vienna, relying on the Bohemian iron mine and the Eastern Empire trade line to make a fortune.

The Seris Superman of the IF line, Feng Sen took a thousand Siris gene primarchs and cut down all the earls and enemies all the way, went to Rome to seize the bird throne, and forced the Pope to convert to Confucianism.

Let go of those witches on the if line, Feng Sen, Jing Nanjun and a Saxon witch got married. After the two parties got married, the witch found that she had awakened superpowers, but she needed Jingnan soldiers to replenish their demons, and everyone resisted the Frankish invasion together.

I am Rome on the if line. Feng Sen and the Jingnan Army traveled to Anatolia to resist the Arabs' attack, and finally took Irina's position in a coup.

These IF lines, at the end, may be written as a side story, and you can leave a message behind which one you like to see. I will choose one or two to write a side story.

★ Duke Conquest★

Chapter 194 Go Home

When Feng Sen's army returned from Paderborn along the Weser River, it was already the end of January in 784. The cold and cold weather had gradually moved away, and the number of sunny days gradually increased with Feng Sen's march.

At the estuary of the Ulster River, Zhenhui took Chen Chongyi and other officials, and stood by the ferry, smiling, waiting for the triumphant return of the army, while the family members who were waiting for the return of the soldiers were also waiting by the ferry, eager to see through.

Riding on a horse, Feng Sen got off the boat along the boardwalk at the pier. He raised his head and looked at the busy port. Several small white flowers were fluttering in the wind between the rocks. Several quaint and hard hilltop Central Plains houses rose up near the port. Willows along the river danced with the wind. Not far away, there were several large warehouses still under construction.

For a moment, Feng Sen almost thought he was back in Datang, if there were no blond people wearing animal skins.

It's cool to soak in the hot springs in Paderborn, but it's still not as good as this little doghouse of mine. Feng Sen had a smile on his face, and finally, I'm back.

A month ago, after Christmas, Feng Sen did not return to Hamburg immediately, but set out again according to Charlie's order.

In Bremen, Feng Sen divided the soldiers into two waves. One wave returned to Hamburg with more than 5000 Saxon prisoners of war. Feng Sen did not have so much rations, and the remaining wounded soldiers also needed medical treatment.

The remaining two to 3000 people followed Feng Sen.

Accompanying Charlie, Feng Sen's army toured most of Westphalia, and at the same time brushing their faces, they also suppressed the remaining small groups of rebels.

In the end, Feng Sen and Charlie were garrisoned in Paderborn, and after soaking in the hot spring for half a month, they finally got the final result of the Saxon War:

King Siegfried of Denmark admitted defeat, and while allowing the Heavenly Father to preach, he ceded a large area of ​​territory in the south of the Jutland Peninsula, including Kiel, to Arvor, recognized Arvor's lordship, and compensated Twenty thousand solidas worth of furs, slaves, grain, iron ore, gold and silver—to Charles.

Feng Sen couldn't get a dime.

Earl Theodoric ascended to heaven in this battle. Because of his meritorious service in suppressing the rebellion, he was named the Earl of Toulouse. According to the assumption, Pepin was named the Governor of Barcelona. With [-] hussars, he was going to Italy to meet the Pope and confess his interests.

The Duke of Hardard was unlucky. Not only was he sprayed bloody by Charlie, but he was also ordered to pass the title of duke to his son in advance, and he only received the title of earl.

Widukind's two legs were broken, and after accepting Charlie's shaving, he converted to the Church of the Heavenly Father. Now he is locked up in a monastery in Paderborn, where he eats and drinks well and is under house arrest.

The Frisian rebels were surrounded by Astolfo and secretly surrendered after being besieged. Bubo's son Elard fled to Ireland without a trace.

And the battle of Oupolite is also over. Under Charlie's coercion, the Villetti who snatched a happy one announced that they would withdraw from Oupolite.

The last male bloodline of the Eupolite royal family, Rakor came to power and became the king, but he was only five years old, so Princess Lyudmila and Minister Zinovac were still co-regents. However, due to the previous war, the interior of Eupolite had been split into several parts, and it no longer had the power and wealth it had before.

Taking a deep breath of the musty air, Feng Sen smiled: "Hamburg, I'm back."

Surrounded by guards and officials, Feng Sen's army marched forward from the newly built rammed earth road. Both sides of the road were surrounded by soldiers' families, villagers and businessmen who watched the excitement.

After repeated battles and long marches, the soldiers present all took on a new look. Their formation may not be so neat, but their spirit of killing has far surpassed the messy formation before departure.

Beside the roadside fence, men, women, old and young, tall, short, fat, and thin, were all leaning on the fence and looking into the road. A chubby boy, led by his grandfather, old Hans, leaned on the fence with both hands, and watched the tall and straight warriors in iron armor and holding spears pass by, his eyes were almost rounded.

At the forefront of the team, three or five bards, accompanied by the sound of gongs and drums, sang loudly about the achievements of the Jingnan Army with their beautiful voices.

When they came to the gate of Hamburg City, the former Saxon prisoners of war were working hard to build the outer city wall of Hamburg City. When they saw Feng Sen, they also showed reverence.

At the gate of the city, which was halfway under construction, Feng Sen waved his hand. After a burst of semaphore and horn sounds, all the soldiers stopped, and the singing and metal friction also stopped.

Under the sun, the shining silver helmets formed a long silver road. At the end of the long road, Feng Sen turned around. He looked at the group of tired and energetic soldiers with a smile on his face.

"Gentlemen, the war is over, you can go home." Feng Sen took off the helmet on his head, "After you go to the barracks to hand over the armor, you can go home. After you go home, wash your clothes and body. Three days later, I will hold a reward meeting in the old place, don't forget."

"Here!" The soldiers shouted in unison with joy and exhaustion on their faces.

After bidding farewell to the officers and soldiers, Feng Sen walked towards the mansion alone with a few entourages and guards. He has been fighting outside for more than two months.

Walking on the concrete boulevard in Hamburg City, Feng Sen was somewhat moved. This is a boulevard that can accommodate four horse-drawn carriages at the same time. In the nearly three months since he left, the most important infrastructure work in Hamburg City was the construction of this boulevard in the city.

On both sides of the main road, you can clearly see the newly built small courtyards. These small courtyards have the obvious characteristics of Saxon wooden planks and iron nails. However, due to the convenience and waterproofness of the tiled roofs, most of them are covered with a layer of tiles, and there are various monsters in local mythology on the eaves.

Most of these small courtyards were built by the local minor nobles and priests who moved from Lüne. They were basically forced to convert to the Heavenly Father Religion. However, Feng Sen was not too harsh and still allowed them to carry out their religious ceremonies and activities in the wild in the name of "custom".

These nobles, large and small, will constitute the citizen class of Hamburg in the future. They are rich and educated. Even Feng Sen heard from Zhenhui that smart people have been asking everywhere for ways to enter the Hamburg elementary school. Some of them Many clever little nobles even began to follow the little officials as apprentices.

I have to say that these lower-level nobles are dangerous, and they are really easy to use.

Continuing to move forward, Feng Sen saw the Zhongyongfang where Yabing lived before, and on the other side of Zhongyongfang, another folk workshop is under construction, which will be the residence of those high-ranking bannermen. Hui named it Zhongxinfang.

Most of the houses here are Tang-style, with the Xieshan top with far-reaching eaves, the bronze wind chimes hanging on the tiles, and even two stone lions in front of Zhang Shicheng’s small courtyard. The carvings are not bad... Hey, the carvings are really good.

Holding the rein, Feng Sen turned his head and said to the attendants behind him: "Go, move these two lions to my house, I didn't put the lions, but he put them upside down, I think he can't tell the difference between the big and the big. "